When U Say Nothing At All, MN, Pt 7 Pg27 19Jun - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar im in love with this update...thy way u have describe there thoughts is amzing...
 
if by chance i would have missed it ..tu kiya hota...pm pls ...
 
whn will ths sadu sharma realize thngs need to b said...atleast once...unsaid love is sacry ...dam scary
 
n thn SA..i love her ...i just love her
waiting for the surprise...
n im lost in bth of ur song her ab mjhy raat din...there rim jhim giray sawan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Seriously girl, you nailed Mayank and Nupur's personality. It is wonderful. Especially when you are writing from their point of view. You even got Mayank's mom, Shilpa, correctly described. I throughly enjoyed that aspect of it.

Just a suggestion, I recommend putting quotes around dialogues in order to cause less confusion to the readers. :D

Take care.

-Nikki  
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, beautiful update.
loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Divya..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
You know what they say about laziness - its not nice! ðŸ˜† But since I don't like nice, i don't mind the delay in the PM.😆 Or do i? ðŸ˜¡ Okay, I am not nice, but I do mind the delay.  Please get someone to PM for you. ðŸ¤£ (No, i am not gonna tell you to give up your laziness, I need company 🤣 )

Man! How could I have not read this earlier? Like seriously? Like even if i had exams and then i was celebrating exam-over-day for three days thereafter? I SHOULD'VE read this you know? 😲 

This is just sooo AMAZING!! The whole thing, just wonderful. I love how this flows, like the images it forms in my head, all making it much too easier to imagine. Seriously, this update was a treat to read.

And i was so happy to read Shilpa's point of view. You understand the characters, period. Reading from you makes me so very happy. And reading real MN makes me all dreamy like. And reading Mayank-in-love makes me want to dive in a cheesy sappy sauce and just throw heart shaped balloons in air! (Get the image? Yes? Good. )

L O V E D it! Update soon. And please PM!! I have so many PMs to answer that i don't even check the forum. 😕 And i don't wanna be late. ðŸ˜ƒ

Love,
You-Know-Who (over rated now? 😆 I still like it!! )



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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update di
Simply rocking
u r superb

u portrayed our magical mayur brilliantly...
loved d whole update
waiting for next  part


Note: sorry for short comment ... i m busy with my exam...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update dear
I liked it
thanks for pm 
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Divya after 2night i'll start stalking u
coz i always got late
but somehow is good coz i got to read double update 😉
which is  great i really loved to core both updates
mayur adorable n u made them more cute
totally rocking updates 🤗 lov u for this hun n thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mind-blowing update divya

Cont soon

Lovin dis story
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Posted: 12 years ago

wow awesome ff Divya... I just read the all the parts in one go.. & I abosolutely loved it... The title is so good, "when you say nothing at all". Lol loved readin MN journey from Benji's POV... awesome... Please add me to your PM list...😊

Edited by princez_94 - 12 years ago