I take eternities in reading, and I'd like to have you pardon me for that.
I-love-you-you-love-me and best-surprise-ever make me feel awfully stupid, intrinsically. Meaning, I feel I am not fit for witnessing this, I should tell you. Hence, I have jittery sensations before I read romances, I'm just careful, just in case I decide to quit, which is why I hardly read fan fictions. I see I can't even write them anymore. But this is like Mayank and Nupur and I always tell you that I feel incredulously calm post reading any intelligent and original Mayank-Nupur formulation. You write the most irksome of things to me in an enjoyable manner, I like to read from you, always and especially once I finish combating my nauseating instinct on reading romance. You're one of the first writers I came across in IF and I have always liked your skill, and this one is most definitely as much magnificent as your older works, I'd only like to mention that you sway from first person to narration too much, which stains the grace of your story sometimes, I mean no offence. I'd do a virtual jig if you correct this error, and then um, this is awfully complete. You've captured Mayank and Nupur and party majestically!
Kankshita
