Ashma di thanx for updating your FF after a long time... Missed your chapters alot.. π First chapter is very touching,, i got tears while reading it... It have pain and heart broken to the core, i could feel it... The way u have described is really great,, very well written di.. π Second chapter is the mixing of pain, excitement and caring... I like the way Dadi understand nivi... Awesome one di... πI have this in mind abt the next chapters, that is,,Hope nivi will tell viren, befor keshav will take further step(without the knowledge and concern of NT dadi) becoz of his business partner which may worsen the situation more... Continue soon as possible this time di.. π€ Edited by love_never_dies - 12 years ago
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