~:Mere Rang Mein:~ reply Pg 69 :) - Page 19

Fabulous update Manita 👏⭐️and I have read the recent ' Tresspassers' update too😳...   Edited by The_May_Rose - 12 years ago

Haila... abhi pehle SK cloud se neeche bhi nahi aa saki and another update... Sigh... here I float back again...

Manita, another excellent update. Enjoyed it immensely. Awaiting your next update...

u were just fantastic...i read ur updates n i think that r all great...keep the great job up...= )

hey manita it was fab... it was actually SHANAKLICIOUS update 👏

our shanak creates magic and ur writing makes it more luvly

offering her ride...on human grounds😲
observing her on stairs, arranging things😉
want to feel the pain... ur writing actually makes me feel the pain😳
 and the most cutest moment he swooped her in his arms...  perfect shaan style... oops i mean SK☺️

em luvin it... continue soon and thx for a luvly actually passionate update.🤗

Whoa!! that was amazing Manita. I seriously couldn't stop myself from imagining😍 everything i read and blush ☺️over the most awesome scenes . 😛You are truly a wonderful writer .I have been like eagerly waiting for every part of the story of yours.And everytime your narration make me drool over.Great work!! Keeep writing!!👏

oh i hope she breaks her resolve and confesses even if it is rambling or anger that it spits out...but hope it does before they reach home...

waise she was going to temple right? uska kya hua?

i love! this shaan. she can deny it as much as she wants. but she too knows that all that she assumes and holds against him is not true!

the man doesnt want ointment to feel her pain! aur kya chaiye uskoo

loved it!

Awesome .. Just loved it !!! 👏
I love ur way of story telling... 😃
Pls continue soon...

😊😊Haaye Mani Di... Love ur update yaar 😊😊

Hi Manita 😊
Awesome parts 5 and 6 loved it ❤️
Sorry could not post earlier i read it office during breaks so could not post
I am loving everything about this FF ❤️
U are great writer hats of to u 👏
Thanks for writing to us awesome parts as always enjoying a lot 😃
Keep writing 😊