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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 7)

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:08am | IP Logged

 

CHAPTER NINE

 

Maan an geet were roaming around markets to buy gifts for ttheir family, geet sees a ice-cream stall she ask maan to buy hera ie-cream

Geet: maan mujhe ice-cream khani hai.

Maan: -------

Geet: maan aap sun rahe hai na mujhe ice-cream khani hai.

Saying this she turns and is heel shock to find no maan there.

Geet: maan!!!! Maan!!!!, aap kaha hai  maan???

Geet: maannn

Geet gets up from her sleep shouting maannn

Maan : geet ,, geet ,, kya hua?

Geet: hugs him and maan maan

Maan: ha geet mein yahi hu, tumne koi bura sapna dekha hoga.

Geet: hmmm.

Maan: chalo sou jao. And he takes her in his embrace.

She slpt hugging maan tightly.

morning

It was morning when geet felt something crawling on her neck,so she stired in her sleep a little.she again felt something,so she slowly opened her eyes to see what it is

And she saw that maan's one hand was around her waist and her both legs were in between his legs,geet blushes seeing their position and thinking about their last nite..suddenly something bites her on her neck and she shock to see that who it was, it was none other than maan . he was kissing her neck and then he bite her .

Maan : good morning my baby

Geet: good morning

And she starts moving away

Maan: are aise kaise jaa sakti ho tum mujhe bina good mrng kiss diye hue,ha?

Geet blushes at his demand,he slowly leans on her and he is surprised that she is not backing out,he smiles and kisses her on her lips ,kiss was supposed to be small and sweet but it turns into passionate one,,geet also responds with equal passion..

They broke apart and geet hugs maan.

Maan: aaj hamara yaha akhri din hai,hum kal ghar jaa rahe hai..

Geet: maan hum kal hi sab ko bata denge ki humari shaadi hogai hai..

Maan: lekin hume dekhna hoga ki ghar par sabka mood kaisa hai.

Geet: hmmm thk hai. Lekin jaise hi mauka milega hum sabko bata denge.

Maan: ha thik hai mere shona!!!!!

Geet: chalo utho hume market jaana hai, ghar walo ke liye shopping karni hai mujhe.

Maan: ha thik hai chalo.

Maan and geet roams around lazily as it is their last day here

Maan and geet purchased all type speciality of the place.

When they finished their shopping it was almost afternoon

Maan: geet bas hogaya ab mujhe bhook lagi hai,chalo kuch khate hai.

Geet: ha maan bas aur thodi der fir hum challenge

Maan:nahi mujhe bohot bhuk lagi hai, chalo warna mein tumhe utha ke le jaunga.

Geet: geet's eyes widen in shock bcoz she knw that maan will  surely do that if she will not go now,he wont even regret it.

Geet: ha ha thk hai chalo mene kab mana kiya.

Maan  smirks looking at her face expression.

 

Maan and geet goes to a lavish restaurant and had their lunch and then

Maan: chalo abhi ghar chalet hai.

Geet: nahi abhi thodi aur shopping baaki hai

Maan: ohhh!!! Not again geet plzzz

Kal hum ghar jaa rahe hai pata nahi fie hume akele me milne ka mauka mila ga ya nahi aur wapas jaake mujhe business bhi sabhalna hai..

Geet: aise kaise tie nahi milega.hum roz milenge.

Maan and geet goes back to their room

Geet comes out of bathroom wearing a loose white shirt and a white Patiala salwar looking tempting foe maan

Geet looks at maan who was looking at her with so much desire in his eyes.

Geet looks down as she is able to look in that desirable eyes ,if she will look in that she will loose her control.

Maan approaching geet

Maan: u look tempting, agar hum majbhur nahi hote na me tumhe kabka kha gaya hota.

Geet turns red with his wild comment

Geet: hands him towel and ask him to take a shower.

Geet packs her and maan's bag till he was in bathroom, bcoz she knw once if he comes out he will not let do anything.

She smile at his comment that he gave her before going to bathroom.

Maan comes out of bathroom and sees geet packing last remaining things

Maan: geet thoda aaraam kar lo fir karna baadme packing.

Geet: bas thoda hi baaki hai

Maan: yeh ladki aise nahi maanegi

He goes near her and picks her up in his arms and carry her to bed

Geet:maan yeh aap kya kar rahe hai,mujhe neech utarye

Maan: nahi thoda araam karlo pehle.

He lays he on bed and she again starts moving from bed,maan sees this and comes on top of her .pressing his body on her.

Now she not able to move even a bit.

Geet: maan

Maan: sou jao warna mein tumhe aise hi daba kar rakhunga.

Geet immitiately closes her eyes

Maan smiles at her then they both sleep cuddling to eachother.

 

When geet woke up it was evening

Geet looked at maan , he was peacefully slping looking like a adorable kid.

Geet: maan uthiye sham ho gai hai.

Maan: hugs her and sleep not at all wanting to get up.maan plz get up mujhe packing karni hai, hume sawere hi nikalna hai na.

