Originally posted by Riasa
omg ...i will kill u...great .yaaarr love it ...god mera stomach mein pain ho raha hai haastey hastey ...
track is going very well ...
that's my fav song character deela hai ...
n u use emo is fav .yaar ...
your emo make your dialog alive yaar ... itna wait karwana thik nahi meri jaan ...thora update jaldi jaldi likha karo yaar ...i just only wait for your update ...
only one suggestions from mee ...dialog aise likho ...jaise lage ki real friends baat kartey ...matlb ...fulltoo masti ...eg
tum ke place mein tu ...
yaa aur tu thora punjabi tarka mar ...i mean thora punjabi words bhi dal...maza aayega ...
just waiting for next part ...
Wooow my vampire I love your comment 🤗 Yaaar tum sab kyun itani hasste ho ? 😡🤣
Not good for your health ek din hasste hasste maar jaoogi tab pata chalega 🤣 ( Just joking 😆 )
Love the way you describe my chapter that's so sweet of you 🤗
PUNJABI words ? 😲 Hmmm...thoda difficult hoga because I don't speak punjabi but I will try so don't worry 😉 🤣
Ok ok the next part I will post sunday thik hai ? 😆
