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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOWWW !!!!

Manitaaa ... You converting ur OS into an FF ...
Yaaayyy !!!!!!

THANK YOU !!!
Loveee you ...

PS: have to read ur latest TresPro update ... dont scold ... will read by tomo !!!

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KrazEee

@KrazEee

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Posted: 12 years ago

Another FF from you?...I am sure it'll be as good as TresPro...I love the way you write!

I don't follow MOTW's so didnt knew about this...Thanks for posting it as a seperate thread...

Start is good...very different characterization...and a good story, glad you decided to turn it into FF

Will read 2nd part now

😃

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

OMGGG ..

This is amazing ... Three Hours ... Reallly ...

OMGG >.. I love him ... I love him for waiting for so looong ...

GOD ...Jaldi se donoko milaado ...
oopps sorry i mean ..

Manitaa...Jaldi se dono ko milaado !!!

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 12 years ago

You write so well dude!! My heartbeats went upar neeche at such right places...

I dunno what to say abt SK of this FF for now...but I identify myself with Khanak :D

Shelly ka entry toh typical tha😆

I like the characterisation, easy and simple or maybe...not? 😳

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

IF-Addictz

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Posted: 12 years ago

mani pls pls pls pls pls pls pls splsss continue this im in love wid this more than anything trust me i love this shaan n khanak its like a challenge seeing them...lol pls continue im drooling over d frst 2 parts:)

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

great update Manita Di! Loving it!

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christmas

@christmas

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Posted: 12 years ago

sigh. just. sigh.

so glad! you decided to turn this into FF.

love how he went from being irked at SK to just accepting being SK.

its too early, but still i am starting to love these two. theres this rawness in them thats soo endearing. i still say for a bad boy he comes across as too adorable.

looking forward to more!! plzz update soon:)

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

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Posted: 12 years ago

oh mani diii i love uuu

u turned it in to ff i so wantd this oh gos i m in love with this story shish di sk is such playboy but he loves her hes cute he eh she hurts him poor baby and he waitde for her lol sk is jealous of them he ehe imloving thi story its just thodi janinpehchani lol😉he he jaldi update karan sighhh😍

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601153

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Posted: 12 years ago

Maani,

ye kya tha!!!!

A girl like her falling for a guy like him ... surprise, surprise!

But with Shelly coming in, she will run away from him like anything na ... but I guess he will still pursue her...

so many questions coming to my mind ... now I will ask you for another update soon ... u know me na ... but Trespro ka pehle dena ..

~Cheers,
Dish

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576961

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Posted: 12 years ago

omg mani you using my siggi in your awesome ff..i am feel proudy me nihaal ho gaye..meri mehanat sufful hui..awesome ff i am out of station now without lapy will be do brief comments after return...loveee you a lot:D

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