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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 16)

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great  updates

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both parts r nice. love the way geet put every thing on like chura, mangalsutar and sindoor. omg maan does not leave any chance. hopefully they tel everyone about their marriage so then don;t get interuption in their intimate momentsLOL
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nice story...please pm me on the next update
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CHAPTER TWENTY ONE

 

DOWN IN THE HALL SAMEER AND SAMAIRA WERE WAITING FOR THEM

SAMAIRA: TUM DONO KAHA THE ,ITNA TIME KYU LAGA

MAAN: MAA VO MERE KAMRE KI BALCONY GEET KO BAHOT ACHI LAGI ISLIYE HUM WAHA BAAT KARTE BAITH GAYE.

 

GEET: ME CHALTI HU , MA MERA WAIT KAR RAHI HOGI..

SAMEER: ARRE BETA ME TOU TUMHE EK BATA NA BHUL HI GAYA

ME MAAN KOAPNE BUSSINESS ME LAUNCH KAR RAHA HU,ISLIYE AAJ SHAM MENE HOTEL TAJ ME PARTY RAKHI HAI, ZARUR AANA, WAISE RAINA AUR SAHIL KO PATA HAI LEKIN TUM ZARUR AANA.

GEET: JEE PAPAJI

 

GEET SAYING SO LEFT FROM THERE.

WHOLE DAY MAAN AND GEET WERE BUSY WITH THERE PARENTS AT HOME, THEY DIDN'T GOT ANY  TIME TO TALK TO EACHOTHER.

AND SOON IT WAS EVENING AND IT WAS PARTY TIME…

GEET WAS STANDING IN FRONT OF HER WADROBE THING WAT TO WEAR.

FINALLY SHE DECIDED TO WEAR A RED COLOUR TRANPARENT SARI WITH FULL SLEEVES TO HIDE HER CHUDA AND BACKLESS BLOUSE.

HER HAIRS WERE STRAIGHT AND SHE WAS NOT WEARING ANYTHING IN HER NECK EXCEPT A THIN GOLDEN CHAIN AND A SMALL EARINGS

OVERALL HER FULL ATTENTION WAS ON HER SARI SO WEAR SMALL ORNAMENTS.

HER HAIRS WERE ON ONE SIDE LEFT OPEN.

SHE WEAR A HIGH HEELED SANDLE TO ADD MORE SEXYNESS TO HER ATTIRE.

SHE APPLIED LITTLE MAKE UP LIKE KAJAL LINER LIP GLOSS AND SINDOOR HIDEN IN HER HAIR.

 NOW SHE WAS FINALLY READY FOR THE PARTY.

SHE CAME DOWN AND SAW THERE WAS NO ONE

SHE ASKED ON OF THE SERVANTS THEY TOLD THAT ALL WENT AND NOW EVEN DRIVER IS NOT THEIR.

MALIK ASKED U TO DRIVE AND COME

GEET: THIK HAI

GEET TOOK CARS KEY AND WALKS TOWARDS CAR

SOON SHE REACHED TAJ HOTEL

SHE CAME OUT OF CAR AND HANDLED THE KEY TO SERVANT.

 

HERE MAAN HAS CAME TO PARTY 1 HOUR AGO FOR ATTENDING GUEST  AS THE PARTY WAS FOR HIM ONLY. MAAN WAS WEARING A BLACK SUIT WITH RED SHIRT MATCHING GEET'S RED SARI.IT WAS CONIDSIENCE.

WHEN HW HAD  ENTERED THE HALL ALLGIRLS HEARTS WERE BEATING LIKE MAD.THEY ALMOST DEAD LOOKING AT GREEK GOD.

HE SMILING AT EVERYONE AND GIVING ATTITUDE TO GIRLS TO WERE DROOLING OVER HIM

 

ALL WERE PRESENT THERE RAHUL, MUSKAN, MOHIT,SANAYA,SASHA,SAMEERA, BUT GEET WAS NO WHERE TO BE SEEN

MAAN'S EYES WERE ONLY SEARCHING HER.

HALLS LIGHTS SYSTEM SUCH THAT ONE SPOT LIGHT WAS FIXED ON MAIN DOOR.

AS GEET STEP IN THE HAAL HER HEART BEAT INCREASED,AS SHE WAS MAKING ENTRY ALONE

SOON SHE CAME IN THE SPOT LIGHT AND EVERYONES EYES WERE FIXED ON HER. SHE WAS LOOKING BREATHING TAKINGLY HOT, SEXY, GORGEOUSE.

ALL THE MEN PRESENT IN HALL WERE GASPING AT HER

ALL GIRLS WERE JEALOUSE OF HER

MAAN REALISE THAT ALL WERE LOOKING IN A PARTICULAR

DIRECTION. SO HE ALSO TURNED AND SAW THAT BREATHING SIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM

HE WAS SHOCK TO HELL.

HE SAW THAT ALL WERE LOOKING TA HER WITH HUNGRY EYES. AND ALSO SAW THAT SHE WAS GETTING UNCOMFORTABLE WITH THIS MUCH ATTENTION.

HE STARTED MOVING MOVING TOWARDS HER.

ON HIS WAY TO HER HE HEARD PEOPLE SAYING

SHE IS AN ANGEL, SHE IS HOT MAN!!!! ,

MAAN SOON REACHED HER AND GAVE HER HIS CHARMING SMILE.

BOTH GOT LOST IN THEIR EYELOCK SESSION…

SOON MAAN CAME BACK TO HIS SENSES AND GAVE HER HIS HAND

SHE HOLD IT

HE BEND DOWN AND KISSED HER HAND, SHE BLUSHED

HE WHISPER IN HER EAR, U R LOOKING SO DAMN HOT.

GOSHH I DON'T KNW HOW I M GOING TO HOLD ON TO MYSELF FOR LONG TIME.

GEET'S CHEEK TURNED RED

HE STARTED WALKING TOWARDS EVERYONE HOLDING HER HAND

ALL MENS WERE JEALOUSE OF MAAN AND GIRLS OF GEET

SOME WERE SAYING THET " MADE FOR EACHOTHER"…

MAAN AND GEET SMILES HEARING THEM

 

SAMAIRA: GEET BATA U R LOOKING STUNNING.

GEET BLUSHING THANKS MUMMYJI

MAAN: GEET TUM PARENTS KO PAPAJI AUR MUMMYJI KYU BULATI HO, NAHI MUJHE BURA NAHI LAGTA PAR ME AISE HI PUCH RAHA THA.

SAMEER: GEET KO MENE HI KAHA THA, TUM YAHA NAHI THE AUR HUME MA- PAPA KEHNE WALA KOI NAHI THA ISLIYE,

MAAN: OHH!!!!

WINKING AT GEET AND WHISPERING

MAAN:KYA BAAT HAI TUMNE PEHLE SE HI PAPAJI AUR MUMMYJI KEHNE KI ADDAT LAGALI ,HA GEET?

GEET SMILING…

SOON MAAN GOT BUSY WITH CLIENTS. HE TOOK GEET ALONG WITH HIMSELF WHERE HE GO.

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Edited by shazia24 - 09 August 2011 at 7:59am

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nice update. love it sooo much. geet looking sooo sexy how maan is going to hold back himself.LOLLOLLOL. pls continue and update soon
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awesome update

yaar now plz disclose their wedding 
as soon as possible

continue soon

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