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Posted: 08 September 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
atleast u updated a chapter... lovely chapters asma... Hope nivi take good decision...Smile

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Sorry to make u all wait, I just havnt had the time to sit n write lately!!

Will hopefully write sum over the weekend n post in a new thread cos this one is almost full!! Thanx so much for all the comments n likes so far, really appreciate it Hug

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Sorry to make u all wait, I just havnt had the time to sit n write lately!!

Will hopefully write sum over the weekend n post in ra new thread cos this one is almost full!! Thanx so much for all the comments n likes so far, really appreciate it Hug

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Yes asma, too eagar to know wat is nivi's decision , please update soon

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Many many hugs dear for writing such beautiful chapters on our very own Nivren :). Wish you were the writer of the show and I am certain if that were the case we would have had the show running the top charts today. But oh well we can't anything now but to cherish our dear couple through your wonderful FF.
 
Hugs and muaahhss to you for all the hard work. Waiting for the new chapters :)
 

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OMV!!! Diii!! I TOTALLY loved these chapters!!! Aaahhh theres just so much to it and i just loved each and every part of it It was AMAZING!!! you've done it perfectly i knew u would do it fantastically u were worried for no reason. I just loved it to bits its so intense and Viren's words towards the end were very strong I just loved loved loved it!!! and OMVVV Viren in BLUE!!! u know i lose it whenever i see him in blue or hear about it lol!!! Sorry for reading it really late *Viren style sorry* once again awesome chapters simply loved it, i was waiting for some tension eagerly and you're totally nailed it, well done Di. *flying kisses* love u x

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Chapter 70
 
As Viren left Nivi on the roof and went back to the party it felt like he was walking away from his life and he was still numb when he got to the stairs and saw the sangeet was carrying on as before. Was it really the same night when he'd danced so happily with Nivi? It felt like a lifetime ago now and as he looked down at everyone below, he felt panic flash through him and he wanted to go back to Nivi and tell her he hadn't meant any of it. He shook his head at the thought; he knew he'd done the right thing, it was up to Nivi what she wanted now... He heard a sound behind him and spun around hoping it was Nivi but it was Divya.
 
'What's wrong Viren?!' Divya had been about to crack a joke when she'd seen Viren but when he turned around she could see instantly that something was not right; he looked pale and worried as Divya repeated her question. She wondered if this had something to do with Nivi as Viren shook his head wordlessly and then his unsteady words confirmed it, 'I...Nivi, she..' his voice seemed to break off and Divya felt her heart sink even though she didn't know what had happened. She opened her mouth to ask when she saw Sid coming up the stairs with a smile on his face. His expression changed too when he reached them and saw their faces and he frowned as he asked what was the matter.
 
Viren ran a hand through his hair, feeling like this was getting out of hand and he just wanted to switch off his feelings and disappear. He shook his head again and tried to say firmly that he was fine but his voice still shook and Sid didn't look convinced. He sighed and muttered, 'I just need some time to myself...' and then left them there and walked towards his room; he knew they were only trying to help but if he started talking then he might break so it was better not to say anything.
 
Divya and Sid both looked worriedly after Viren and Sid said, 'I'll go and talk to him' at the same time as Divya said 'I have to find Nivi' and Sid looked at Divya in surprise but didn't say anything. Viren had looked upset and Sid was worried about him; he had a fair idea what might be going on but he wanted to hear it from Viren so he nodded to Divya and was about to follow Viren when they saw Vandana coming down the hallway, 'Tum dono yahaan ho? Mehmaan sab jaane lage hai, mere saath chalo,' She didn't wait for them to answer and they looked at each other a little helplessly before following her back downstairs, both wondering when they'd get to speak to Nivi and Viren.  
 
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Nivi was still staring numbly at the place where Viren had been standing; she couldn't believe what had just happened and earlier when she'd imagined speaking to Viren, this would have been the last thing she'd expected. Her lips still tingled from their kiss and she could still hear his voice in her head saying she didn't owe him anything...
 
The sound of a car starting up somewhere below broke into her thoughts and she shook herself, trying to clear her head. The numbness was beginning to wear off and she felt panic creep into her heart as she wondered what she was going to do. She tried to think; she needed to get off this roof and go somewhere to gather her thoughts, she needed to breathe... she needed Viren... Nivi pushed down the panic and shook her head against the need to see Viren; she didn't want to hurt him any more than she already had tonight.
 
She wiped her tears and took a deep breath, trying to stay calm for the moment as she made her way back downstairs. A small part of her was worried about bumping into Viren but mostly she just wanted to see him and make sure he was ok; he'd looked shattered and she hated herself for doing that to him. 'Nivi, kya hua? Tu teek hai na?' Nivi blinked and realised she was already downstairs amongst the guests and Dadi was standing in front of her with Chanchal, and both were looking at her worriedly.
 
