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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12

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hum aapke ho gayye



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INTRODUCTION

WE SEE TWO BIG MANSIONS NEXT TO EACH OTHER

ONE WITH KHURANA WRITTEN ON IT.WHILE OTHER WITH HANDA WRITTEN ON IT. SAMEER AND SAMAIRA KHURANA ARE MAAN'S PARENTS WHILE RAINA AND SAHIL ARE GEET'S PARENTS.MAAN IS ONLY SON OF KHURANA AND GEET IS ONLY DAUGHTER OF HANDA.

KHURANA FAMILY HAS SHIFTED TO THIS MANSION AFTER MAAN WENT TO NEW YORK FOR HIS STUDIES AFTER 10 STD TO DO HIS MBA...

HANDA FAMILY STAYS HERE FROM VERY LONG TIME. KHURANA'S AND HANDA'S ARE BEST FRIENDS AS THEY ARE NEIGHBOUR AS WELL AS THEY ARE BUSINESS PARTNERS.

MAAN IS NOT THAT KHARUS BUT STILL HAS HIS ATTITUDE,HE SI SMART,SEXY,INTELLIGENT,SOFT HEARTED.

GEET IS LITTLE SHY WITH STANGERS BUT VERY TALKATIVE WITH FRIENDS AND FAMILY.SHE IS CUTE,BEAUTIFUL,WITH PERFECT FIGURE,BIG BLACK EYES,HONEY FILLED LIPS,SHE CAN MAKE ANY MAN GO CRAZY.GEET IS AN ENGLISH TEACHER.



index

part 1 2 3- pg 1
part 4 - pg 2
part 5 6 - pg 3
part 7 - pg 4
part 8 - pg 6
part 9 - pg 7
part 10 - pg 8
part 11- pg 9
part 12- pg 10
part 13- pg 11
part 14 - pg 12
part 15 16 - pg 13
part 17 - pg 14
part 18 - pg 15
part 19 20 - pg 16
part 21 - pg 18
part 22 - pg 20
part 23 - pg 21
part 24 - pg 23
part 25 - pg 24
part 26- 26
part 27- 27
part 28 -27
part 29-29
part 30-31
part 31-34
part 32-36
part 33-38
part 34-39




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CHAPTER ONE

IN KHURANA MANSION WE SEE PREPARATION IS GOING ON AS THERE ONLY SON IS RETURNING FROM NEW YORK AFTER 5 LONG YEARS.

SAMEER: SAMAIRA JALDI KARO MAAN KA PLANE LAND BHI KAR CHUKA HOGA ABHI TAK,AUR HUM ABHI TAK YAHI HAI.

SAMAIRA: HA JI BAS HOGAYA.ME AAHI RAHI THI

SAMAIRA IN HER THIRTIES ALSO LOOKS VERY YOUNG AND ELEGENT

SAMEER: SAMAIRA ME SOCH RAHA THA KI MAAN KO RECEIVE KARNE KE LIYE KYU NA DRIVER KO BHEJ DE.WITH A SMRIK ON HIS FACE

SAMAIRA=VO KYU JI. SHE MISSED TO SEE THE SMIRKED

SAMEER: VO KYA HAI NA AAPKO DEKH KE HAMARI NIYAT BADAL RAHI HAI.AIRPORT KE BADLE HUM BEDROOM ME JAA SAKTE HAI..

SAMAIRA:'BLUSHING' AAP BHI NA, BETA JAWAN HO GAYA HAI , KUCH TOU SHARAM KARO JI.

SAMEER: HAYYE. AAPKI ISI ADAA ME TOU HUM MARTE HAI.

SAMAIRA: AAB BOHAT HO GAYA CHALIYE WARNA MAAN YAHA POHOCH BHI JAEGA AUR HUM YAHI HONGE.

AT THE SAME TIME THEY HERE A BEAUTIFUL VOICE.A GIRL SINGING AARTI WITH SO MUCH PASSION AND DEVOTION.

SAMEER: JAGTA HAI GEET UTH GAYI.GEET KI AARTI SUNE BINA ME KABHI NAHI JAATA KAHI.ISKI AWAAZ SUNTE HE EK ALAG SA SUKUN MILTA HAI DILKO

SAMAIRA: BILKUL SACH KAHA AAPNE.BHAGWAN AISI BETI SABKO DE.

SAMEER:BETI NAHI TOU KYA HUA EK DIN HAMARI BAHU BANKE ZARUR AAEGI,JO BETI SE KAM NAHI HOGI.

