I had this waiting for a good 20 days in my computer, this part. I'm completely paranoid about posting this, I think I've become a bit psychotic since the time I've stopped working like a maniac and plunged into other areas like setting up a home😆
I feel better already :) Love ya all :) sorry Fari, jiya, roshnee n all, u guys rocks :) I'll update my detailed replies later, now I'm just upset with myself for messing it up,
Abt the UPDATE - I just went back into the initial phase of MN, its confusing to be honest!! sigh
So our brave hero is all set to meet his heroine .While
he makes his way to her heart (erm, city more like!) we get a peek into their
thoughts. Now, now, don't ask me if that wasn't what you were getting all
along? The answer is no. No? I can hear at least some of you ask, smirking no
less (do u realize how Nupurish you are? ). Well No is my answer! You
hear their version, they make it look like its all fun and more fun. It isn't
always so, they are normal people, you see, so they feel all sorts of complex
emotions. They just don't choose to tell YOU! (now look who is smirking..!).
Ok, don't fret alright? Mein hoon na? (err wasn't this
sentence used way before SRK said it? Plus I adore it from the point Mayank
did). In case you are wondering who the hell is talking, let me tell you I'm
offended, because I happen to be writing this story, hmmmp!
Fine fine, I'll get to the point.
Our hero was on the way to Mumbai, sitting in a Volvo AC
bus! ( They are generally very comfortable so perfect for some day dreaming
about the heroine). Where is our heroine you wonder? In the class of course
(don't you remember I said earlier Hero has 10 days off, while heroine doesn't?
) ..and she is busy day dreaming too about our hero of course! See don't judge
her and all that because she isn't attentive in class, the poor girl has a best
friend who makes her study over the phone!! Over the phone- Imagine the horror,
the same instrument most teenagers use for cooing endlessly over. IF ever anyone had the right to day dream in
class it was Nupur Bhushan, simply because she was ahead in her lessons from
the rest of her class.
Mayank settled himself down into his reclining seat and
closed his eyes lightly (Always makes day dreaming easier don't you think?)
while Nupur had to keep her eyes well open so as not to be thrown out of class.
Vulnerable and
Strong
Its strange how things work in life, but the first time he
met her was in total contradiction to the strong nature that she possessed. It
was the vulnerability he saw in her eyes that had him spell bound for a
fleeting moment. He had been confused and clueless on how to react to her as
her saved her from a men's loo. She had left just like that, before he could
react. He was unsettled, something that had never happened before.
She had never thanked him for saving her the first time. She
was too vulnerable at that time, definitely not her best moment but she had seen concern
in the eyes of her savior. Unable to react after an ordeal of the unexpected
kind, she had left, without a thank you.
The next time was definitely her strong moment! He had received
a biting response for his sarcasm when she fell into his arms. Unbelievably,
she was the complete anti-thesis to the swooning heroine, she often pictured
herself to be. By simply standing her ground she shook him up.
He never once tried to charm, that was what was charming
about him. He din't want a girl falling into his arms. He was perfectly happy
in his world of books, thank you very much.
Listen guys, you may not admit it, but to us it was
pretty obvious that you both would fall for each other, had to, otherwise, what
is the point of this story? Sorry, meant to say, what is the point of the fates
conspiring to bring you together that way?
Our first dance
I know you wanted it badly, I just dint want to let you
down!
When you came to that
dance audition, I couldn't believe my luck.
I lost myself in you for a moment there just after we
danced.
I was lost more
than once, first you come, then you make me dance to your tunes and literally
sweep me off my feet and expect me to
not fall for you?
Sorry for interrupting, but hey where am I interrupting,
you guys are not even having a conversation, technically . Its just your
individual thoughts . why does it seem like a conversation? Telepathy? D'uh!
The change
She was the change in his life, when she was upset, he tried
to cheer her up. Took her to a beach, ended up having more fun than he could
imagine.
He had broken the mold, complimented her even for being the
reason he had taken a break from studies.
Ok, I want to know, why does our hero forget to mention
the incredibly long phone call preceded by a huge round of embarrassing
questions by his- too smart for his good -mom?
A single Lie
That broke my heart it did. I had trusted you.
It broke my heart
too. I apologized you dint accept it.
I had never been so broken. I know I was wrong.
You still came for
the final dance. I couldn't have been more grateful!
hmm Why do I feel like I'm over hearing a private
conversation. I don't even feel like joking, I'm so gonna lose my readers.
Sigh.
The First Fight
They say the first s are special. The first hug, the first
kiss etc etc. By that parameter, this was special too, they had fought and
fought with passion.
He could not forgive her after having his trust broken. He
had trusted her way too much, she had made more space in his heart than anybody
else other than his mother had done all his life, in a matter of days. It was
like a heart break except he was not in love. Not just yet. At least that's
what he thought.
She knew she made a mistake, she had corrected it , she had
done everything in her power to make him realize it. She had apologized
endlessly. He was ruthless in his denial of her apology, she was not to stand
for his high-handed ways.
The way you both fight *Shakes head* , makes us want to
bang our heads somewhere, you dint notice the obvious then dint you? Not to
mention, you still haven't noticed it. Baah! * shakes head more
vigorously*
When you challenge me like that!
Nobody had EVER challenged me in studies. EVER.
I hadn't
challenged anybody in studies either!
Well yes, but you did.
Yes, I don't
really think it was the best move I made.
Trust me, it was. It made me respect you, especially when
you started taking your challenge very seriously.
Valid point there Mr Sharma, we are not about to forget
the look of reverence *giggle* on your face when she gave that wonderful answer
in class. *Some more giggles* not to mention that she nearly beat you dint she?
2 marks, that was way too close for comfort eh?
The Trip
Well the trip changed everything between them. Slowly and
steadily they had begun to appreciate each other, little by little. Just the
change in scenery had caused them to spend more time looking into each other's
eyes ' even while outwardly professing strongest dislike towards the other
person.
oh yes, we did notice that the hate had tapered off to
dislike *raises eyebrows* . Interesting the way she falls right into you and
you forget to stop looking at each other. Haven't you seen Dil hai ki manta
nahi Ms Bhushan? Friend eh? *scoffs*
Nupur was jolted out of her reverie with the end of class
bell, while Mayank was woken upon from his day dream by an unexpected sudden
brake.
Now that the hero and heroine are no more thinking of each
other, what do we do here? Ok tho phir milte hai break ke baad..!
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