No matter how hard she tried she couldn't bring a smile to her face and she knew Dadi would see right through it anyway so she shook her head, 'Dadi mujhe ghar jaana hai, woh...' She swallowed and muttered something about a headache and she could see Dadi wasn't convinced although Chanchal seemed to believe her. When Dadi said she was coming too, Nivi shook her head again, 'Nahi Dadi, aap yahi sab ke saath hi rukiye, main dawa le ke so jaaoongi.' Before she could argue further, Nivi nodded to Chanchal and quickly made her way to the front door, thankfully not running into anyone else. As she made her way home she realised she hadn't seen Viren and she had to resist the urge to go back and find him.
 
When Nivi got home she forced herself to concentrate on the simple things like taking off her jewellery, clearing everything away and getting changed till finally she was in bed and there was nothing else to do but think about the hurt on Viren's face and his words. His words rang in her ears and she knew he was right, she couldn't let things just carry on and hope for the best but at the same time she was worried about her father too and she didn't know if she had it in her to stop this rishta from happening. She sighed and rolled over in bed, squeezing her eyes shut, hoping for sleep to dull her confusing thoughts.
 
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Nivi was still awake a long while later; she'd heard everyone come home and now the house was quiet again but still sleep refused to come. She got up and tried drawing but all she could draw was Viren and she couldn't face the look in his eyes even in a picture so she gave up on that too and went back to bed after checking her phone for the millionth time. She'd had one text sometime after midnight and her heart had leapt but it was only Divya asking if she was ok and that they needed to talk. She knew Viren wouldn't call or text but she kept checking just in case, not knowing what she'd say to him if he did.
 
As she lay in bed, she closed her eyes and for a minute tried to imagine what it would be like if she went ahead with her father's wishes. What her life would be like without Viren in it; without his smile, his laughter and his way of always knowing what she was feeling. Behind her closed eyelids, Viren's smiling face faded away as tried to imagine a life with someone else. She felt empty inside as she saw important moments of her life flash by in her mind, the whole time a faceless stranger by her side and no Viren in sight.
 
She wondered painfully if he'd go back to Delhi and start afresh... and then at some point his family would want to get him married too... she felt her heart twist at that thought and suddenly she sat up in bed feeling like she couldn't breathe. She couldn't do it, she couldn't knowingly choose to have a life without Viren; she had to talk to her father or Dadi - Viren was too important to her to give up on without even trying!
 
She let out a breath and rubbed her eyes, trying to breathe evenly. She looked down at the bracelet still on her wrist and held the tiny ring in between her fingers, feeling some of the confusion slipping away; it would be hard and maybe Viren wasn't too happy with her right now but hopefully he'd be with her in the end and she had to hold on to that. She lay back in bed slowly, feeling slightly better at reaching a decision but still anxious. She closed her eyes again but instead of sleep all she could see was Viren's face only this time it didn't make her feel so guilty.  


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Chapter 71
 
The next evening Nivi hurried up the stairs to her house and hit her head on someone who was just leaving. She apologised automatically and looked up hoping against hope that maybe it was Viren and then felt silly and disappointed when she saw it was only Sid. 'Sorry Nivi, are you ok?' She nodded in reply and he stopped for a minute to talk and said he'd come to see Dadi and asked Nivi how her day had been. In her head she thought back to her day; she'd woken up with her mind still set and she'd wanted to speak to Dadi but she had to go to work early and Dadi had still been asleep after having such a late night so she'd left it.
 
After that it had been a slow and painful day; work felt like a chore and she missed Viren so much she'd made Divya promise to go and see him when they'd met for lunch. Divya had listened to everything that'd happened and was glad that Nivi had decided to tell Dadi she didn't want to meet with the family; she'd even offered to be there for moral support but Nivi had said no. 'Nivi?' Suddenly she realised Sid was still waiting for her to answer and she'd just spaced out, 'Are you ok? You look tired..' Sid was looking at her worriedly and Nivi tried to keep her voice light as she made an excuse about work being extra busy.
 
'Hmm, well get some rest ok?' Sid patted her on the shoulder and turned to leave and Nivi couldn't help herself from calling him back, 'Siddarth! Woh Viren...' she desperately wanted to ask him how Viren was but she didn't know how without it looking odd so she stopped and stood there feeling silly and wishing the ground would swallow her up. Sid seemed to understand somehow though because he gave a wry smile and said, 'Viren's working late, I guess work is extra busy for him too...' Nivi blinked and tried to think of something to say but Sid was already saying bye and in a minute he'd gone, leaving Nivi wondering at his words.
 
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'Dadi, aap yeh sab kyu kar rahi hai!' Nivi took the knife out of Dadi's hand and told her to sit down while she cut up vegetables for their evening meal. Dadi said she thought Nivi deserved a rest after work but the last thing Nivi felt like doing was resting. She listened to Dadi scold her for working too hard and gave in and let her help and for a while they worked in silence.
 