SAMAIRA:HAMARA YEH SAPNA PURA HOGA NA JI? KAHI MAAN KO KOI AUR TOU PASAND NAHI HOGI NA?

SAMEER:HAMARA BETA HAMARI BAAT NAHI TAALEGA.AUR AISA NAHI HO SAKTA KI GEET KO KOI PASAND NAA KARE.

SAMAIRA:HMMM.

AND THEY LEFT FOR THE AIRPORT

SAME TIME IN THE HANDA MANSION WE SEE A GIRL SINGING AARTI WITH DUPPAT COVERING HER HEAD.ALL THE FAMILY MEMBERS AND SERVENTS COOKS WERE STANDING BEHIND HER JOINING THERE HANDS.

AT THE SAME TIME A PLANE LANDS AND WE SEE A YOUNG MAN COMING OUT OF IT WEARING GLASSES. SOON HE REMOVES HIS GLESSES AND SEE HIS BROWN EYES, AND THERE THE GIRL TURN AND WE SEE HER BLACK EYES AND A SMILE CREPT ON HER LIPS SEENING ALL MEMBERS OF HOME.HALF SERVENT WERE STILL SLEEPY.

MAAN TAKES A DEEP BREATH INHALING THE SMELL OF HIS MOTHER LAND.

HE COMES OUT OF AIRPORT AND WAS VERY HAPPY TO SEE HIS PARENTS AFTER VERY LONG TIME.HE TOUCHED THEIR FEET AND THEN HUGED THEM TIGHTLY.

MAAN:MOM-DAD KAISE HAI AAP?PATA HAI MENE KITNA MISS KIYA APKO.

SAMEER:HUM THEEK HAI BETA. HUMNE BHI TUMHE BOHOT MISS KIYA.

SAMAIRA:ANHI CHALO YA SARI BAAT YAHI PAR KARNI HAI.

MAAN:I M VERY EXCITED TO SEE MY NEW HOUSE.

SAMEER:HA TOU CHALO FIR.

THEY ALL WENT TO THEIR HOME IN THEIR CARS

HERE IN HANDA MANSION

GEET GAVE AARTI TO EVERYONE

RAMU KAKA:GEET BETA SAVERE TUMHARI AAWAZ SUNKAR MANN BOHOT KHUSH HO JATA HAI.

GEET:KYA KAKA AAP EK HI BAAT ROZ KEHTE HAI.

SHE AVE AARTI TWO EVERYONE AND THEN WENT TO KHURANA MANSION TO GIVE AARTI TO SAMEER AND SAMAIRA BUT SHE FOUND THE HOUSE EMPTY SHE ASKED THE SERVENT .

GEET:KAKA AUNTY AUR UNCLE KAHA HAI?

KAKA:VO BAHAR GAYE HAI KUCH ZARURI KAAM SE.

GEET: THIK HAI,VO AAYE TOU BATA DENA KI ME AAYI THI

AFTER COMING HOME SHE WENTO KITCHEN TO MAKE BREAKFAST.THEY HAV SERVENT FOR EACH AND EVERYTHING BUT STILL GEET LIKE TO PREPARE FOOD BY HERSELF

THEN THEY ALL HAVE BREAKFAST AND GEET LEAVES FOR HER UNIVERSITY.

GEET:MAA ME UNI JAA RAHI HU

RAINA:GEET PUTTAR AAJ JALDI GHAR AAJANA

GEET:KYU AAJ AISA KYA HAI MAA?

RAINA:ARRE AAJ KHURANA JI KA BETA ARAHA HAI WAPAS APNI PADHAI PURI KARKE.TOU UNHONE BADI PARTY RAKHI HAI GHAR PAR.

GEET:THIK HAI MAA.BYE

RAINA:BYE BAS EK BAR GEET KO MAAN PASAND AAJAYE AUR MAAN KO GEET,FIR SAMAIRA AUR MERE SAPNE KO PURA HONE SE KOI NAHI ROK SAKTA.

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CHAPTER TWO

 
 
 
 
 
 
MAAN SEES TWO BIG MANSION NEXT TO EACHOTHER.

MAAN:DAD WHICH ONE OURS?

SAMEER:THE 2ND ONE WITH WHITE COLOUR.

MAAN:WOW DAD ITS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! AND THE OTHER ONE ?

SAMEER:ITS HANDA'S. THEY ARE OUR NEIGHOUR. AND BUSSINESS PARTNERS.

MAAN:OHHH!!

MAAN:REACHING INSIDE THE HOUSE,, WOW DAD-MOM INTERIOR IS JUST AMAZING.ITS FAR BETTER THAN OUR LAST ONE.

