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Posted: 18 July 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Chapter 56
 
'Tumhe pata hai Nivi...when I first moved to boarding school, I used to dream we were back playing in this park...but just when I went to pull your hair I'd wake up!' Nivi laughed as Viren sounded a little put out and then reached up to pull on some of her hair that had fallen forward. They'd finished eating and Nivi was sitting leaning against the tree with Viren's head in her lap. She'd tried to tidy up but he'd done it all and now he was smiling up at her and playing with her hair while she laughed at his stories.
 
Nivi shook her head and Viren watched the way the sunlight brought out hints of brown in her hair. He was feeling tired and sleepy and maybe that's why he'd remembered his childhood dreams as he ran his fingers through her hair; he blinked and focused on her face as he started to feel even sleepier, he didn't want to miss a second of being with her. 'Viren, tumhe sapne main bhi sirf shararat aata hai!'
 
Viren laughed and shrugged; he couldn't really argue with that since it was pretty much true! 'Toh kya?! There's nothing wrong with that Moti...' he moved his hand to her face and stroked her cheek slowly as she smiled. His fingers brushed over her lips and she shivered even though it was warm and then reached up to take his hand. She kissed his palm lightly and then wound her fingers around his and rested them on his chest.
 
'Did you manage to sort everything out at the site today Viren?' She tapped the tip of his nose lightly as he nodded, 'Haan, I sorted everything...Dadaji was happy...' He turned his head a little and smiled up at her sleepily. 'Sach? That's great Viren...lekin tum apna khayal toh rak rahe ho naa?' Viren smiled and rolled his eyes and Nivi frowned and closed them with her hand as he laughed softly, 'I'm fine Nivi...' he trailed off into a yawn and then laughed again, 'I'm just a little tired that's all.'
 
There was a light breeze in the air and Nivi looked down to see Viren had closed his eyes; she brushed her fingers through his hair slowly and he smiled, 'Imagine if we could stay here like this forever...' Nivi laughed, 'You'd get bored after a day Viren!' she shook her head but saw Viren still had his eyes closed. He sighed and turned his face into her hand and muttered, 'Not if you were with me...' and his voice trailed off as he fell asleep.
 
Nivi watched Viren's sleeping face and smiled at how innocent he looked; she didn't mind at all that he'd fallen asleep because it gave her the perfect chance to look at him and she'd never get bored of looking at him... She stroked his hair and he didn't wake so she ran her fingers over his features lightly. His skin was smooth under her fingers but his stubble felt rough and when she brushed her fingers over his lips slowly, she was surprised when he smiled a little in his sleep and then turned his face in towards her, bringing his arm up so that he was holding her to him.
 
Nivi felt her face heat up at the way Viren was holding her even though he was asleep and wondered if she should wake him. After a few minutes she decided against it since he was obviously really tired; he'd text her really late last night when she'd already been asleep and then he'd been called out really early again this morning even though it was supposed to be his day off. She stroked his hair again and waited for him to wake up and thought she really would love it if they could just stay here forever.


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Chapter 57
 
Viren woke up feeling rested but as he opened his eyes, everything was pink; he moved his head so he was facing up but everything was still pink. He blinked fuzzily and then smiled when he realised where he was; he reached up and moved Nivi's scarf away from his face and blinked up at her. 'Good afternoon sleepyhead!' Nivi smiled down at him and Viren felt his heart skip a beat, 'I'm not still dreaming am I...?' he asked softly and then couldn't help himself from reaching up and tugging on her hair lightly, 'Nope...I'm really here with you!'
 
'Viren! We're grown ups now, you can't keep pulling my hair whenever you feel like it!' Nivi laughed but then her laugh turned into a gasp when Viren suddenly twisted his fingers in her hair and pulled her face down to his. Her hair fell around them like a curtain and she couldn't breathe as she looked into Viren's eyes which were only inches from hers. 'You should have woken me up Moti...now look, we wasted almost the whole day...'
 
Viren rubbed his nose against hers as Nivi tried to think clearly, 'You were tired...' he brushed kisses across her cheek and Nivi forgot what she'd started to say and she held onto Viren's jacket collar tightly because it felt like she was falling. 'There's something I have to tell you Nivi...' Viren spoke against her lips softly and Nivi somehow managed to lift her head a little so that she could look at him properly but she could still feel his breath on her cheeks as he spoke softly, 'After Sid's wedding I'm going to speak to Dadaji...about us.'
 
Nivi blinked in surprise at Viren's words, they hadn't talked about it much before and she wasn't expecting it. Viren's hand was still in her hair and when she didn't say anything he stroked the back of her neck and she shivered. 'That's ok right? You're ok with that?' Viren looked a little worried and Nivi smiled as she nodded a little shyly; thanks to the pundit Divya and Sid's wedding was just next month so it was perfect really. Viren gave a relieved laugh and pulled Nivi's face down to his again, this time giving her no time to steady herself as he kissed her like he'd wanted to all day.  
 
'Viren..!' Nivi pulled away a few moments, trying to catch her breath and Viren sat up and closed his eyes, feeling dazed and breathless. 'Maybe I should speak to them sooner...' Viren's voice was unsteady as he looked at her but Nivi shook her head, 'Nahi Viren, let Di and Sid have their moment, we can wait a little can't we?' Viren sighed; he'd known she'd say that which was why he'd said after Sid's wedding in the first place but he still gave her a pained look and Nivi went red as he said 'Teek hai Moti...but we'll have a reeeally short engagement, ek do din kaafi hai!'
 
