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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 2)

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CHAPTER FOUR

THEY FINALLY BROKE FROM THE KISS AND SAW DEEP INTO EACHOTHERS EYES.BOTH WHERE LOST.

MAAN:GEET" CARESSING HER BOTTOM LIPS KHANA THANDA HO JAYEGA KHA LO

GEET:HMMM

THEY ATE FOOD AND WENT TO SLEEP TALKING AND KNOWING ABOUT EACHOTHER.

IT WAS 3AM AT NIGHT WHEN GEET WOKE UP FEELING HEAVY WEIGHT ON HER.SHE SAW MAAN SLEEPING ALMOST ON HER AND HIS ONE HAND WAS PROTECTIVELY ON HER WAIST.SHE TRIED TO REMOVE HIS HAND BUT OF NO USE.SHE GAVE UP AND SLEPT HUGGING HIM TIGHTLY

AS THE MORNING RAYS HIT HER EYES SHE STIRED TILL AND OPENED HER EYES ONLY TO MEET DARK BROWN EYES FIILED WITH LOVE AND PASSION.

HE SLOWLY BEND DOWN KISSED HER LIPS AND BEFORE SHE CUD RESPONSE HE BACK OFF,MAKING GEET IRRITATED.

MAAN:GOOD MRNG

GEET: GOOD MRNG,,,VRY RELUCTANTLY

MAAN: KNOWING VERY WELL Y GEET IS BEHAVING LIKE THIS.

MAAN: ABHI KYA HUA?

GEET: KUCH NAHI HATIYE MUJHE NAHANE JAANA HAI.

WHEN GEET WAS ABOUT TO GET UP AND GO,,MAAN PULLED HER DOWN AND PINNED HER TO BED.

MAAN: AGAR PROPER KISS CHAHIYE TOU TUMHE MUJHE I LOVE YOU KEHNA HOGA

GEET:BLUSHING MAAN YEH KYA MAZAK HAI.

MAAN: TUM ISE MAZAK SAMAJH RAHI HO.ABHI TOU MUJHE SERIOUS HONA HI PADEGA. JAB TAK TUM MUJHE I LUV U NAHI KAHOGI TAB TAK ME TUMSE BAAT NAHI KARUNGA

GEET: THIK HAI MAT KARIYE

MAAN GETS UP AND WENT TO BATHROOM,LEAVING GEET DAZED

AFTER GETING READY THEY BOTH GOES DOWN TO THEIR FRIEND WHO WERE WAITING FOR THEM FOR BREAKFAST

MAAN SAT NEXT TO MOHIT AND WHEN GEET WAS ABOUT TO SIT NEXT TO MAAN,SAMEERA COMES AND SIT NXT TO MAAN.HALF HEARTLY GEET HAS TO SIT NEXT TO MUSKAN

MAAN WATCHES GEET JEALOUSELY TOWARDS SAMEERA.MAAN THINK TO PLAY WITH HER FEELINGS LITTLE MORE.

MAAN:SAMEERA U R LOOKING HOT

SAMEERA TAKING HIS COMPLIMENT SERIOUSLY

SAMEERA:THANK U MAAN , EK TUM HI HO JISE KAPDO KI SAMAJH HAI,WARNA BAAKI SAB YAHA TOY TASTELESS HAI

SHE SAID LOOKING AT GEET, WHO WAS WEARING A DARK GREEN TURTLE NECK T-SHIRT WITH A BLACK JACKET AND DARK BLUE JEANS.LOOKING AMAZING

SOON EVERY1 ORDERED THEIR FOOD AND WERE DISCUSSING 2DAYS PLAN

MOHIT: GUYS AAJ KA KYA PLAN HAI?

MAAN: MUJHE NAHI PATA.

RAHUL: GEET TUM PEHLE YAHA AAYI HO NA, TUMHE TOU PATA HOGA NA KI SIGHT SEEING KE LIYE KONSI JAGAH ACHI HAI.

GEET:YAHA PAR EK LAKE HAI JO BOHOT FAMOUSE HAI, AISA KEHTE HAI KI WAHA JOBHI MANNGO SAB MIL JATA HAI.WAHA EK FOREST BHI HAI.LEKIN LAKE YAHA SE BOHOY DUR HAI AUR AGAR AAJ SHAM TAK WAHA POHOCHNA HAI TOU HAME ABHI NIKAL NA HOGA AUR RAAT WAHI GUZARNI HOGI, ISLIYE SAAT ME TENT BHI RAKHNA HOGA.

MOHIT:GR8 TOU FIR CHALE GUYS,,WAT SAY?

SANAYA: HA CHALO , I M VERY EXCITED.

RAHUL:THEN WAT WE ARE WAITING FOR, LETS GO..

EVERY1 PACK THEIR BAGS AND LEAVES FOR LAKE.

BUT THIS TIME SAMEERA AND SASHA ARE WITH MAAN AND GEET.AS ROADS ARE NARROW AND SAMEERA SAID THAT SHE WIL NT BE ABLE TO DRIVE.

MAAN AND SAMEERA ARE SITTING IN FRONT WHILE GEET AND SASHA ARE SITTING BACK.

MAAN ADJUSTED MIRROR ON GEETS FACE, WHICH WAS DULL AND SAD.SHE WAS LOOKING OUT OF WINDOW.

THEY ALL STOPED AT ONE DHABA TO HAVE LUNCH.