SAMAIARA:HA I KNW THAT. IT IS BEEN DECORATED BY GEET.

MAAN:GEET??

SAMEER: HANDA'S DAUGGHTER...SHE IS A DARLING. SHE IS BEAUTIFUL, SOFT HEARTED , DOWN TO EARTH,,AND WHAT NOT.

MAAN: HMMM!! SEEMS INTERESTING..WUD LOVE TO MEET MISS GEET HANDA. IS SHE IS A INTERIOR DESINGER?

SAMEER:NO SHE IS A TEACHER...SHE LOVES TO DECORATE HOUSE. WE HAD SEEN THEIR INTERIOR AND SAMAIRA HAD LIKED IT SO WE ASKD FOR THE NUMBER OF THE DECORATER AND THEY SAID THAT IT IS BEEN DONE BY GEET.SO SAMAIRA ASKED HER TO INTERIOR OUR HOUSE ALSO.

MAAN:I WUD LIKE TO MEET HER.

SAMAIRA: Y NOT.. U CAN MEET HER VEN SHE WILL COME FOR THE PARTY..

MAAN: PARTY??????

SAMEER:YES...WE HAVE KEPT A PARTY FOR U IN THE EVENING..

MAAN:DATS GR8 DAD.

SAMAIRA: NOW U GO TO UR ROOM AND HAVE REST,U MIGHT HAVE GOT TIRED.

MAAN:OKAY MAA. HE KISS HER 4HEAD AND LEFT SAYING BYE TO DAD.

IN THE EVENING

GUEST STARTED TO ARRIVE.SAMEER AND SAMAIRA WERE AT DOORS WELCOMING GUEST. SAHIL AND RAINA ARRIVES

SAHIL: BADHAI HO JI BADHAI

SAMEER: THANK YOU JI

SAHIL: AUR KAHA HAI AAPKE PUTTARJI

SAMEER:TAYAR HO RAHA HAI, AATA HI HOGA

SAMAIRA:RAINA GEET KAHA HAI, AAYI NAHI.

RAINA:USKO PHONE AAYA THA USE THODA LATE HO JAEGA.LEKIN VO AAYEGI JARUR.

SAMAIRA:AAYE ANDAR.

RAINA:MISSES SHARMA JI AAYI HAI KYA?

SAMAIRA:NAHI ABHI TAK.

AND SUDDENLY LIGHT GOED OFF AND A SPOT LIGHT IS SEEN ON THE STAIRCASE FROM WHERE MAAN DESENDING.EVERYONE IS LOOKING AT HIM WITH AWWW EXPRESSION.ANG GIRLS HEARTS ARE RACING FASTER THAN THE RACING CARS..ALL GIRLS ARE DREAMING TO BE IN HIS ARMS.

MAAN:HEY MOM DAD.

SAMEER:MAAN MEET Mr HANDA AND THIS IS THIER WIFE RAINA HANDA.

MAAN:SHAKING HANDS..NICE TO MEET YOU.

SAHIL: JEETE RAHO PUTTAR JI

RAINA:HAMESHA KHUSH RAHO

MAAN:THANK YOU.TOUCHING THEIR FEET..,

SUDDENLY A SPOTLIGHT IS SEEN ON A GIRL ENTERING THE HALL...SHE IS WEARING A DARK RED SHIFON SARI WITH BLACK BORDER.A GOLDEN CHAIN IN NECK AND RED DIAMOND EARINGS IN EARS.HAIRS LEFT OPEN.AND AVERY HIGH HEELS.SHE WALKS TO HER PARENTS MAKING MEN FALL ON HER WAY.ALL THE BOYS WERE GOING CRAZY FOR HER WERE ALL GIRLS WERE JEAULOSE OF HER.FINALLY REACHING TO HER PARENTS.

GEET:NAMASTE AUNTY AND UNCLE.

SAMEER-SAMAIRA: NAMASTE BETA.

GEET:SORRY I M LATE.

SAMAIRA:ITS OKAY

SAMAIRA: GEET MEET MAAN MY SON AND MAAN SHE IS GEET HANDA.ABOUT WHOM I WAS TALKING ABOUT.

GEET: TURN TO MAAN AND WAS SPELL BOUNDED TO SEE SUCH A HANDSOME MAN.

GEET:HELLO.I M GEET

MAAN:WHO WAS CONTINOUSLY GAZING AT HER FROM THE TIME SHE HAS ENTERD HALL.

