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M/G FF 3: With All My Love & Heart Forever PG 120

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Newdime IF-Dazzler

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Ever since Geet Hui Sabse Parayi started, hundreds and thousands life styles must have changed I must say.  At least it has mine; waking, sleeping, eating, drinking'you name it all, I think is Geet and Maan.  This duo made me know several interesting people, spectacular, humorous, exceptional talents; in fact I made some friends through it.  Geet has such impact on me that I found new talent with in me; I didn't have a clue that I grip such brain to play the game of words.  And this piece of works is the proof of it.  One fine Sunday morning I woke up with another incomplete dream sequence of Maan and Geet.  It has profound me such that I got out of the bed without stretching my sleep and turned on the PC to pen down before I forget.  Hence, created my mini FF With all my love & heart forever'.

Enjoy as I have to the fullest penning down'.

With all my love & heart forever''.Only yours.

                                                                                                                                            Maan & Geet!

No Mangni But Shaadi... With All My Love & Heat Forever...

Enigma with Flower
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

Chapter 13
Chapter 14

Chapter 15

Edited by Newdime - 17 May 2011 at 6:26pm

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Chapter Twenty One...

Varmala Garland Exchange!      

              Geet took slow steps at a time descending the stairs;

 her emotions were going up and down like the roller coaster as she closing the distance.  The beginning of marriage rituals, varmala involves the exchange of garlands between the bride and groom.  Maan, relatives and friends waited for bride to join, his back was facing Pinki, Geet and Ayanna.  Pinki was glad that Maan was not facing them, and Adi, Agustiya took extra care of that and as Geet came close to sacred tent, despite of long veil they duck their self out of view.  Maan uneasiness grew stronger; he all of a sudden started feeling suffocated.  His thick shera felt like someone is choking him with a plastic bag.  Numbing his thinking sense he fidgeted in his spot.  Both Men noticed his uneasiness and were nervous themselves too.  As the girls approached the party, they made Geet face Maan however kept their self away from undeviating view to him. 

(I do swear that I'll always be there.
I'd give anything and everything and I will always care.
Through weakness and strength, happiness and sorrow,
for better for worse, I will love you with
every beat of my heart.)

Maan and Geet were on cliff, there presence reigning their mind, soul and body.  In a way it was better as their mind occupied to seek each other and paid no heed to the fact that was around them.  Friends and relatives of the bride and groom indulge in teasing and fun, to celebrate this happy occasion. 

They were made to put the garland around each other, in doing they do get the touch of each other that snapped from their thoughts, as they looked at each other, the cover on their face made it impossible to recognize. 

{From this moment life has begun
From this moment you are the one
Right beside you is where I belong
From this moment on}

They were parted again for another ritual was an auspicious time chosen for the performance of the wedding ceremony. 

{From this moment I have been blessed
I live only for your happiness
And for your love I'd give my last breath
From this moment on}

Dadima escorted Maan towards the main seating in front of the sacred blaze.  At the auspicious time, the Priest conduct a puja and asked Maan to be seated next to the Priest and in front of the sacred blazes, in which Maan was asked to chant the first few mantras.  It was during this time, when Ayanna Geet's cousin indulges in stealing of his shoes.  It was a fun tradition, at the girls thought in which they get to charge a fee from the groom for agreeing to return the shoes.


              The wedding solemnized with four important rituals- the Kanyadaan, in which the bride's father giving his daughter's hand to the groom, Geet escorted back to the sacred tent to sit next to Maan.  Her head bowed all the time, did managed to turn around to get the foretaste of the man who she was binding the knot of her life all in vain.  The desperation was mutual; Maan's crown tilted sideways without his permission.  Priest continues the chants and commands interrupted both, to follow the directives, as Geet's father leans forward to hand over Geet's palm on Maan's extended open palm. 

{I give my hand to you with all my heart
Can't wait to live my life with you, can't wait to start
You and I will never be apart
My dreams came true because of you}

The sight was amusing to the foursomes, who gathered close to their better half perception to admire the play of warmth, emotions and pure love could break the spell of distance that was about to begin.  The moment their skins were touched, it was as if electrocuted, they impulsive at each other yet again.  Geet assured herself it is him, how could it be possible?  Now she indicts her for not checking out the photo that Bauji gave her.  As if telepathy, Maan astounded with disbelief, that he was marrying to the same girl, who tormented him bright and dark.  Whom, he vowed never to speak and show his face.  He mentally kicked his rear for not checking once whom he was been marring.  It was too late to back off this arrangement, two hearts contemplating on the issue on hand.  In the same position, staring at each other through their barriers, now the features are clear reading each other's eyes in question what to do.  It felt like eons no reaction on either side, Geet tried to ease her hand off his, but instantly pulled with obligatory to get tight clasp on her, and securing the other on top. 

{From this moment as long as I live
I will love you, I promise you this
There is nothing I wouldn't give
From this moment on}

              She jerked up to look at Maan's covered face, all she noticed a small nod in approval. 

{You're the reason I believe in love
And you're the answer to my prayers from up above
All we need is just the two of us
My dreams came true because of you}

Maan couldn't think of anything on how to get out of this awkward fate the life was playing hide and seek with him, thousands of thoughts made the ferocious run in his mind.  Dadima, that's all he could think of then the girl sitting next to him that his heart thumps only for her.  As he was in the tornado of thoughts, he felt Geet's hand slipping off his, his instant reaction was to tighten his grip on her not to let her slip again. 

{From this moment as long as I live
I will love you, I promise you this}

Not sure why he did that, but that's what he felt right to do to not let her go not this time not anymore.  "I bridegroom hold your hand unto mine for lifelong commitment and for prosperity of family life." 

{There is nothing I wouldn't give
From this moment}

He looked at her covered face then continued.  "May you attain full age in all prosperity with me as your husband.  God, who is the master of all prosperity, the administrator of justice, the creator of the universe and all subsisting and enlightened persons present here, is giving you to me for the fulfillment of the family life's attainment and obligation."  Maan completed his vow with honesty.  

{I will love you as long as I live
From this moment on}

Geet couldn't hold herself back as the tears rolled down her cheeks as Maan stops after his last word she lifted her left hand to wipe off the last stream.  Four pairs of eyes couldn't pull away with admiration from these thrilling emotional persecute.


Before the next major ritual begins, they were to repeat seven sentences together:

1.  Always, remember the divine.

2. Always took upon each other with sympathy, love and compassion.

3. Help in all good deeds of each other.

4. Keep mind pure and virtuous.  Be strong and righteous.

5. Show goodwill and affection to parents, brothers, sisters and other family members.

6. Bring up the children in such a manner that they are strong in mind and body.

7. Always, welcome and respect guests.

As they completed the marital advice, it was the time for Gathbandhan.  Ayanna then tied a knot using the ends of the clothing worn by Geet and Maan, thus symbolizing their union.

to be lingered...

Edited by Newdime - 15 May 2011 at 7:11pm

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Me first this time! 
Congrats on the third thread and my real comment regarding the above update is on the next page.Big smile

woo hoo way to go


Edited by Limerance - 14 May 2011 at 10:44pm

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arabianpaki Goldie

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 9:10pm | IP Logged

second, so they know its each other...or is it still their instincts?!
I can't for the next update! always end with a cliffhanger.. that should be banned in FF writing!!Tongue
Thanks for the update habibti!!!!

p.s did you come up with the vows your self?!?

Edited by arabianpaki - 14 May 2011 at 10:36pm

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tanudrashti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 9:16pm | IP Logged

Really beautiful

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