Maan: hmmm. Slowly opening her eyes.  

Maan: he gets up and goes to washroom.and  soon comes out

Maan: geet mein Rahul aur mohit ke pass jaa raha hu.unhe kal nikalne ka time batana hai.

Geet: she was busy in arranging clothes

Ha thik hai.

 

 

 

Precap= Rahul: are maan aaj yaha hamari akhri raat hai, thoddi daaru tou pee hi sakte hai, aur waise bi thodi daaru peene se kuch nahi hota.

Mohit: ha maan , chal abhi muh khol aur yeh pee.

 

Geet: maan sambhaliye apne aapko aapne bohot pee rakhi hai.

Maan: kisses her neck and exposed cleavage..

Geet: moan     mmmhhh    maannn

 

 

 

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:59am | IP Logged
awesome as usual, i hope dono jaldi bata dain shadi ka,continue soon plz i just luv ur FF
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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Awosome one
Pls do update soon
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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 6:33am | IP Logged
nice update
pre cap -interesting but same time  little scary
pls not to create any problem in maaneet's life due to this night.other wise i am waiting to enjoy  next update

by the way  you forget to pm me



Edited by abina03 - 16 June 2011 at 6:34am
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awesome update. maan and geet's relationship is building now.
 
precap seems interesting. pls update soon
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Beautiful part!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!
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awesome ... 

add me to ur pm list ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 4:31am | IP Logged

CHAPTER TEN 

MAAN KNOCKING ON RAHUL'S DOOR

RAHUL OPENS DOOR AND MAAN GETS IN THE ROOM

MAAN: RAHUL HUME KAL SAWERA HI NIKAL NA HAI,,,THIK HAI

RAHUL: HA VO TOU THIK HAI,, LEKIN AAJ RAAT KA KYA PROGRAM HAI?

MAAN: KUCH NAHI KISI ACHE SE RESTUARANT ME DINNER KARENGE AUR JALDI SOU JAYENGE AUR KAL JALDI BHI TOU NIKAL NA HAI.

RAHUL: AAJ HAMARI YAHA AKHRI RAAT HAI TOU KYU NA KUCH DHAMAAL KARE.

MUSKAN: YEH BOHOT ACHI IDEA HAI,,,, HAI NA RAHUL??

MOHIT AND SANAYA ALSO JOIN THEM

MOHIT: KYA ACHI IDEA HAI BHAI HUME BHI TOU BATAO?

RAHUL: ARRE HUM SOCH RAHE THE KI AAJ HAMARI YAHA AKHRI RAAT HAI TOU KYU NA KUCH DHAMAAL KARE.

SANAYA: FABULOUS IDEA

MOHIT: MAST IDEA HAI,, AUR MENE SUNA HAI KI YAHA EK PUB HAI USKA KYA THA HMMM'.. HA YAAD AAYA    "DHIK CHAK"

GEET: "DHIK CHAK"    YEH KAISA NAAM HAI  AUR KIS CHEEZ KA NAAM HAI?

MAAN: YAHA KE EK PUB KA NAAM HAI.

GEET:  OHH!!!  LEKIN MENE KABHI SUNA HI NAHI

SAMEERA COMING FROM NOWHERE

SAMEERA: ISKA MATLAB TUMNE HUMSE JHOOT KAHA KI TUM YAHA PEHLE BHI AACHUKI HO, KYU KI AGAR TUM YAHA AAI HOTI TOU TUMHE PATA HOTA ISKE BAARE ME.

 MOHIT : SAMEERA GEET KO YEH ISLIYE NAHI PATA HAI KYUKI AAJ HI ISS PUB KA INAUGRATION HAI.

SAMEERA: WHATEVER.

GEET LOOKING AT MAANAND ASURING HIM THAT SHE IS OKAY.

MAAN: TOU FIR DONE AAJ RAAT 9 BAJE HUM NEECHE WAITING AREA ME MILENGE. HUM SAB KE PASS APNI APNI CAR TOU HAI HI, HUM USSE HI JAISE AAYE THE WAISE HI JAYENGE.

SAMEERA: MAAN ME AUR TUM JAYENGE, GEET SASHA KE SAATH AAJAYEGI .

MAAN: NAHI SAMEERA GEET MERI RESPONSIBILITY HAI AUR ME USSE AKELE NAHI JAANE DE SAKTA HU.

MOHIT: COME ON GUYS CHALO HUME READY BHI HONA HAI,,, AUR HA PUB KI THEME HAI  " AQUA "

EVERY ONE MOVE TO THERE ROOMS

AFTER REACHING ROOM MAAN CLOSES DOOR AND HUGS GEET FROM BACK AND KISSES HER NECK .

GEET: MAAN KYA KAR RAHE HO AAP? CHALO JALDI KARO HUME LATE HO JAYENGA,, HUME ABHI TAK READY BHI HONA HAI

MAAN: HMMM'. NOT READY TO REMOVE HIS HEAD FROM THE CROOK OF HER NECK'

GEET: MAAN CHODIYE NA,, MUJHE READY BHI HONA HAI'

MAAN: KYA GEET TUM BHI NA ,, MERE KAPDE NIKAL DOU ME NAHANE JAA RAHA HU.

