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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by palz_ArTi4ever

wowww such a fantastic update with funny touch..continue soon dear...Smile




thnx dear...Smile

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hello friends...here i'm with another part of this ff...actually two more parts are left of this ff...i will try to finish this ff within next week...i hope u'll like this updae nd please forgive me for my mistakes...




Chapter Twenty Four

 

 

 

Mayank: Nupur tum ye kya keh rahi ho? Tum majak kar rahi ho na...

Nupur: Mayank mujhe dekke kya lag rahi hey ki main majak kar rahi hoon...nehi na..main sach

main  ye shadi nehi karna chahti...

Mayank: par kyun?

Nupur: meri marji...

Mayank: Nupur this is not fair...

Nupur: fair? Mr. Mayank Oberoi apne ye shadi ki proposal bhejne se pehle socha tha ki mujhe ek

bar puchna chahiye...nehi na...sidha shadi ka proposal bhej diya...pata hey pehele toh

mujhe laga ki issbar bhi  aunty ne ye rista bheja hey...par nehi...baad main pata chala ki Mr.

Mayank Oberoi khud apni mom se kehkar ye proposal bheja hey.pata hey tumhe main kitne din se

preshan hoon ye sochke ki tum mere bare main kya sochte ho...aur tum mujhe nehi batake apni mom se jake kaha ki you want to marry me...you monkey...

Mayank: relax Nupur...chilla kyun rahi ho...actually main dar gaya tha...wo Rahul...

Nupur: kya Rahul?

Mayank: Rahul ne kaha ki tumhari mom tumhare liye ladhka dhund rahi hey...isiliye maine socha

ki wo kisiko dhund le isse pehele main hi shadi ke proposal bhej doon...I was scared.. I was scared to loose you,,,,,,,,.


Hearing these lines from Mayank...it seemed Nupur got the heaven in her hand...she was so

happy...Mayank was looking at Nupur eyes and Nupur was looking at his...they both were

silent. But their eyes were talking to each other. They both knew that how much they loved each

other. They were lost into each other. But suddenly Nupur remembered that she supposed to be

angry at Mayank...She broke the eye lock and turned back to hide her happiness...then after

controlling herself she turned to Mayank again...

 

Nupur: assa...toh ake mujhse puch sakti tha na ki maa mere liye ladhka dhund rahi ki nehi...aise

proposal

bhejne ka kya matlab tha...

Mayank: Nupur uss waqt mere dimag kam nehi kar raha tha...

Nupur: wo toh aise bhi kabhi nehi karte...

Mayank: assa tumhara problem kya hey?

Nupur: tum...

Mayank: come on Nupur...ab jo huya ho gaya...bachche ki jaan loge kya?

Nupur: agar ho sakta toh wohi karta...but nehi kar sakta...but you deserve a punishment..

Mayank: punishment for what?

Nupur: for not telling me before sending that proposal...

Mayank: okay...kya punishment hey?

Nupur: you have to propose me before everyone...otherwise I won't say yes to this marriage.

Mayank: what?

Nupur: yes...now good bye.

Mayank: Nupur...listen to me...I can propose you privately...

Nupur: okay...then I go to Maa and tell her that I don't want to marry you.

Mayank: Nupur...please...

Nupur: punishment is punishment Mayank...now good bye.

 

Nupur was walking toward her car and Mayank was standing there like a statue. He was so happy

because he knew that Nupur loved him and he was also confused that why she was doing  this...he was looking at Nupur who was walking toward her car...and he could understand everything...

 

Mayank: so Ms. Gupta want to play...okay Ms. Gupta now Mayank Oberoi shows you what is playing...and how to play...

 

A mischievous smile came to Mayank's lip...he called Nupur...

 

Mayank: Nupur...

Nupur: kya huya?

Mayank: get ready to become Mrs. Mayank Oberoi...

Nupur: pehele apne punishment toh pura karo...

Mayank: wo ho jayega...tum humari shadi ki preparation karo.

Nupur: itna confidence assa nehi hey Mr. Oberoi...

Mayank: dekte hey to be Mrs. Oberoi...

Nupur: bye Mayank...

Mayank: bye sweetheart...good night...aur mere hi sapne dekhna...

Nupur: bye...

Nupur sat in her car and drove away... Mayank also went to his car and drove away to his house...

 

 

