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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 14)

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beautiful updates continue soon.
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4  d pm ...

continue soon ...
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me likeyyy
continueee soon
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wonderful part
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hey ,,shazia vn wl u update da nxt part.

plzzz !!!!!!!!!!!!!! update a longgg n romantc partEmbarrassedBig smile

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nice updates. love their relationship is growing but when they r going to tell their parents.\\

pls continue
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CHAPTER NINETEEN

 

IT WAS SUNDAY MORNING'. A DAY TO REST BEFORE GEET'S SCHOOL AND MAAN'S BUSSINESS

 

IT WAS 7AM WHEN GEET OPENED HER EYES

SHE WAS SMILING THINKING ABOUT MAAN

SHE WOKE UP AND WENT TO WASHROON TO TAKE BATH

SOON SHE GOT READY WEARING A RED CHURIDAR WITH FULL SLEEVES HIDING HER CHUDA IN IT . SHE WORE HER MANGALSUTRA, HIDING IT IN HER DUPATTA AND FINALLY PLACED A PINCH OF SINDOOR ON HER FOREHEAD AND HIDE IT WITH HER HAIR WHICH WAS STILL WET, MAKING HER LOOK BREATH TAKING.

THERE WAS AN AMAZING GLOW ON HER FACE .

SHE WENT DOWN IN MANDIR AND STARTS HER ARTI, WHICH WAS  HER DAILY ROUTINE.

WHOLE HOUSE FILLED WITH HER MELODIOUS VOICE.

HER MOM , DAD AND ALL SERVANTS CAME AND STOOD BEHIND HER

HERE MAAN HEARD A VOICE WHICH WAS VERY SOOTHING FOR HIS HEARS' HE WAS IN VERY DEEP SLEEP AND SOON VOICE FADED AWAY. HE THOUGHT HE WAS DREAMING. HE GOT OUT OF BED AND CALLED GEET BUT SHE WAS PRAYING AND HER PHONE WAS IN BEDROOM

MAAN WENT TO WASHROOM AND TOOK A QUICK SHOWER.

 

SAMAIRA: LO GEET UTH GAYI

SAMEER: AAJ KA DIN BOHOT ACHA JAYEGA MERA

SAMAIRA: HA AUR MERA BHI

GEET TURNED AND SMILED AT EVERYONE

SHE TOOK BLESSING FROM HER DAD

DAD: PATA HAI HUMNE YEH AWAAZ KITNI MISS KI

TUMHARI AWWAZ SSNTE HI DIL KO SUKUN MILTA HAI

MOM: GEET JA SAB KO AARTI DEDE

GEET GAVE AARTI TO EVERYONE

RAINA: GEET  SAMAIRA  AUR BHAI SAAB KO BHI AARTI DEE A

GEET:JEE MAA

SHE WAS BLUSHING COZ SHE WAS GOING TO HER SASURAAL

 

MAAN CAME OUT OF BATHROOM AND WAS RUBBING HIS HAIRS,

HE AGAIN TRIED HER NO. BUT SHE WAS NOT ANSWERING IT. SO HE CHANGED AND DECIDED TO GO DOWN

 

GEET CAME ,, SAMEER AND SAMAIRA WAS WAITING FOR HER COZ THEY KNW THAT SHE WILL COME WITH AARTI.

SAMEER: GEET PUTTAR AAGAI TU.

SAME TIME MAAN CAME AND HEARD GEET'S NAME, HE CAME DOWN AND SAW GEET WITH AARTI

SAMEER: KAISI HAI TU

GEET: ME THIK HU, AAP KAISE HAI PAPAJI

MAAN SAW SHOCK TO HEAR GEET CALLING SAMEER PAPAJI

SAMEER: ME TOU BILKUL THIK NAHI HU PUTTARJI

GEET: KYU KYA HUA PAPAJI?{ WITH CONCERN}

SAMEER: ARE ITNE DIN HUE TUMHARI AWAAZ SUNE, TUJHE PATA HAI NA JAB TAK TERI ARTI NAHI SUNTA MERA DIN NAHI SHURU HOTA,

GEET: KYA PAPAJI AAP BHI NA

SAMAIRA: MUJHSE BHI MILO BHAI ME BHI YAHA HU

GEET: NAMASTE MUMMYJI,KAISI HAI AAP?

SAMAIRA: ME TOU BILKUL THIK HU.BAS TERI BOHOT YAAD AARAHI THI.

GEET GAVE ARTI TO SAMEER AND SAMAIRA , HER EYES WAS SEARCHING FOR MAAN NOW

SAMAIRA SAW AND ASKED KYA UA

GEET: PAPAJI MAAN KAHA HAI

AND THEN MAAN CAME

MAAN: ME YAHA HU

SAMEER: MAAN KAISE HO, KAL ME OFFICE SE LATE AAYA.TABHI TAK TUM SO GAYE THE,

MAAN: THIK HU AUR VO KAL THAK GAYA THA ISLIYE SOU GAYA.

MAAN LOOKS AT GEET AND SMILES

MAAN : GOOD MORNING GEET

GEET: BLUSHING GOOD MORNING

WILL CONT SOON'..

DO COMMENT''.



Edited by shazia24 - 02 August 2011 at 3:40am

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