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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 5)

ritzy09 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
awesome update...please pm me next time

shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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supreb update.

love it.
abina03 Goldie

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lovely update
ambbiha IF-Rockerz

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hi just read ur ff hum aapke ho gaye
awesome concept
add me in ur buddy list
continue soon
preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
wow lovely interesting ff...they r married hope sameera doesnt play anything foul bw them...
i just want them to declare that they r married very soon...
can u change the title when u update with the part no,page no, will b easy to browse..thanks
pl cont soon
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just read ur ff hum aapke ho gaye
awesome concept
loved it to the core
if possible add me to your pm list
 do continue asap
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whenever i m adding u guys to buddy list its showing me error,,,plzz give me solution for this problem,, or u guys snd me buddy request if u want pms.

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Maan and geet enters party hall together with

Holding eachothers hands.

All girls were going crazy seeing maan ,while boys

Were fascinating with geet in their arms.they all

Were jealouse of maan .

Geet: maan hume sab aise ghoor ghoor ke kyu

Dekh rahe hai.

Maan: kyuki tum pari lag rahi ho isliye ladke dekh

Rahe hai aur tum mere saath ho isliye ladkiya tumhe

Ghusse se dhek rahe hai.

Geet giving maan an angry look

There was an girl who was rich spoil bratt.she was

Tall fair slim with perfect figure.she really liked maan

And wanted him with her today at any cost.

Her name was veronica.she was a business man's

Only daughter.

Maan and geet went to their were gang who were

Waiting for them.

Rahul: hey man u r luking gud and oh my my see

Sum1 is lookins super hot.

Geet blushes at his comment

Maan holds geet by her waist and tighten his grip on

Her waist,

Maan: kyu nahi hogi akhie vo mere saath iss party

Mein jo aayi hai.

Geet tries to herself from his grip everything goes

In vain in front of maan.

Geet: excuse me guys I need to get a drink for me.

See u latr.maan leaves her.

And from nowhere sameera come and hugs maan

Sameera: maan ah my god u r looking damn hot.

Trailing her finger on his chest.

Maan removes her finger and gives her a small


Maan sees geet getting jealouse of sameera so he

Thinks why not to play along with it for sometime.

Geet: hay babaji yeh maan bhi na, mene kaha than a

Ki hum sab ke samne apne rishte ko chupake

Rakhenge…abhi dekho mujhe jalane ke liye uss

Sameera se kaise chipak rahe hai.

At the same time a boy comes to geet and ask her

For dance. Geet looks at maan who was bsy in

Talking with sameera.

Geet: abhi dikhati hu;

She agrees for dance and goes on the dance floor

Boy: wat ur name?

Geet: geet.

Boy: apko mera naam nahi janna?

Maan looked back at geet but she was not there

So he starts searching her ,and he founds her

Dancing with vicky

Geet: ohh sorry…. Apka naam kya hai?

Boy : Vicky.

Geet: okay!!!

Boy: u look beautiful!!!

Geet: thank u..

Suddenly he starts caressing her waist and then

Digs his fingers in her skin.

Geet: yeh aap kya kar rahe ho? Codo mujhe jaana


Vicky: itni jaldi nahi. He starts pressing her body

On his…geet was tring to push him with her all

Power and all went in vain.

Maan noticed this from far space.

Vicky was about to open her saari pallu when

Something hits his nose and fell unconscious on


Geet runs and hides her face in his chest.

Maan caresses her back for sometime.

Rahul: carry on guys nothinginteresting is going on

Here. Geet  r u alrite?

Geet: haa.

Maan leaves geet and goes near bar and orders

Drinks for him and drinks one aftr other.

Geet sees this and comes near maan.

Geet: maan bas hogaya, itna mat pijie.

Maan: tum yaha se chali jao. Mujhe  mere haal par

Chod dou.

Geet: maan aap mera gussa apne aap par kyu nikal

Rahe ho?

Maan:kon ho tum meri, kyu tumhe meri itni parwah


Geet: patni hu apki…

Maan: tou jab mene tumhe sab ke samne chuha tou

Tum waha se chali kyu gayi?

Geet: maan mene apse pehle bhi kaha hai ki,hum

Iss rishte ko itni jaldi sab ke samne nahi laenge.

Maan understands her and says sorry.

Maan: geet I m sorry

Geet: plz aap maafi mat maangiye.

Chaliye room mein chalet hai.

Maan tries to stand bt his gives up and he lands on

Geet,geet  holds him and says

Geet: mein apko pakad ti hu. And she carries him to

Room, but maan asks her to take him to terrace,she

Takes him there, it was beautiful as it was full moon

Night. Maan balances himself on an iron ladder

And asks geet to come sits on his lap.

{ same way as in murder in that song bheege hote


Geet comes and sits on his lap keeping her both

Legs on one side facing maan, unsure if he will be

Able to balance himself along with her or not.

Maan slowly slides his hand around her waist inside

Her pallu. Geet gasp as his cold hand touches her

Soft skin.

Maan: geet tumhe pata hai mene jab tumhe pehli

Baar dekha tabhi mene soch liya tha ki meri dulhan

Sirf aur sirf tum hi banogi . aur dekho aaj tum meri

Aur sirf meri ho.

He starts kissing her neck passionately,,sucking

Her skin and bites her giving her love bites on her

Neck,, geet moans loudly " maaan".

Maan starts sucking were he had bite her…

He gives her wet kisses all over her face,1st on her

Eyes nd then on her nose nd then on her chin and

Cheeks. He kisses her lip's corner but not her lips.

He teases her by not kissing her lips.

Geet gets frustrated and holds maan's collar and

Pulls him with force and jams her lips on his.

Firstly maan don't kisses

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