Tera mera pyaar hua hai lag jaaye na nazar

Aa maang duaayein aisi

Tera mera pyaar hua hai jag ko ho na khabar

Aa maang duaayein aisi

Tera mera pyaar hua hai lag jaaye na nazar

Aa maang duaayein aisi

Tera mera pyaar hua hai jag ko ho na khabar

Aa maang duaayein aisi


Ab teri soch mein rehta hoon main

Ab tere pyaar se, mehka hoon main

Ab bewajah hassti hoon main

Ab binte masti hoon main

Ab mujhse nehti hoon main

Ab mauj mein rehti hoon main


Ab teri soch mein rehta hoon main

Ab tere pyaar se, mehka hoon main

Tera mera pyaar hua hai lag jaaye na nazar

Aa maang duaayein aisi

Tera mera pyaar hua hai jag ko ho na khabar

Aa maang duaayein aisi


Tu, khwaab hai tu, khwaab hai tu, khwaab hai tu


Jab tu hasse, tab main hassun

Jab tu udaasi mein girti kabhi chaahun main ke tabhi

Khushi koi la do abhi

Jaanu nahi behka hoon kyun

Kyun chaandni si lagey dhoop bhi pyaare mausam sabhi

Naye huye jazbaat bhi


Ab dhoop si chadti hoon main

Ab shaam si dalti hoon main

Ab aag bin jalti hoon main

Ab neendh mein jalti hoon main


Ab teri soch mein rehta hoon main

Ab tere pyaar se, mehka hoon main


Thoda naya, thoda judaa

Lagta hai woh din tu jis din mile mera yun dil khile

Mitey khuda se bhi giley

Saara jahan ho khushnuma

Pyaara lagey raahon mein jo mile na rahe faasle

Khushi koi angdaai le


Ab pyaar ki angdaai mein

Ab bewajah sharmayi main

Ab dhoondti tanhai main

Ab toh rahun paglayi main


Ab teri soch mein rehta hoon main

Ab tere pyaar se, mehka hoon main



Tera mera pyaar hua hai lag jaaye na nazar

Aa maang duaayein aisi

Tera mera pyaar hua hai jag ko ho na khabar

Aa maang duaayein aisi

Tu, khwaab hai tu, khwaab hai tu, khwaab hai tu

 

 

Today was Rahul's weeding. Everyone was so busy. Mayank was helping Rahul to get ready...

 

Mayank: tune aisa kyun kiya?

Rahul: maine kya kiya?

Mayank: tune mujhe jhoot kyun bola ki Nupur ki mom uske liye ladhka dhund rahi hey...

Rahul: bachchu agar main aisa nehi karta toh app proposal kaise bhejte...

Mayank: tujhe pata hey uske bajwa se Nupur kitna gussa hey...

Rahul: usse toh khush hona chahiye na?

Mayank: ha yaar..par teri ye dost hey na pata nehi kaise sochte hey...khush hone ki jaga gussa ho gayi hey...aur mujhe punishment bhi diya...

Rahul: kaise punishment?

Mayank: I have to propose her before everyone...

Rahul: wow...toh tune kya socha?

Mayank: main tujhe kyun batau? Teri dost khelna chahti hey na...ab main usse dikhaunga ki kaise khelte hey...

Rahul: oye jaida kuch maat kar nehi toh gussa bar jayegi aur phir tu zindegi baar aise hi khelte

rehna..akele...

Mayank: nehi my dear friend aisa kuch nehi hoga...just wait and watch...

 

Meanwhile Nupur came...she was wearing a red sari with matching jewelry...her hair was open...Mayank was mesmerized to see her...and Mayank's intense gaze made Nupur blushed...

 

Rahul: ahem ahem...

 

They both came back to the world with Rahul's word...

 

Nupur: Rahul barat ka muhurat ho gaya...

Rahul: main bhi tayar hoon.chal.

 

Rahul left the room. Nupur was following him when Mayank caught her wrist...a slight shivered

went through Nupur's spine...Nupur closed her eyes...Mayank came closer to her and leaned to her ears...

 

Mayank: Nupur punishment mujhe mila hey tumhe nehi...tum dar kyun rahi ho?

 

After hearing Mayank's husky voice Nupur opened her eyes...and saw that Mayank was smiling mischievously...

 

Nupur: ha pata hey...toh are you ready for your punishment?

Mayank: I'm always ready sweetheart...par lagta hey meri punishment tumhe bhari par rahi hey...

Nupur: bilkul nehi...

Mayank: assa...

Nupur: ha...ab chalo barat ka muhurat nikal jar aha hey...

Mayank: after you baby...

 

Nupur left the room and Mayank was following her. They both joined the 'barat'. After half an

hour they reached Sneha's house then the weeding rituals started. After sometimes priest called the

bride. After all the

rituals the priest declared them husband and wife. Everything went away

smoothely...suddenly...




love
ridi

 





Edited by ridi_onasis - 09 June 2011 at 6:35am

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uff!! ye ladki kabhi nahi sudhregi... suddenly pe rok diya!!Stern Smile
waise nice update!!WinkLOL

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uff!! ye ladki kabhi nahi sudhregi... suddenly pe rok diya!!Stern Smile
waise nice update!!WinkLOL

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jo sudhar jaye wo ridi kya...WinkLOL...actually suddenly ke baad kya hoga maine thik se socha nehi isiliye rokh diya...LOL...

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 6:56am | IP Logged
nice update but ya i will say later

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Originally posted by mjhtmayursajan

nice update but ya i will say later


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suddenly Shocked
zaroor naughty mayu ne kuch kiya hoga LOL
after all he is very naughty Wink

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Originally posted by ginny09

suddenly Shocked
zaroor naughty mayu ne kuch kiya hoga LOL
after all he is very naughty Wink


dekhte hey kaun kya karte hey..b/w nice guess...WinkLOL

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