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Posted: 12 years ago
I am again writing something on 13/05 episode...don't know why๐Ÿ˜†...cannot stop myself๐Ÿ˜†...so jhelofy me...thanks
 
                               will you ever return?
 
Why you did this to me??
First you claimed you'll change me
The you admitted your defeat
But why your defeat is
Making me feel,I have defeated
 
You said,I cannot change
But why can't I change
Truth is that you don't wanna change
You wanna live in your past
Still you cannot forget the man
Whom you loverd first and last
 
You don't wanna change me
But wanna transform me into him
For your information I wanna say
I am as firm as Pole star
I will never change
 
Why should I change
For whom should I change
I cannot become a mirror
In which You can see him
Your past...your love
 
Instead of accepting your mistake
You blame me,you spy on me
Saying that I am wrong
I am the one who is at fault
 
You always maintained
A distance with me
My touch makes you impious
And his touch was making
even your soul pure
 
I didn't say a word till now
Coz I know I was wrong somewhere
But when you questioned my character
Then I had the right
To show you the mirror
 
I accept my heart started liking you
You make difference to me
But that don't allow you
To compare yourself  with the person
Whom you barely know
 
I left you for ever
But my heart is revolting
Blaming me for all this
Saying that I am wrong
And asks to my brain
Will you ever return...?? 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sur001

My touch makes you impious
And his touch was making
even your soul pure



Really great job, Sur!! I loved this line the best. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ˜†Edited by rani2007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow. very well written. loved it ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow,very well written,especially when his heart ask his brain...you showed the dwell in guddu's heart and mind...He is unknown to his feelings...that happens many times with boys...but why runjhun is no feeling anything for Guddu??๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 12 years ago

I left you for ever
But my heart is revolting
Blaming me for all this
Saying that I am wrong
And asks to my brain
Will you ever return...??

WOW !! Very nice. just loved these lines the most. Superb!!

Can u write anything on runjhun ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sheryajp


I left you for ever
But my heart is revolting
Blaming me for all this
Saying that I am wrong
And asks to my brain
Will you ever return...??

WOW !! Very nice. just loved these lines the most. Superb!!

Can u write anything on runjhun ?

 
I have written on Runjhun also...name of the post is -Reason behind my feelings...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yep...you are good Sur...
 
Again very Beautiful...
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Well written! Loved it.
Keep it up.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