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verin bad boy&last part updated (Page 28)

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Resh_kinhafan

Loved it jaan...awesome update dear...LOL...viren was so adorable dear...love nivren very much...but pls pls pls pls keep writing dear...love ur ff soo much...love u...mwaah!!


i love u jannnu...ok jannn happy u like the part Embarrassed

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
diya shamim happy u like it jannns
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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
LJ i finally was able to catch up on ur ff and it was amazing...cant wait to read some more of ur brilliant ff Smile

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 5:43am | IP Logged
guys come up ...verin is so worry where is nivi now ...nivi feels so pain ...verin decide to leave without nivi ...what a worse think u though ... verin : now i know u r not what i think nivi ...next part will update it soon 

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Lj jaan...mwaah...so back with ur ff!!
Itz short jaan...but still loved it...continue soon...luv u...hugs!!

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 8:30am | IP Logged
loji...update soon..can't wait...:)))

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Resh_kinhafan

Lj jaan...mwaah...so back with ur ff!!
Itz short jaan...but still loved it...continue soon...luv u...hugs!!


sweeti that's not the part ...will update the part later and try to make it long Embarrassed


@sana sweeti will update  it soon Embarrassed

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
new part

Next morning 'nivi wakes with lazy mode she doesn't wanna get up 'when she think about veriin now when they be really one soul every min when she think about him she feel so blushing and really doesn't wanna be away from not even for a min '.suddenly she hears horse voice 'nivi think where is verin ''.she thinks I must get up  and prepare my self for breakfast and must make it '.but she couldn't stop her self from looking in that awesome view 'she opens the window and feels so happy what a awesome view 'oh nivi said that's verin '.she just can't take her eyes from him ''the air is playing with his head and she really feels that verin and the horse is just one '..and she sees verin is so happy '.and really enjoy what he doing '.verin really love horse ridding '..

 

Nivi enters the wash room when she goes out she whisper 'now she can't take her breath 'verin is just in front of her sitting in the sofa and closing his eyes 'one of his  tuft hair cover part of his eyes 'he is looking just like the baby 'she can't control her self just walk till she be so near to him and just look at him '.verin feels her and open his eyes and smile '.long time without talking 'finally nivi feels shy and looks at the ground '..verin smile and said good morning meri jannn' I search about u and ya finally find my engle 'verin stand up and be so close and gives nivi kiss in her forehead 'nivi said I see u in the moring u really love horse riding'.verin smile and said ya I love it but love u more 'I just hope u go with me I will be so happy jann'nivi be silent and think that she must make him happy '..verin said nivi I will go out raj calls me and he wanna meet me 'will be back soon 'nivi said ok 'verin said u wanna go with me 'nivi said no I will just enjoy the great places here 'verin said ok tc jannn..and kiss her '.

 

When verin went ..nivi goes to horse stable and she feels so afraid she can't do this but when she remember that verin will be happy she just forget all her fear '.she   took out the horse and began her  journey with a sense of fear ... Initially she  felt relieved and took the horse to speed up  ...she  becomes unable to control the horse now the horse   becomes aggressive and runs fast  .. she  does not know what to do and the horse takes her  too far ... she  is close to the shelf she  tried to stop the horse and   the horse  stops after it  threw her  ... nivi is in the ground and feels so pain '.'.she just feel to cry '.nivi tried to ask for help but here there is no one '.nivi now can't even be wake she can't feels any thing around her now '

 

Verin comes back and he doesn't find her in the begin he feels she is ok but suddenly  he felt she is not ok he goes to the horse stable and took a horse and start searching '.after a long time finally he finds her 'he just stop the horse and run so fast to where she is 'verin : nivi nivi r u ok jannn plz replay to me plz 'nivi open her eyes just little and said verin and again she is not here '.verin just takes her fast to the house 'verin makes all the first aid she needs '.nivi in the bed verin near her and he just can't think after a while nivi wakes up and said verin '.verin comes near her 'and said nivi r u ok now 'nivi said ya am ok 'and also can stand up 'verin said no u just be here every thing u want I will bring it to u just sleep u need rest 'nivi said am sorry '.verin said jannn take rest now will talk later 'and he kiss her in her forehead ''

In the evening nivi and verin in the Dining Room ' they r sitting in the sofa '..verin holds niv's hand '...verin said why u do that 'nivi said I just wanna make u happy '.i wanna be with u every min'.verin said am happy with u 'u r the first one I really feel  I will die without her 'if any thing happen to u toay I will die '.nivi just cry '..verin said oh jannn plz don't cry I love u and he kiss her eyes '.they r now in the dream land where there is only love '..after so long time nivi said u r not sad that I can't ride the horse with my self '.verin said oh no am happy now I can make u ride with me and be so close jann and he winks 'nivi laughs and said '.ok am agree now am really happy that I can't ride '.verin said nivi raj wanna me to work here but u can't stay with me here '.nivi shocked

coming up ...nivi just holds verin and doesn't let him go ...will verin left nivi ???? willc in the next part

with love ljEmbarrassed




Edited by love-mystery - 26 June 2011 at 10:09am

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