'Kya baat hai Nivi, tu itni udaas kyu hai? Viren ke saath koi jagda ho gaya kya?' Nivi looked up in surprise at Dadi's words; she'd been worrying about Viren and was also wondering how to bring up the rishta topic when Dadi had read her mind. 'Dadi...aap ko kaise pata?!' She was wondering at how transparent she must be when Dadi shook her head and held up the potato Nivi had peeled down to almost nothing as evidence of her lack of concentration, 'Dadi hoon mein teri, sab jaan thi hoon! Kya hua, mujhe bata, bachpan mein bhi tu uss bechare ko kitna pareshan thi thi..'
 
Nivi's eyes widened as despite everything it still somehow managed to annoy her that Dadi was taking Viren's side! 'Dadi woh toh...' She automatically responded in a complaining tone but then stopped when she saw that she'd only been teasing her. Nivi sighed and went back to the food thinking it was her fault this time, she'd been the one who was stuck in the middle, Viren had always known what he wanted.
 
She didn't know how Dadi had known Viren was on her mind but she couldn't help herself from confiding in her a little, 'Dadi...woh mujhse bohth naraaz hai...aur honi bhi chahiye' She felt like crying as she remembered Viren's face last night and she wished she'd had the sense and nerve to go with him when he'd asked her. Dadi watched Nivi's face and then led her to the empty living room and sat her down next to her, brushing back her hair like she had when Nivi was a child.
 
'Nivi, dosto ke beech toh jagde hote hi rehte hai...aur aksar inse dostiya aur bhi mazbooth ho jaate hai.' Nivi felt tears spring into her eyes at Dadi's sweet tone, she'd missed talking to her a lot; she was used to telling her everything and it had been hard not to say anything about Viren, especially now. She let her tears fall as she hugged her and felt Dadi stroking her hair. 'Arre tu ro kyu rahi hai? Viren toh tujhe kitna pyaar kar tha hai, jo kuch bhi hua woh tujse bohth dher naraaz nahi rahega...'
 
Nivi smiled through her tears feeling comforted until suddenly Dadi's words sank in and she raised her head and stared at her knowing eyes in shock. Dadi smiled and shook her head, 'Uski bhi Dadi hoon main, sab pata hai mujhe!' Nivi was still speechless and in the back of her mind she wondered how long she'd known as Dadi's voice turned serious, 'Lekin tu ne mujhe kyu nahi bataya Nivi...itni badi baat apni Dadi se chupayi?' Nivi looked down guiltily, still surprised and not knowing what to say as Dadi continued, 'Tujhe kya laga mjuhe sun ke bhura lage ga? Teri khushi mein hi khushi hai Nivi...'
 
'Dadi...' Nivi hugged her again with tears of relief this time and told her she was sorry but Dadi hushed her and asked her why she was so upset. Nivi explained everything through her tears and when she got to last night Dadi looked confused, 'Lekin maine toh tujhse baat karne ki baad un logo ko naa bol diya tha?' When Nivi told her Keshav had spoken to her later, Dadi frowned and Nivi saw some of her own stubborn-ness on her face, 'Main baat karoongi Keshav se, tu meri beti hai, teri shaadi uski marzi se thodi na hogi?!'
 
For the first time since she'd heard about the marriage proposal, Nivi smiled whole-heartedly and saw a glimmer of hope. 'Sach Dadi?!' She gave her another hug and Dadi laughed and kissed her on the forehead, 'Haan haan sach; aur mauka dekhte hi main Bhuvan baisaab se bhi baat karoongi. Ab khush hai na tu?' She put a hand under Nivi's chin and Nivi nodded shyly, feeling herself blush. She almost couldn't believe it; her first thought was that she had to tell Viren... she was just imagining his face when she heard Yash's voice behind them asking if dinner was ready and she came back down to earth.
 
She got up quickly, unable to stop smiling; normally she might have teased Yash about his impatience but today she was too happy, 'Sorry Yash, just give me 10 minutes and it'll be ready!' Dadi gave her hand a squeeze and Nivi hugged her again before going back into the kitchen. She knew she should still be worried about Keshav and the Sood's but right now it felt like none of that mattered because having Dadi on their side was enough for her.
 
Nivi looked at the clock on the wall and then at her phone on the counter; should she call Viren? Sid had said he was working late so she probably shouldn't... happiness and relief was bubbling up inside her and it was hard to stop herself but she decided she would rather tell him in person and see the look on his face. As she finished making dinner and called Yash to set the table, she thought of ways to make it up to Viren... she remembered how he'd climbed through her window and laughed to herself thinking she probably wouldn't be able to top him but she would definitely try and surprise him...


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Omg perfect timing.
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