Chaand Chupa Badal Mein

India-Forums

   
Chaand Chupa Badal Mein
Chaand Chupa Badal Mein

Tum Se Hi: Thread One: Chapters 1 - 71 (Page 42)

kinshukkiaashiq Goldie
kinshukkiaashiq
kinshukkiaashiq

Joined: 09 May 2011
Posts: 2084

Posted: 07 June 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged
wow asma diii please do continue...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

anjaani07

anjaani07 IF-Rockerz
anjaani07
anjaani07

Joined: 18 January 2011
Posts: 5569

Posted: 07 June 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Hey everyone, i just wanted to say a massive ginormous thanks for all the amazing comments you've been posting regarding this ff, I'm kinda speechlessEmbarrassed 
 
So glad ur enjoying it so far, hope i can keep it going, will update on the weekend. Sorry i cant reply to everyone individually but i love you guys for keep commenting and love reading what u think so THANK YOU!!!Hug

The following 8 member(s) liked the above post:

salekh1krazzy4ArHiAnisha_91wargwadi..dolldiyaloveskinnymitzi11love_never_dies

anjaani07 IF-Rockerz
anjaani07
anjaani07

Joined: 18 January 2011
Posts: 5569

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Chapter 22
 
'Viren?! Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?' Even in his sleep Viren registered the disapproving tone attached to the words and in a few seconds he was awake and sitting up on the sofa blinking in the bright sunlight when he realised he was looking straight at Nivi's Dad! Keshav hadn't gone with the rest of the family but Nivi had gotten a voicemail message from him last night saying he was stuck because of the weather but they hadn't been able to contact him after that so he wasn't aware Viren had been there at all... As Keshav waited for him to reply, Viren tried to think of an easy way to explain the events of the day and night before.
 
Nivi was in the kitchen preparing breakfast when she heard a noise in the living room and thought Viren must be awake. She'd woken up still on the sofa and the first thing she'd seen was a fast asleep Viren opposite her; he slept like a child, on his front with one arm sticking out and his blanket almost all on the floor and when Nivi went and stood by him she saw he even looked like a kid, sweet and innocent with no hint of the usual cheekiness on his face. She was surprised but happy to see him still there and as she moved some hair off his forehead and fixed his blanket, she decided she at least owed him a proper breakfast. She was still thinking about Viren when she realised she could hear voices in the living room now and went to see if Dadi and Yash had come home.
 
'Chachaji, woh kal raat...' Viren had no idea what he'd been about to say to Keshav but he was saved for the moment by Nivi who'd come from the kitchen just then. 'Papa! Aap kab aaye?' She ran over and hugged Keshav happily and Viren tried to ignore the way his heart leapt at simply seeing her; now wasn't the time... Keshav hugged Nivi and told her he'd only just walked in but he was still looking at Viren and he didn't seem happy. Nivi finally noticed Keshav's expression and as she looked at Viren, he could see her reaching the same conclusion he had about explaining the situation.
 
Viren was trying not to look at Nivi for too long, he wasn't used to these feelings at all and he was worried that Keshav could probably see them written all over his face. 'Tum ne mujhe jawaab nahi diya Viren,' Keshav said and Nivi cut in, 'Papa woh toh meri waje se..' before she could finish they both heard Dadi's voice saying, 'Maine isse kaha tha yahaan rukne ko Keshav; Nivi akeli thi.'
 
Viren had never been so happy to see Dadi in his life! She came in with Yash and Divya, who went straight to Nivi and hugged her and then waved at Viren from across the room. Dadi saw Viren standing next to the unmade sofa and asked why he hadn't slept in Yash's room but he said he'd been fine. She turned and explained to Keshav that she'd asked Viren to stay because she hadn't wanted Nivi to be alone in such a bad storm and then she asked them if they were both ok. The tension had eased a little and Keshav seemed doubtful but ok with Dadi's explanation and Viren breathed a sigh of relief as they both started discussing how bad the storm had been.
 
As they spoke Viren noticed Nivi giving him frantic looks and he frowned at her, not understanding till she looked over at the sofa she'd slept on. She hadn't moved anything so it was clear someone had slept there too and Viren's eyes widened in horror as he imagined both Keshav and Dadi's faces when they realised it was Nivi; somehow he didn't think they'd be very pleased. He thought quickly and then looked at Nivi shaking his head a tiny bit, trying to say that he couldn't go over there without them noticing.
 
Divya meanwhile had stood quietly and noticed both Nivi and Viren acting strange; it didn't take her long to figure out what was up. She looked at the sofa's and wondered what exactly had happened last night and thought she had a lot of catching up to do as she decided to save them both from a parental grilling. She sighed and gave Nivi a 'You owe me' look and then while Dadi and Keshav were speaking she quietly went and sat down on the sofa Nivi had slept on, moving the blanket out of the way as she did, so that it was just in one corner. She re-arranged the cushions as if she was trying to get comfy and then looked up at Viren with a smile and raised eyebrows, trying not to laugh as the colour returned to his face.
 
