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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 20)

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Posted: 12 September 2011 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 12 September 2011 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
loveeed it
cont soon
thanks for the pm
sorry my likes and comments will be late because of school! i tend to only get a chance to come online on Friday nights!

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 12:44am | IP Logged
nice part
cliffhanger??????????/
hope no  bad news
please update soon

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged


very nice FF...I read it in one go...

please pm me when u update...

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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged

Part 24

 

Maan=geet kya hua tum itni nervous kyu ho????

Geet= maan vo ,playing with his collar, hamare school new education technology adopt kar rahe hai,isliye hum teachers ko training di jayegi'

Maan= kya geet ,bas itni si baat aur tum itna dar rahi ho, mujhe tou laga ki koi aur baat hai.

Geet=maan aap meri puri baat tou suniye'

Maan= kaho'

Geet= uss training ke liye mujhe 1 and half year ke liye new York jaana padega'

Maan looks at her in utter shock.

Geet= maan mujhe samajh nahi aaraha hai ki me kya karu'.mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe mana karna chahiye,mujhe aapko chod ke jaane ka mann bilkul nahi kar raha hai'.

Maan= nahi geet tumhe aisa kuch karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai'.itni achi opportunity tumhe hamesha nahi milti aur mujhe bhi tumhe kuch batana tha.

 

Geet= kya baat hai maan?

Maan= me abhi ek meeting se aaraha hu, vo London mein rehte hai, unki ek shart hai agar hame yeh deal chahiye tou hame London jaana ho aur wahi deal karke construction chalu karna hai,is mein 10 se 12 mahine lag jayege'toume bhi wahi soch raha tha ki yeh deal cancel kar du'

 

Geet= ancel karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai. Tum mujhe bhej rahe ho aur khud nahi ja rahe. Me bhi yaha nahi hu 'aap apni deal cancel nahi karenge'

Geet= maan fir hum kaise milenge.???

Maan = hum roz phn par baat kiya karenge..milna out impossible hai.hum vedio chat karenge,

Geet=hmmm.

Geet = mujhe nahi jaana.

Maan= tumhe meri kasam tum jaogi.

Geet=maan aap bohot bure ho'

Maan= aur tum bohot hot, sexy, beautiful, tempting ho

Geet blushing

Geet= maan abhi bas ho gya

Maan= thik tou me abhi miss shikha rathod ko ph kar ke kehta hu ki mujhe deal manzur hai,ek min,ha?

Geet= hmmm

Maan cols shikha

Maan= she is coming in 5mins nw to sign the deal.

Geet= hmmm

Maan again saying she is coming in 5 mins

Geet= tou me kya karu?

Maan= pointing at his condition and then at her, actually she is still sitting on his lap.

Geet= embarrassed, sorry.. tries to get up

Maan pulls er down again.

Maan= chaho tou me tumhe aisa hamesha lekar baith sakta hu.

Geet= getting up ,jee nahi iski koi zarurat nahi.

Maan smiles makes himself proper.geet combs his hair,then makes his tie proper,buttons his shirt,and finally gives him a light kiss on his cheek, wishing him good luck.

Geet = maan me bahar wait karti hu.

Maan= nahi uski koi zarurat nahi tum couch par baitho jo uss join room mein hai. Vo mera personal room hai.meri biwi bahar kyu baithege.ha?

Geet smiles at his answer.

Maan kisses her 4head and asks her to wait there he will come in 15miins

Door of that room was such that ki one sitting out cant see inside where as one sitting inside can see outside.

So geet was able to see wat is going outside.

 

 
 
 


Edited by shazia24 - 01 November 2011 at 3:09am

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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 3:18am | IP Logged
sorry guys for the late update...i was lil bsy
 
next part may come in next 1 haor, but i cant promise  u all...
 
shazia...

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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 3:29am | IP Logged


awesome update...Geet is going to NY and Maan to London...please don't seperate them because of this long distance relation or any other reason

thanx for pm


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