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Posted: 12 years ago
hello frndz i'm extremely sorry...actually i was busy with my study nd then my computer was not working...so i couldn't able to give the update...😒...but now i'm back...here is chapter twenty three...actually there are 3 or 4 parts are left of this ff...i'll try to update those very soon...






Chapter Twenty- Three


After two days at night Mayank was sitting in his bed room. He was recalling the conversation with his mom two days back when he told everything to his mom…….


Flashback

 

Mayank: mom……mujhe apse kuch baat karni hey……….

Shilpa: ha bol……
Mayank: actually mom main ke raha tha ki……..
Shilpa: ha bol na..itna hesitate kyun feel kar rahe hey……
Mayank: mommujheshadikarnihey…….

Mayank told it in a breathe. Firstly Shilpa couldn't understand but after sometimes she could understand. A smile was coming on her lips……she knew suddenly why her son was talking about marriage…..but she thought to play…..so she tried to act normal……

Shilpa: assa. Thik hey…..main abhi se hi ladhki dhundna shuru karte hey….
Mayank: nehi….
Shilpa: kyun agar ladhki nehi dhundnege toh tu shadi kisse karega..
Mayank: actually mom…….
Shilpa: tune ladhki dhund liya kya?

Mayank: ha….
Shilpa: kaun?

Mayank: wo….mom…..

Shilpa: Nupur, right?

Mayank: ha mom…..par apko kaise pata?

Shilpa: beta hum MAA hey……aur maa sab jante hey. Tune usse bataya?

Mayank: kisse?

Shilpa: Nupur se aur kisse.

Mayank: nehi…

Shilpa: kyun? Usse batana chahiye tha na.

Mayank: main bhi usse batana chatha tha par……
Shilpa: par kya?

Mayank: main kuch bolu usse pehle uski mom uski liye ladhke dhund rahe hey…….toh main soch raha tha ki app….

Shilpa: toh tu chahta hey ki main Nupur ki mom se baat karu……

Mayank: ha….
Shilpa: thik hey…..

Mayank: thank you so much mom…….love you.

Shilpa: love you too beta.

 

Suddenly a phone call brought Mayank back to the present time. He picked up the phone…..

Mayank: hello……

On the other side of the phone: Mr. Mayank Oberoi…..how dare you?

Mayank: Nupur?

Nupur: ha Nupur….

Mayank: Nupur Tum Chilla kyun rahi ho…..

Nupur: kyunki tumne jo kiya uske baad main apne ap ko control nehi kar pa rahi hoon…….

Mayank: maine kya kiya?

Nupur: assa toh tumhe ye bhi nehi pata ki tumne kya kiya…….tum mujhse milo main tumhe batati hoon.

Mayank: thik hey……kal milte hey..

Nupur: kal nehi….tum mujhse abhi milo.

Mayank: abhi? Nupur raat ki 10 baje hey…

Nupur: toh kya huya….tum mujhe abhi beach par miloge.

Mayank: thik hey……

Nupur: okay bye……

 

Nupur cut the phone. She was damn angry. How dares he……Mr. Mayank Oberoi you had to pay for this…She was going to the beach and recalling afternoon's incident…

 

Flashback

 

Nupur was sitting in her bed room and doing some work in her lap top. Meanwhile her mom came to her room….

 

Radhika: Nups…mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hey…….

Nupur: ha maa bolo….

Radhika: wo shilpa ki phone ayi thi…….

Nupur: kya huya maa…..sab thik toh hey na?

Radhika: ha beta sab thik hey….actually usne Mayank…

Nupur: kya huya Mayank ko?

Radhika: kuch nehi………usne Mayank ke liye tera haat mangi hey…..phirse……….

 

Nupur became shocked…….she didn't expect that…..it meant Mayank ……but if he loved her then he should tell her first……or this time it was his mom again…….Radhika noticed that Nupur became silent…..she thought perhaps Nupur didn't agree with this proposal…….

 

Radhika: beta tum daro maat maine kuch nehi kaha.iss baar wohi hoga jo tu kahegi….

Nupur: nehi maa aisa kuch nehi…..par main soch rahi hoon ki Mayank…….

Radhika: Mayank ne hi Shilpa ko kaha ye proposal bhej ne ko………

 

After hearing that Nupur's heart filled with everlasting happiness……….it meant Mayank loved her……but why didn't he tell her first…..Nupur became a slight angry…..now Mayank Oberoi you had to pay for that…..you should tell me first….

 

Nupur reached the beach…..Mayank was already there. Nupur went to him...Mayank saw that Nupur was coming to him….he couldn't understand what happened that made her so angry…..

 

Mayank: hi…..kaise ho?

Nupur: kaise rehne diya tumne?

Mayank: Nupur maine kya kiya? Tum itna gussa kyun ho rahi ho?

Nupur: kya kiya? Itna sab kuch ho gaya aur tum ab puch rahi ho ki kya huya? Mayank tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho….wo bhi mere sath……

Mayank: Nupur pehle tum ye batao maine kiya kya please………

Nupur: Shilpa aunty ne phone kiya tha…….

 

These words made him realize that what was happened. Why she was so angry……..but why was she angry…..it meant she didn't agree with the weeding proposal…..Mayank was so sad…..his world became shattered……

 

Mayank: I'm sorry Nupur….actually….

Nupur: What? Aunty ne kaha ki tumne usse kaha ye karne ko…….

Mayank: actually Nupur maine socha tha…….

Nupur: tum sochte bhi ho Mayank…….mujhe toh nehi lagta……agar socha hota toh tum pehle mujhse baat karte……nahi ki sidha proposal bhejte……pata hey maine kitna shocked huya tha….you love me…….aur ye mujhse kaha se pata  chalta hey……mere Maa ki muh se….tum mujhe sidha ake bata nehi sakte the……buddhu kahika……..

 

Mayank couldn't understand anything what was Nupur telling….. Firstly he thought Nupur didn't agree with the proposal……that was the reason that she was angry…….but it was not……she was angry because he didn't tell her first that he loved her…..it meant she wanted that he proposed her first…….it meant she also loved her……after thinking that a smile came to Mayank's lips……Nupur saw that….

 

Nupur: aise pagal ki tarah smile kyun kar rahe ho?

Mayank: tum mujhse isiliye naraj ho kyunki maine tumhe pehle nehi bataya……

Nupur: ha….

Mayank: Thank God…main toh dar hi gayi thi ki tum ye shadi nehi karna chahti……

Nupur: toh maine kab kaha ki main ye shadi karna chahti hoon………

Mayank: kya?


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ridi

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Posted: 12 years ago
ridi yaar kiss point par part stop kiya ufff 
ab w8 karna padega 
by god !
plz jaldi update karna :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww
 
awesome
 
so nice
 
i so love it
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi di...😊
acha update tha...👏
par short...😡
thik hai...😛
cont soon...😉


LOVE...❤️
SREELU...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mahakmev

nice lol



thnx dear...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: ginny09

ridi yaar kiss point par part stop kiya ufff 

ab w8 karna padega 
by god !
plz jaldi update karna :)



tum jante ho na ye meri adat hey...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

woww

 
awesome
 
so nice
 
i so love it
 



thnx dear...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sreelu.januable

hi di...😊

acha update tha...👏
par short...😡
thik hai...😛
cont soon...😉


LOVE...❤️
SREELU...🤗



short tha...😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it alot
poor mayu
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful part...
Am getting sooo much inspiration for my own...
Update soon sweety!!!!!!!!!!
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