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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 12)

maaneetsangel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
awesome ... loved both parts 15 n 16 ...

thnx 4  d pm ...

continue soon ...

m-g19 Goldie

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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged

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jasraj123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 11:59am | IP Logged
both updates nice one. they can't stay away from each other. i wonder what will happen when they go home. 

pls continue soon
angelic_cute IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
wow gr8 update dear 
do continue soon with bigger part n
 loved the way they r expressing their love
abina03 Goldie

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
lovely part
waiting for  the  coming  up

thanks for pm
GurruKiDeewani- IF-Dazzler

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loved the parts i wonder yeh dono alag alag kaisai rahain gai hehehehe
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Chapter seventeen


Maan was about to go and open door when geet holds his hand and makes him look at himself.

Maan notices that his shirts buttons are open and there were her nails mark and lip stick mark and  then he looks at geet and grin.

She buttons his shirts still looking down blushing'

Maan: tum kabhi kabhi kaafi wild ho jati ho and winks at her.

Geet turns pink with embarrassment


It was Rahul on the door , he again knocks the door and calls out for maan .

Maan: aaya.

He opens the door.

Rahul: kya yaar me kabse knock kar raha hu, kya kar raha tha.

Maan: geet washroom me thi aur me change kar raha tha.

Rahul: okay chal jaldi sab neeche tum dono ka wait kar rahe hai.

Maan: ha bas 2 min.

Maan holds the lugguage and raul helps him.

Soon they all check outs from hotels and starts their journey to the destiny were they belong.


Geet soon fall asleep on maan's shoulder holding him comfortably.

Maan smiles looking at his angel.


He thinks he is going to miss his angels like mad.

It was 8 at night when they reached at a place from where they all have to get separate and go to their homes.

They came out from cars.

Rahul : chal yaar maan hum chalet hai. Thanks for the trip, bohot maza aaya.

Maan: kya yaar is mein thanks ki kya baat hai.

Rahul: geet mein muskan ko ghar chode duga, don't worry okay?

Geet: muskan ke saath agar aap hai tou muhje koi tension nai hai.

Mohit: chal yaar maan bye, milte hai fir, bye geet nice meetong you.

Geet: same here.

Sameera came and hug maan seductive rubbing his back.

Geet didn't like it at all com now she is his WIFE  .

Maan slightly distant her and said

Maan: bye sameera

Sameera: bye kis liye maan hum kal mil rahe haina.

Maan: nahi actually mein kaafi thak gaya hu.


Every said bye to each other left for their home.

In the car

Geet was not talking to maan

Maan: geet kya hua?

Geet: ''

Maan: geet baby what's wrong?

Geet: kuch nahi maan, aap gadi aage dekh kar chalaiye.

Maan reluctantly stops the car on side of the road .

Geet: kya hua apne gaadi kyu rok di, hume late ho raha hai.

Maan: looking at geet now , kya hua geet why aer u not talking to me.

Geet: mene kaha na maan ki kuch nahi hua.

Geet didn't wanted maan to laugh at her for her jeaulosy towards sameera, coz she is his friend.

Maan : geet agar tum nahi bataogi to mujhe lage ka ki tum mujhe apna pati nai maanti.

As this words hit her ears she instantly looks towards him.

Geet: nahi aisi baat nahi hai maan, me apko dil se apna pati maanti hu,

Maan: to fir apne pati se tumhe har baat share karni chahiye.

Geet : aap hasenge to nahi na.

Maan: nahi me kyu hasunga.

Geet: vo.. vo.. vo

Maan: abhi vo vo hi karti rahogi kya, geet bolo me sun raha hu.

Geet: mujhe pasand nahi ki aap kisi ladki ke itne kareeb jaye, she told all this in one go'.

Maan was smiling now


Will cont soon..

Hope u all like this

Do comment '..


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angelic_cute IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 July 2011 at 3:18am | IP Logged
wow i m the first to comment
awesome update
 do continue soon with longer parts

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