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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 4)

abina03 Goldie

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
part 6
lovely update
you really given an unexpected twist in the story
loved it
pre cap is scary what happen?????????

shazia24 Groupbie

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 3:36am | IP Logged
thank guys

u all will get new twist in every 10 parts.
so just wait and watch.

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29priya Goldie

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 4:46am | IP Logged
wow superb part...
so they got married
 loved it...

Edited by priyanki - 24 May 2011 at 4:46am

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shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged

wow..awsome update.

love it

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GurruKiDeewani- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
waiting update soon
GurruKiDeewani- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
kab update karo gi missing it plz continue soon Cry

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Chapter seven

Rahul and others were searching them from

morning. Maan and geet were also vry close to reach their place with the help of marking that maan

has done.

Maan geet and Rahul found eachother.

Rahul: where were u guys.i m searching u frm

the morng.

Maan: hum bhi raasta hi dhund rahe the.

Geet quickly hides her sindoor and

mangalsutra with her duppatta.

Rahul: geet tum thik hai and gives her friendly


Geet: ha.. I m okay

They all go to there hotels were all were waiting

 for them.

Muskan:geet tu thik hai?And gives her tight hug

Geet: mein thik hu muskan,,baas thodi thak gayi hu

Suddenly from no where sameera comes and

hugs maan tightly,

maan just gives her a friendly her

and here geet's finger turn into fist.maan saw

that and moves away from sameera and stands

near geet

sameera: maan tumhe iss gavar geet ke wajah

se jungle mein jaana pada.

Maan: sameera chup raho { yells at her}

Rahul: tum aur maan thak gaye honge jaao thoda aaraam karlo.shaam ko yaha party hai.

Maan and geet in their room

Maan: geet tum fresh ho jaao,mein abhi aata hu

Geet:aap kaha jaa rahe ho?

Maan: market se kuch lana hai

Geet: kya lana hai?

Maan: annoyed with her continues interrogation,,,,,,

aaj hamaari shaadi ki pehli raat matlab suhag

raat hai.isiliye c****m lane jaa raha hu.and goes

grinning,leaving a hell shocked geet behind him

with her mouth wide open.

Geet came back to her senses,and blushes

Remembering his words.

She goes to washroom and gets ready in her

Loose pajama and t-shirts,which was very loose

From shoulder,showing her 1 side shouder

Maan came after some time and saw geet sitting

In balcony with two cups of coffee,,maans comes

And hugs her from back keeping his hands on her

Stomach and pulls her closer to him.and snuggle

His nose in her hair smelling her scent.geet gasp

At this close proximity. She kept her head on

His chest relaxing a bit.

Geet: maan aap kaha gaye the?

Maan: taking out a small box and opend it and

It was having sindoor in it.he took a pinch of

Sindoor and placed it in her maang. Geet

Opned her eyes and placd her fore finger on it

And was shockd to find sindoor

Maan: mujhe pata tha ki tumhe yeh chahiye

Geet: thank u maan .and hugged him tightly.

Maan: to lighten the mood ,,,,,aur waise bhi

Geet me baar baar apna thump tou kaat naihh

Sakta na,isiliye mene socha ki tumhe ye lakar

De du.

Geet: smiling with tears in her eyes.

Geet: maan aap thak gaye hoge jaiye fresh ho

Kar apki aur meri coffe garam karke

Lati hu

Maan: thik hai

After sumtime maan and geet drinks their coffee

Cherishing the moment to the fullest.

Maan carries geet in his arms and keep her on


Maan: geet tum yaha sou jao me waha couch

Par sou jaata hu.

Saying this he starts moving to other direction.

Geet holds his hand and stops him

Geet: maan aap yahi sou jaiye,mujhe koi aitras

Nahi hai.

Maan: geet lekin tumne hi tou kaha tha ki hum

Distance maintain karenge.

Geet: maan saath sone ka ye matla nahi hai ki

Hume vo sab karna hi chahiye.

Maan: r u sure geet?

Geet: don't give him any answer and just pulls

Him down on the bed and hugs him tightly and

They both sleep peacefully cuddling to eachother

For some time as they have a party at night

At night

Gee slowly moves in her sleep and opens her eyes

To see maan face on her chest and his breath was

Teasing her nipples and his hands were on her

Waist holding tight.geet feels awkward. And she

Thinks that maan will feel guilty for this position,

So she carefully comes out of his hold and calls


Geet: hello muskan

Muskan: haa bol geet

Geet: aaj ki party ki theme kya hai

Mskan: black and red

Geet : thank u

And when she was about to keep her ph she hears

Muskan moaning{ it means Rahul was giving her

Love bites,so she moans}

Geet: muskan kya hua?

Muskan:breathing heavily…kuch nahi geet.chal bye


Geet goes to bathroom and comes out in her red

Saari with wet hairs.she was wiping her hair when

Some droplets land on maan face which broke his


Opening  his eyes he was the most beautiful scene

In front of his eyes.

Geet was trying to tie her blouse'a knot,but she was


Maan slowly moves towards geet and comes behind

Her and ties her knot,,geet gasps as his cold fingers

Touch her hot skin.

After tiening her knot maan moves her hair to one

Side exposing her sexy bareback and starts giving

Her wet kisses on her on back and slowly moves to

Her neck,geet holds her saari pallu to tightly as she not able to hold that much passion,,and then suddenly he spins her

And now she is facing him. Her eyes are close and

Her breathing is uneven. Maan slowly kisses her on

Her throat and then her collar bone and then on the

Nape of her neck and suddenly bites her there

Giving her love bite over there..geet moans and holds

His shirt tightly which makes maan go more wild,,he

Starts sucking it where he has bite.he slowly comes

To her cleavage which was exposing now and kisses

Her there.which brings geet back to senses and she

Slowly moves her hand at the back of his neck

Rubbing it slowly to calm his desire,,maan comes

To knw that y she is doing this and he looks at her

Giving her a smile and a final kiss on her 4head.

Maan: sorry who tum aaj bohot hot aur sexy lag

Rahi ho isliye apne apko nahi rok paya.

Geet: smiles at him and blushes at his comment

Maan: sach mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itni sexy lagti

Ho saari me.aur ha hamesha saari mere samne hi


Geet's eyes widen

Maan realize what he had said and then correcting


Maan:mera matlab jab mere saath kahi bahar jaogi

Tabhi hi pehenna,,

Geet: turning red due to his statement.

Geet: maan aap fresh ho jaaiye tabhi tak me aapke

Kapde nikal kar deti hu.

Maan: as u sat wifey,,abhi aage jaakar mujhe apke

Pasand ke hi ka[de pehenne hai na.

Geet literally push him inside bathroom to stop his

Cont chanting

After some time thye both get ready and and was

About to go out when maan pulls her and says

Maan: geet aaj tum bohot sundar lag rahi ho.

Geet: blushing ,,thank u

Maan kisses her 4head and they are off to party




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Precap: party and same as last time

Maans hold her from her waist very close to him,his

Hands were inside her sari pallu so that no one can

See It.

Geet bites her lower lips to prevent a moan from

Escaping from her mouth

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
wowww finally u updated, awesome update continue soon

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