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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 13)

ritzy09 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 July 2011 at 4:39am | IP Logged
nice but very short...i hope they tell their families about their marriage soon...aur is Sameera ki problem kya hai...she just slept with another guy but still no shame...

abina03 Goldie

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Posted: 26 July 2011 at 4:41am | IP Logged
nice part
jealous Geet
too short dear before started to read it finished.
please give little more long update

thanks for pm
maaneetsangel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 July 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
TeamMcSwarek IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 July 2011 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
stupid Sameera
heheh Geet's soo cutee
thanks for the pm!
mayurmaaneet IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 July 2011 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
lol.. kya shazia.. geet dear dont be jealous of that sam.. u r maans wife soo no tension.. lol.. update soon yaar.. love ur ff.. just started reading.. 
muskaan... Goldie

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Posted: 26 July 2011 at 5:27pm | IP Logged
lovely part
waiting for more

Edited by muskaan... - 26 July 2011 at 5:28pm
shazia24 Groupbie

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Posted: 27 July 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged

EmbarrassedChapter eighteen

Geet: dekhiye mene kaha tha na aap hasenge

And with that her tears made way to her cheeksCryCryCry

Maan: are geet me hass nahi raha hu, mujhe pehle se pata tha ki tum mujhe kya kehna chahti ho,Wink bas me yeh chahta tha ki tum mujhe yeh khud kaho , me chahta hu ki tum mujh par apna haq jatao. Me tumhara PATI hu aur tum meri PATNI.

Me tumhe kisi aur ke gale lagte hue nahi dekh sakta aur me tumhe kahunga bhi ki tum ladko se dur raho.Ouch

 Geet was lookinh at maan with teary smile

Maan slowly wiped her tear

Geet grabed his collar and brings him closer to her and claimes his lips.Embarrassed

Maam was beyond shock and he was in such shock that he was not responding to her kissShocked

Geet thought that he didn't liked it ,so she was backing out from the kiss when when maan came to his senses and realise that she backing off.

He suddenly brings her close to him and kiss her like there is no 2moro.

The kiss turns out to be passionate'

It was 20 mins later when they back off from the kiss.

Geet was blushing like anything coz it was 1st time that she had taken 1st step to kiss him atherwise always maan was to be 1st to start the session.

Maan was smiling looking at geet's red face, he could hold on for long time and started kissing her all over again..

Geet and maan reached their house at around 10 at night.

Maan left geet first at her house

Maan: opening door for her, lo aagaya tumhara ghar.

Geet: thanks maan for this wonderful trip and this lovely relationship. Saying so she kisses his cheek

Maan smiles and say any time my wifey

Geet blushes hearing him say wifey.

Maan: GOSHH I m so going to miss this blush.

Geet: bohot hogaya now gooo'

Maan: bye sweetheart saying so he kissed her lips , just wetting it.

Maan: they were looking dry,  I LOVE YOU

Geet smiles: bye maan, I LOVE  YOU TOO.

  Soon geet went to her house and maan his

Geet rang the door bell and soon raina{mom} opened door

Raina was very happy to see geet

Raina: aagai geet tu , mera bachha pata hai mene aur tere dad ne tujhe kitna miss kiya

They both hug eachother

Geet: ma mene bhi aap dono ko bohot miss kiya

Raina: ha tabhi ek baar bhi phone nahi kiya,ha?

Geet: ...

Raina: chal koi gal nahi ,tu thak gai hogi jaake fresh hoja,

Me khana lagati hu.

Geet: ma ,papa kaha hai?

Raina: vo office me hai,koi meeting hai


Geet went upstair , took a shower and soon return down stair.

Geet and raina had their food 2gether soon went to her room sayig good bye to her mom


Here,, maan came to his house

Samaira was also very happy seeing maan

Maan hugged her

Maan: kaisi hai ma aap, mene apko aur dadko waha bohot miss kiya

Samaira: humne bhi tujhe miss kiya' lambi drive karke aaya hoga ja tu fresh ho ja me khan laga deti hu

Maan: ha maa bohot bhuk lagi hai

Maan got fresh an up and soon came down had his food and went to his room to sleep.

He tried sleeping but sleep was far away from him. Sleeping alone on bed without geet was torturing him so he thought to call her and dialled his wifeys number, yes he has saved her number as wifey

Maan called her, she was combing her hair

She saw maan's name flashing and a very smile came to her face.

She answerd it and heard him saying GEET in husky voice shiver ran down her body , she knw he is craving for her, he is madly missing her,

Geet: maan aapne khana khaya

Maan: ha aur tumne

Geet: ha bas soune hi jaa rahi thi,bohot thak gai hu na

Maan: hmmm, mujhe bhi nind aarahi hai me bhi soune jar raha  hu, bas good night wish karne phn kiya tha

Geet: good night shona

Maan: good night baby, sweet dreams

Soon they disconnected col and drifted to sleep thinking about eachother.


Will continue soon'.

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Posted: 27 July 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
wonderful update 
continue soon 

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