'Umm I think we should talk about all that later...' Nivi found Viren's impatience really cute but it embarrassed her too. She said they should be going and went to get up but Viren pulled her back down and hugged her from behind and whispered in her ear, 'I know you're just as impatient as I am Nivi...mujhse kya chupana?!' Nivi felt herself blush even more at his teasing tone. 'Viren...kya keh rahe ho?! Do you ever think before you...' before Nivi could finish her sentence Viren started to tickle her and she couldn't help laughing, 'Viren!! Stop it..!' she managed to grab his hands and then turned to look at him, still gasping with laughter,
 
'We're already late Viren, please let's just go?' Nivi looked at him pleadingly and Viren felt himself almost give in before he leaned back and smiled suddenly shaking his head, 'Make it worth my while and we'll go...!' He winked and Nivi's mouth fell open at his cheeky request; she hit him on the shoulder and Viren laughed, 'That's not helping Moti!' Nivi shook her head, 'You're awful...' Viren leaned forward and rested his arms on her shoulders, 'Maybe I'm awful...but you still love me.'
 
He smiled into her eyes sweetly and Nivi felt herself melt. She sighed and rolled her eyes exaggeratedly before leaning forward and giving him a soft kiss on the cheek, 'Ho gaya?! Ab chale please?' Viren nodded and gave her a quick kiss on the cheek too before shrugging, 'Haan toh phir chalo naa, maine kab manaa kiya tha?!' He looked totally innocent all of a sudden and Nivi gave him a look of disbelief as he laughed and got up quickly before she could hit him again. 
 
As they walked to his bike Nivi wondered if Viren had considered what they'd do if the families didn't agree... the thought scared her and she missed what Viren was saying as they reached his bike. 'What's wrong Moti? Are you annoyed...? I'm sorry, you're just too cute!' Viren held his ears and tilted his head to one side cutely and Nivi felt a sharp pain at the thought of losing him. 'I'm not mad Viren...it's just, what if...' she couldn't even bring herself to say it; she swallowed and tried again, 'What will we do if they don't...' before she could finish Viren took her hands in his and cut her off.
 
'It doesn't matter what they say Nivi...I love you and I promise I'll do whatever it takes. We can't keep quiet forever because we're worried they might not agree!' Nivi knew Viren was right but she still felt uneasy till he hugged her and she felt a little better. 'You're with me right?' he asked softly into her hair and she nodded, 'Haan Viren...always.' Viren pulled away and kissed her on the forehead, 'Good! Now why are we worrying, there's still a whole months worth of celebrations to get through!' Nivi smiled back and nodded and felt some of the anxiety leave her as they made their way home; she knew she'd be fine as long as Viren was with her.


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Ashma di,iam almost fainted,what a chapter di, just amazing,wonderful... I clearly imagine the cute face of viren and nivi,,iam not missing niviren,, becoz they are infront of my eyes through your FF... Very precious FF and love story... Hug

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Originally posted by love_never_dies

Ashma di,iam almost fainted,what a chapter di, just amazing,wonderful... I clearly imagine the cute face of viren and nivi,,iam not missing niviren,, becoz they are infront of my eyes through your FF... Very precious FF and love story... Hug
 
Aww thanks Bowya! Thank u so much for saying that, i feel a little relieved actuallyHug Its so sweet of u to say that, im glad i can keep them in front of ur eyesEmbarrassed thanks for reading xx

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i can just say wowww...no more words to describe... u r really really awesome :)

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Posted: 18 July 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anjaani07

Originally posted by love_never_dies

Ashma di,iam almost fainted,what a chapter di, just amazing,wonderful... I clearly imagine the cute face of viren and nivi,,iam not missing niviren,, becoz they are infront of my eyes through your FF... Very precious FF and love story... Hug

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<font color="#330066">Aww thanks Bowya! Thank u so much for saying that, i feel a little relieved actuallyHugIts so sweet of u to say that, im glad i can keep them in front of ur eyesEmbarrassed thanks for reading xx</font>
welcum di,,really your words have very much depth and volume... You are such a gifted writer... Continue soon as possible...

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Posted: 18 July 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
*screams* OMV Diii, 3 new chapters!!!!! They were all just AWESOME!!! loved it ... SO romantic its driving Silly i just LOVED IT!!!! First chapter(55): Okay I got like SUPER excited when I saw that u updated that Istraight away started reading the chapters on page 113, so I was reading them and then when I got to the end of Chapter 57 I was like okayyy where is chapter 55 LOL so then I whent back and read chapter 55 haha, I get too hyper whenever you update lol. Okay I just loved that chapter to teh core, super cute and OMV Di u mentioned the C word Shocked as in C for CAT!!!! Ouch *screams* that scared me to death!!! Diii cats scare the hell out of me! haha okay anyhow, moving to chapter 2 I have no words seriously that was just SUPERB!!! loved it, it was super romantic! Awww my baby fell asleep awww he's working too much I hope he has a good rest, its worrying me. Unhappy  and that part was just HILARIOUS when he reaches to tug Nivi's hair to check if he was sleeping or not ROFL and Nivi's reply 'Viren, we're grown ups now, you can't keep pulling my hair whenever you feel like it' ROFL HAHAHAH taht was just hilarious!! awww Viren is just super cute!! Okay i could go on forever, but I'll stop now lol...AMAZING chapters Di...totally LOVED IT!!! *flying kisses*  x

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Posted: 18 July 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged

beautiful asma, ur 3 chapters were just awesome..and poor viren, itna kaam mat karwao usse.. and shaadi within a month..viren is just so impatient..

well just loved it..after such a hectic day this was what i needed.Hug
 
thanks for the pm..


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