When U Say Nothing At All, MN, Pt 7 Pg27 19Jun - Page 9

brilliant part.
loved it.
 continue soon.

ufff yeh nupur bhi naa accidently khus hi story keh di ofcourse my swthrt mayank wuld go silent loool 

eee...divz😃...u know u r getting all my blessin g these days fo rmaking me feel so happy each time i read ut update.sadaa sukhi reho... 😆
uff.Nupur & mayank.mayank & nupur.i donno what shroud i write abt them to describe how much i love them, specially in this FF...that i hvn't write before!!!!!!!
Mayank-finally here the sadu admit that he actually love this nautanki done by his mom & his nupur...hehe as if we donno that already! 😆itna bhav kha rehe tha...what he said?he wud better die rather than watching devdas II played by them infront of him?😆uff that was so mayank .we know how much he love this Nupur & his mom ganged up against him.& he is so sure abt marrying to Nupur already.😲& thinking what will happen after that? wah...😃  but hello.someone( i mean u,divz, coz u r the writer) remind him plz  that first ,he at least need to tell the gal that he love her🤔  waise jaruri bhi nehi hai utna.when she is already planning how to Brainwash his mom to get married to him😆
u know here u made Nupur  really rocking! not that i love our Nupur any less in the show.but this one i found a bit different ina way she is more sure abt what she wants in life...with all her Nupurshish things remain intact..ummm now i m not sure whether u get what i m trying to say here🤔.forget it, lets just say i love Nupur here😃
oh u just fulfilled another MN dreams of mine...mayank getting sick &Nupur taking care of her...hayee i love both mayank's & nupur's version of this scene..but obviuously Nupur's one with those blushes added extra spice to it...& i looved it😳 keep fulfilling My MN dreams divz!🤗
& well i just realized here in thsi FF rohan, ash even though they act stupid,they actually make me smile.i mean what happening? well i guess the case is whenever someone is with MN ( not in between MN ) i started liking them.* bias me...😆 & plz don't let mayank put ideas of copy rights into Nupur's head😳...mann her By god & some other statement.that i use .& I m sure other MN fans also use we will all go bankrupt😆   & these lines of urs abt sam's realization cracked me up big time..  😆   What needs to happen for that realization to strike? Go to jail or something? i wish mjht cvs could read this!!!!!!!!😆
& at last the silence...😍...well i remember this happening in the show making mayank shocked & scared like hell when she asked this questions to him on phone...😆...so i m waiting to c what he do here? 😃
well divz.i realized even if i want , i can't write short comments for ur FFs..🤔..something is wrong with  me.i like this so much that i love to write abt every single thing happened😆...waiting for day after tomorrow now.when u will update next !!!!!!! till then take care..& i m not saying this coz u said i m cute😆..but i really love u!!🤗
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i didn't read ur PM. just straight log in & came to this page.u were asking whether u should slow down ur update? like seriously?   just keep updating, forget everything else..😳



Edited by Mou. - 12 years ago

Okay Divz i need to tell ya...u are an AWESOME writer be it emotional or fun🤗 Edited by Payal-15 - 12 years ago

 u UPDATED 2 parts???! 😔 i couldn't comment 😔
now i will...😃 but abhi i am a little sleepy...yeah i know,its afternoon...but i'm kinda following ur time zones 😳 (see,miss u so much 😉 😛 ) will pakka pakka, unreserve this...in evening :)

AND,i loved this part 🤣 🤣 especially,Nupur Bhushans pov's n blabber in ( ) ROFL full nautanki i swear...loved this part a lot 😃

BRB

Originally posted by: myownarea

@arjun-forever Thank u so much, will surely PM u :)