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khushi

@khush1432

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW Mani di... Awesome update...

Baarish and Shanak 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Maar dala...

Thanks a million for ur lovely update...

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preiti

@preiti

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

Wow Manita.An update and so quickly.Thanks,It was awesome and now my heart's beating faster ❤️too while i read the story.Too good..Keep Updating.Hope it would be a never ending story of Love and Romance.❤️

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Shanaksansar

@Shanaksansar

Groupbie

Posted: 12 years ago

hi Manita,

This is the first time am writing here...I love your Tres...that's what got me hooked on to your style of writing. With MRM you have a completely different Shaan and Khanak, am so falling in love with them.

Especially since monsoons are my favorite, I don't know why but sohte huwon ko bhi jaga deta hain. That is where Khanak finally opens herself completely and that probably explains the kiss. It was spontaneous and the walls that she had built around her due to her tumultuous childhood finally collapsed. We all have our own demons and it needs a strong push from the outside to let yourself go.

It is changing Shaan too. From being a completely carefree and someone who has always been shy of commitments he is now metamorphised to a loving and caring individual. That is what love does to you. You look beyond the physical aspects and are on a totally different level which often is hard to explain.

Look forward to see the next step in their blooming relationship.

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destinylove

@destinylove

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update shanak in the rain kiss maar daala😊

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purvi08

@purvi08

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

mani di loved the update

especially this line-Paradise would be something similar to this

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Urooj

@rooj-i

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Manita!

I am loving your FF...such a typical classy romantic love story...

Guy falls for the girl, the girl runs away from him and accuse him for taking away her peace. The girl harshly pushes him away and the guy realizes she hates him and he backs off. The guy confronts her and walks away. She realizes she is in love with him and it confuses her more. She wants to be with him but is confused about life. She doesn't know wat to do and by chance they meet again and he starts seeing something more in her eyes. He is feeling attracted to her again.

Wow...the last part is sooo filmy. something that I always want to do.

also i notice ur FF have some part of ship too! lol I am loving it!!!

Thanks Mani for the update!

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

Okay I really wanted to know if Khanak makes a Move ...

Hence ...

I read the last line First 😆

And BINGO ... You gave me what I wanted !!!!

LOL !!

Manitaaa ...

I can visualise this entire journey ...every single moment of it !

You describe it sooo welll ... You are AMAZING !

A Class Apart !

Loved Shantanu's worry about she misunderstanding him for the wrong turn ...

Loved Khanak's Understanding and slowly Opening Up ...

*THUD* for the eyelock when he had her in his arms !

GOSH !!!!

That was Intense ... and LifeChanging for Shanak yet again !!!

THANKYouuu Sooo Much for Making it a Overnite Stay ... RAIN !

Haaayee .. It always reminds me of the Shower Scene !

Loveee you loads Manitaaa ...

Update Sooon ...

Let the Kiss and the Moments after it take our breath away !!!

PS: Update TresPro re ! Pleasee !!!

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_sweet_

@_sweet_

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

Wow... Romantic update...khanakne shaan ko kiss kiya...ohh..omg...im very exicted...kiss denek baad aage kya hoga...?shaan kya khega...kya khanak shaan ko btayegi ki wo shaan se kitna pyaar krti hai... 😳 😍

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey mani thx for the fast update...😊.

it was fab👏 ... as other i was ded after reading it couldn't comment at nite n i was so dead that i woke up late so 1st thing is to comment on update... i luved it each n every line every moment.

magical just like shanak... shanak and rain creates magic... infact "PARADISE WILL BE SIMILAR TO THIS" it entirely suits the situation.

as always i visualized and i was lost... u r killing me with the updates
here goes shaan's dialogue "MAARNE KA IRADA HAI KYA"😉

it was a lovey dovey... mushy update☺️
finally she kissed... eagrely waiting for the next part.😍
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Ujjwala

@Ujjwala

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome gal!! 👏
Loved it ...

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