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-Atiya-

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful asma just beatiful chaps 🤗

viren is impatient for his shaadi 😳 too cute !!! he is da cutest thing 😳 the way he teases her asks for things frm her ahh just too cute

he is da best !! i just luv him man..he sets my heart on fire ☺️ !! he wants to make nivi his as soon as possible 🤣 !! i wish uski iss mission mein rukawat na aaye !! haahaaa use pure ek month wait karna hoga !! he is cute (i noe i m using dis cute shabd bar bar cuz i m outta words 😆)

nn fir se kiss haayee asma marne ka irada hai kya 😉

i srsly becum breathless wen u describe kiss part 😆

k k meri speech puri huyi

thnk u soo much sweetie for such luvly chapters 🤗

Edited by kinha123 - 12 years ago

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Asma

@anjaani07

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMV thanks Atiya! Yep Viren is too cute and very impatient LOLZ

And about the kiss...well its Viren here, he never wastes a single moment😉 Hope ur breath has recovered from it lol😳

Thanks for reading and enjoying🤗

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-Atiya-

@-Atiya-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjaani07
OMV thanks Atiya! Yep Viren is too cute and very impatient LOLZ

And about the kiss...well its Viren here, he never wastes a single moment😉 Hope ur breath has recovered from it lol😳

Thanks for reading and enjoying🤗

haahaaa🤣

ya muake pe chauka 😉

n yes dear my breath has becum stable 😛

luv ya gal 🤗

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ccbm_lover

@ccbm_lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW what an amazing writing skills my dear. I always wait for your update as they were fantastic work stress reliever.Thank you for entertaining us.

Archana

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598617

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Posted: 12 years ago

Asma jaan... Omg awesome chapters as usual. NivRen are so comfortable with each other... Truly loved it, how they found peace just by been near each other... Awww Viren fell asleep on her lap, so sweet and romantic. Loved how Nivi was playing with his hair and face... Viren is so naughty lol so cute how he told Nivi, he knows she also can't wait till they get married... Truly love it when he teases her:) 3 great great chapters, loved each and every part of it... It was full with NivRen magic. Thanks swti. Love ya:):):)

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Asma

@anjaani07

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Posted: 12 years ago

Atiya, love you too🤗 and 'mauka pe chauka' is right!

Archana, thank u for reading and enjoying my writing! Glad it helps ease the stress!

Shamima! Love you sweetie🤗 Thanks for ur sweet comments, yep Viren is so naughty, its so much fun to write about them like that, glad u enjoyed it!

Preetha thank you! And dont worry about Viren, he works hard but also plays hard so he'll be fine😉

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prajee

@prajee

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely updates asma... :)

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aamina

@-aamina-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Okay!!!! where do I begin from????
It was absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!
Aww I wish I was Nivi...viren is just sooo cute, I don't blame her for not waking him up as I would just do the same and admire his drop dead gorgeous looks.
Thanks Asma for the Monday treat. Just love your updates. Mwah

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Sunaina

@Butifuleyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awww Asmsa simply wonderful chapters. I wish it really was on tv.

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

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Posted: 12 years ago

Asma it was simply mind blowing. Loved there little noke jonkh and lunch date was just priceless! Viren sleeping on her lap, that hug in sleep and how can i forget the kiss...feeling butterflies in my stomach. Oh and how Viren wants to talk to dadaji earlier about them that totally shows that he just cant keep himself away from Nivi...😍 hai that was too sweet. In last chapter towards end where Nivi is worried about what if no one agrees how Viren hugs her to comfort...love it all.

Bottom line is these chapters were more romantic than I imagined 👏

Thanks 🤗

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