Nivi sighed in relief as Divya moved any trace of her having slept just a few feet away from Viren all night; she remembered her Dad's face when he'd looked at Viren and felt a flutter of worry even though it seemed fine now. She didn't want him to think badly of Viren when all he'd done was help her. She looked up now and saw her Dad going into his room and realised Viren was about to leave too.
 
'Main ab chal tha hoon Dadi.' Nivi watched Viren pick up his phone from the table and turn to leave and said quickly, 'Aren't you going to have breakfast at least?' It wasn't like Viren to pass up an offer of food so she was a little surprised when he looked around towards her and shook his head, 'No, I should go home; they're probably wondering where I am...'
 
Viren wasn't looking directly at her as he spoke for some reason and Nivi felt odd but before she could think anything of it, Dadi said 'Teek hai beta' She went over and thanked him for staying till they'd got back and Viren said it was nothing and then left. He turned once at the door and looked at Nivi quickly before he disappeared and Nivi felt a horrible sense of emptiness as soon as he'd gone even though Divya had started telling her all about how their trip had gone.


Edited by anjaani07 - 08 June 2011 at 12:42pm

The following 37 member(s) liked the above post:

fleura5armadJasNehaFankrazzy4ArHifarstarkinshukkipyaariXlovesuminu2011tashu20prajeesalekh1nutsJasleenlamsNikita99vids08aysha1989sandy_nivrenHonkytonkAbirami24Nazzz16-aamina--Atiya-ButifuleyesUZISedwardcullen19FrozenRainwargroops82Alphabet26wadi..dollanjubalaAnisha_91mitzi11diyaloveskinny-Preetz-love_never_dies

edwardcullen19 IF-Rockerz
edwardcullen19
edwardcullen19

Joined: 18 December 2010
Posts: 8204

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
amazing update dear...
oh god Keshav is so suspiciousShocked...
thank god that Dadi and Divya managed the situation very wellSmile...
continue soon dear

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

anjaani07

Alphabet26 IF-Rockerz
Alphabet26
Alphabet26

Joined: 04 November 2010
Posts: 9426

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Viren was saved by dadi, yash and divya... good going...Asma...waiting for ur next chapter...

Edited by Alphabet26 - 08 June 2011 at 12:57pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

anjaani07

dyhardfan IF-Dazzler
dyhardfan
dyhardfan

Joined: 07 February 2011
Posts: 2707

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Asma was so excited to read ur PM... Wasn't expecting a chapter during the week. You made my night lol. I know you work during the week so you don't get time to prepare your chapters, I would really like to thank you so much for writing your chapters when you get free time... instead of relaxing you entertain us. We really appreciate it and love you doll. Your writing is out of this world:) loved this chapter, awww poor Viren he can't face Nivi, so cute. Hope Nivi realize her feeling soon. I can imagine the look on NivRen face when the thought about what KS and Dadi will think when they see the sofa lol. So cute:) thanks again swti.

Edited by dyhardfan - 08 June 2011 at 1:04pm

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

Honkytonkanjubalaanjaani07

Anisha_91 IF-Rockerz
Anisha_91
Anisha_91

Joined: 17 July 2010
Posts: 7561

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Diii thank you SO much Di i needed this dose today, 'cos I'm not liking the current track. LOVED the chapter Di...and OMV I can SO imagine Viren sleeping the way you described heheh sooo cuteee. Ohh and Loving Divya, she's an awesome sis saved Nivi and Viren hehe. Thanks once again for the awesome chapter. x

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

anjaani07

anjaani07 IF-Rockerz
anjaani07
anjaani07

Joined: 18 January 2011
Posts: 5569

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anisha_91

Diii thank you SO much Di i needed this dose today, 'cos I'm not liking the current track. LOVED the chapter Di...and OMV I can SO imagine Viren sleeping the way you described heheh sooo cuteee. Ohh and Loving Divya, she's an awesome sis saved Nivi and Viren hehe. Thanks once again for the awesome chapter. x
 
Hey sweetie!! I was gonna wait to post it but i thought it might be a good idea since none of us are liking the current thread! Glad u enjoyed it Hug and yeah, i like Divya too, this is how she shud have been!!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Anisha_91

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
-||- CCBM :: Episode Discussion Thread -||-

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 41 42

Author: -Fivr-   Replies: 330   Views: 15907

-Fivr- 330 15907 30 December 2010 at 12:35pm by P.Kamaljit.Sean
Nivedita & Siddharth Appreciatin Thread Name ?

Author: .StarryPhoenix   Replies: 5   Views: 3667

.StarryPhoenix 5 3667 05 July 2010 at 8:56am by .StarryPhoenix

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Chaand Chupa Badal Mein Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index