Honestly I'm speechless!!!
Okay I'm gonna contradict myself now. Gonna try to put it in words you described the whole scene so well that I can sit here
and write a whole Essay on it. Viren's anger and him wanting to knock the living day lights out of him. Phew hiw good was that. I could picture the whole thing. The way he then spoke to Sid was so good, exactly how a crazy lover would react.
Also the part where nivi was missing viren and the text loved it. I was also missing him and feel anxious For her.
Okay I think I better shut up now. Coz I'm gonna read it again. Was tooo good.
Love you Asma. X
Oh Asma I really can't wait for the next update please hurry and make it a long chapter.
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