GEET'S EYES WIDEN

MAAN LOOKING AT GEET EXPRESSION,

MAAN: MERA MATLAB HAI KI CUBOARD SE MERE LIYE KAPDE NIKAL DOU TABHI TAK ME NAHA KE AATA HU'

GEET LOOKING DOWN WITH EMBASSRESMENT.

MAAN LOOK AT GEET WITH A SMRIK.

MAAN SLOWLY COMES CLOSE TO HER AGAR TUM CHAHO TUM MERE PEHNE HUE BHI KAPDE BHI UTTAR SAKTI HU ( LOLZZ)

GEET TURNING RED

GEET: PUSHING MAAN INSIDE BATHROOM,,, MAAN AAP JAHIYE NAHAKE AYIYE TABHI TAK ME AAP KE KAPDE CUBOARD   ME SE NIKAL TI HU.

MAAN WENT INTO SHOWER SMILING AT GEET.

GEET  REMOVES MAANS  CLOTHES

AQUA BLUE SHIRT AND A BLACK JEANS AND A BLACK JACKET

MAANS COMES OUT OF THE BATHROOM AND LOOKS AT HIS CLOTHES REMOVED BY GEET

MAAN:  PERFECT   WAS THE ONLY WORD CAME OUT OF HIS MOUTH

GEET: MAAN AAP KE KAPDE MENE NIKAL DIYE HAI, AAP READY HO JAYIYE ME FRESH HOKE AATI HU.

MAAN: OKAY

GEET COMES OUT OF BATHROOM WEARING A FULL LENGTH AQUA BLUE COLUR DRESS,HAVING A SLIT SHOWING HER WHITE MILKY LEGS,HER DRESS COLOUR WAS  MATCHING MAAN'S SHIRT. 

IT WAS FITTING HER FIGURE PERFECTLY….IT WAS LOOKING AMAZING ON HER,,, IT WAS LOOKING LIKE IT IS MADE FOR HER ONLY…

SHE GAVE HER HAIR A WET LOOK WHICH WAS ADDING MORE FIRE TO HER SEXY LOOK.

MAAN  WAS OUT OF ROOM FOR SOME WORK WHEN HE ENTERED ROOM GEET WAS STANDING IN FRONT OF MIRROR.

SHE WAS WEARING A BACK LESS DRESS…MAAN WAS LOOKING AT HER SEXY BACK WITH LUST FULL EYES. GEET  SAW DESIRE IN HIS EYES THROUGH MIRROR, SHE BEND DOWN HER HEAD  TURNING RED..

MAAN SLOWLY APPROCHES HER AND SLIDES HIS HAND

AROUND HER WAIST AND TURNS HER ,, NOW SHE WAS FACING HIM BUT HER EYE LASHES WERE DOWN CASTED,, IT WAS LOOKING LIKE IT HAS CASTED ON ALL OVER HER FACE.

MAAN KEPT HIS FINGURE UNDER HER CHIN  AND RAISED HER HEAD. HER EYES MET HIS EYES AND SUDDENLY HE KISSED HER PASSIONATELY ,,, GEET REPLIED WITH FULL PASSION ..MAAN WAS RUBBING HER BACK SENSOUSLY WAKING HER HIDDEN  DESIRE, GEET WAS MOANING INSIDE HIS MOUTH…

MAAN SLOMLY PULLED THE STRIP OF  HER DRESS,MAKING  HER SHOULDER  HE SUCKS HER SKIN OVER THERE, AND HE WAS ABOUT TO BITE HER WHEN GEET COMES BACK TO HER SENSES AND SHE PUSHES HIM AND RUNS TO THE WINDOW SIDE CATCHING HER BREATH AND SAME TIME BLUSHING BADLY

MAAN COMES AND HUGS HER FROM

MAAN: SORRY ME THODA BEHECK GAYA THA.

GEET: KOI BAAT NAHI,GALTI MERI BHI HAI, MENE BHI APKO ROKA NAHI.

MAAN LOOKS AT HER AND SMILE

SEEING HIM SMILING SHE UNDRSTANDS HIS INTENTION, AND SHE BLUSHES .

MAAN: CHALO JALDI WARNA HUM LATE HO JAYENGE,,, AUR PATA NAHI MERA MOOD FIR BADAL JAYE

GEET: DOU MIN MEIN ABHI AAYI…

GEET GETS READY AND THEN THEY BOTH HEADS TOWARDS LOBBY WERE ALL THERE FRIENDS WERE WAITING FOR THEM.

 

 

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 PRECAP:=  PARTY AND…………..

OOYE OOYE ,,,OOYE OOYE

OOYE OOYE,,,OOYE OOYE

( FROM DOUBLE DHAMAAL)

CHAPTER TEN


Edited by shazia24 - 19 June 2011 at 6:17am

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