GEET: MUJHE BHUK NAHI LAGI HAI

SANAYA: ARRE AISE KAISE BHUK NAHI LAGI HAI.WAAH POHOCHNE ME ABHI KAFI WAQT HAI,THODA KHA LO

GEET: NAHI MENE BREAKFAST ZYADA KIYA THA ISLIYE BHUK NAHI HAI.

SAYING THIS SHE WENT TO A PEACEFUL PLACE.

SHE WA SLOOKING AT THE SCENERI WHEN TWO ARMS CIRCLED AROUND HER WAIST AND GRIPED GOY TIGHTER.SHE KNEW WHO IT WAS.

MAAN: TUMHE BHOOK KYU NAHI HAI?

GEET:APKO ISSE KYA? CHODIYE MUJHE.

MAAN TIGHTEN HIS GRIP ON HER, HE NUZZLE'S HIS NOSE IN HER HAIR.

GEET: MAAN CHODIYE,MERE KARIB MAT AAIYE. JAO USS HOT SAMEERA KE PASS.THAND ME HEATER KA KAAM KAREGI.

MAAN STARTS KISSING HER NECK

MAAN: TUMHARA YEH T-SHIRT BHI NA THIK SE KISS KARNE BHI NAHI HO RAHI HAI. KAHO TOU UTAR DU.

GEETS JAW DROP WIDE OPEN LISTENIING TO HIM.

HIS HAND WENT INSIDE HER T-SHIRT, FEELING HIS COLD HAND GEET GASP.

GEET: MAAN CHODIYE YEH AAP KYA KAR RAHE HAI, KOI AA JAEGA

MAAN:KOI NAHI AAYEGA

GEET:MAAN AAAHHH

MAAN BITES HER ON NECK AND THEN LICKS IT.

MAAN:GEET CHALO, KHANA KHALO

GEET; NAHI

MAAN; WARNA ME UTHA KE LE JAUNGA TUMHE

GEET: AJEEB ZABAR DASTI HAI,, CHALO ABHI.

THEY BOTH WENT AND HAD FOOD AND EVERY1 STARTS THEIR JOURNY AGAIN

SAMEERA WAS AGAIN GOING TO SIT IN FRONT WITH MAAN WHEN

MAAN: SAMEERA ZARA PANI KI BOTTLE BHARKE LANA MERE LIYE PLZZ

SAMEERA: PLZ MAT KAHO MAAN TUMHARE KIYE ME INTA TOU KAR SAKTI HU NA

AS SAMEERA WENT MAAN MAKES GEET SIT IN FRONT SIT WITH HIM

SAMEERA COMES AND SEES GEET SITING WITH MAAN

SAMEERA: GEET YAHA ME BIATHI HU

GEET WAS ABOUT TO GET UP WHEN MAAN SAID

MAAN: SAMEERA KYA BACHO KE JAISE SEAT KE LIYE ZIDD KAR RAHI HO.JAO AUR PEEECHE BAITH JAAO

SASHA:AAJA SAMEERA YAHA BOHOT MAZA AATA HAI.

SAMEERA GOES TO BACK SEAT WITH GRITTED TEETH

IT WAS GOING TO BE THERE ONE OF THE BEST TRIP EVER

IT WAS 8PM WHEN THEY ALL REACHED THEIR DESTINATION.BUT TO THEIR BAD LUCK GATE TO LAKE WAS ALREADY CLOSED SO THEY DECIDED TO WAIT TIL MRNG.

THEY SAT AROUND FIRE PLAYING TRUTH AND DARE

MAAN WAS SITING NEXT TO GEET HOLDING HER HAND.

SPINING HERE BOTTLE STOPS AT MOHIT

MUSKAN:SO MOHIT TRUTH OR DARE

MOHIT: TRUTH

MUSKAN: OKAY THEN,, IF U R SERIOUS WITH SANAYA THEN PROPOSE HER FOR MARRIAGE

MOHIT:TURNING SERIOUS

SANAYA KNOWING VERY WELL THAT MOHIT DONT BELIEVE IN MARRIGES

SANAYA:U DONT NEED TO DO THAT MOHIT. TAKE UR TIME

MOHIT; GOING ON HIS KNEES AND

MOHIT: SANAYA MY LOVE " JABSE TUM MERI ZINDAGI ME AAYI HO MERI ZINDAGI KO EK NAYA JEENE KA MAKSAD MIL GAYA HAI.AUR ME YE MAKSAD KHONA NAHI CHAHTA.

MISS SANAYA IRANI KYA TUM Mrs SANAYA MOHIT SEHGAL BANOGI, KYA TUM MERE BACHO KI MAA BANOGI,KYA TUM MERE BUDHAPE KA SAHARA BANOGI?

SANAYA WITH TEARS INHER EYES

SANAYA: HA MR MOHIT SEHGAL ME Mrs MOHIT SEHGAL BANUNGI

AND WITH THAT SHE KISSED HIM ON HIS LIPS WITHOUT CARRING ABOUT ANYBODY

ALL WERE HAVING TEARS IN EYES AND SMILE ON LIPS . ITS IS THE MOST RARE VIEW TO GET SEE.

GUYS THIS WAS FORTH PART. HOPE U LIKE IT.

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PRECAP:

RAHUL: GEET TUMHARA DARE YEH HAI KI TUMHE DUR JUNGLE ME JAAKE 15MIN TAK REHNA HAI.

GEET'S EYES POPPES OUT

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged
awesome part...
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged

Oye hoye!!

I want more lol

Please add me to your pm list and update soon :-)

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
lovely part
hope you will update soon
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awesome part ops Geet in jungle for 15mins, ahem Geet wapas nahi aai gi or Maan jai ga, plz update soon yar

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