MAAN:HI. I M MAAN .. LADY U R TEUELY BEAUTIFUL.

GEET:BLUSHING FOR THE FIRST TIME. THANK U

MAAN HAS FALLEN IN LOVE WITH GEET AT SIGHT. HE HAS DECIDED IN HIS MIND THAT HE WILL MAKE HER FALL IN LOVE WITH SOON.

MAAN: DANCE?

GEET: BLUSHING GAVE HER HAND

MAAN:TAKING HER TO DANCE FLOOR.

I MUSTSAY U HAV DECORATED MY HOUSE VERY GRACELY. I REALY LIKED.

AND WE SEE A GIRL APPROACHING MAAN AND GEET

GIRL:KEEPING A HAND ON MAAN SHOULDER,,,,MAAN

MAAN: TURNS AND IS SHOCKED TO SEE HER

MAAN:SAMEERA WHAT A PLEASANT SURPRISE?

SAMEERA: HUGGING HIM. AISA HO SAKTA HAI KYA TUM MUJHE INVIYE KARO AUR ME NA AAO.

MAAN:TURNING TO GEET,,,GEET YE HAI SAMEERA AUR SAMEERA YE HAI MISS GEET HANDA.

GEET:WITH A WARM SMILE HI !!!!

SAMEERA:GIVING HER A SUSPESIOUS LOOK..HELLO!!

SAMEERA LOVE MAAN FROM COLLEGE DAYS MAAN NEVER HAD THAT FEELIN FOR HER..

SAMEERA: SO MISS GEET HANDA WHAT U DO?

GEET: I M A ENGLISH TEACHER IN SCHOOL.

SAMEERA:LAUGHING ,,,WHAT A CHEAP CARREER...U R FROM A ROYAL FAMILY,U SHOULD BE DOING BUSSINESS WITH UR DAD OR MODELLING LIKE I DO.

GEET: SHE WAS HURT. MERE PAS SAB HAI.SO I DONT NEED TO EARN.TEACHING IS MY PASION.I LOVE TO TEACH.TO SPREAD KNOWLEDGE...AND MY PARENTS DONT HAVE ANY OBJECTION. I M PROUTO BE A TEACHER. AND LEFT FROM THEIR.

MAAN: U SHOULD HAVE NOT SAID THAT.

SAMEERA:ME TUMHARE LIYE INTI DUR SE AAYI HU AUR TUM MUJHE SE AISI BAAT KAR RAHE HO?

MAAN:OK I M SORRY

SAMEERA: ME YAHA EK WEEK KE LIYE REHNE AAYI HU,MERA SAMAAN BAHAR PADA HAI KYA TUM USE ROOM ME RAKH SAKTE HO.

MAAN:THIK HAI. AAO ME TUMHE MOM DAD SE MILATA HU.

MAAN TAKES HER TO HIS PARENTS

MAAN:MOM DAD SHE IS SAMEERA MY FRIEND FROM NEWYORK.AND SAMEERA THEY R MY PARENTS. FROM BEHIND MAAN'S OTHER FRIENDS ALSO COME.

MAAN:HEY GUYS WHAT A LOVELY SURPRISE.?

RAHUL(FRND): HOLIDAY CHAL RAHI HAI SOCHA KYU NA TERE GHAR PAR SPEND KARE.HOPE U DONT MIND.

MOHIT(FRND): DUDE TO TOU HUME BHUL HI GAYA YAHA AANE PAR.EK PHN BHI NAHI KIYA.

MAAN: GUYS ME AAJ HI TOU AAYA HU.

MAAN:MOM DAD YE HAI MOHIT,, RAHUL, SANAYA,,SASHA

SAMEER-SAMAIRA: HELLO BETA

SANAYA: MAAN I MUST TELL THAT UR HOUSE IS BEAUTIFUL.AND THE INTERIOR IS JUST AMAZING

MAAN: LOOKING AT GEET WHO WAS STANDING BESIDE SAMAIRA..

MAAN:FOR INTERIOR THE CREDIT GOES TO MISS HANDA..GEET THEY R MY FRNDS FROM NEWYORK AND GUYS SHE IS GEET HANDA MY FRIEND.

GEET:HI !!!

SANAYA: HI !! MY NAME IS SANAYA.AND HE IS MOHIT MY BOYFRIEND

SASHA:HI GEET !! I MUST SY UR SARI IS VERY PRETTY.

GEET: THANK U

RAHUL: LADY U R GORGEOUS

GEET: THANK U

SANAYA: WHAT U DO?

GEET: I M TEACHER IN SCHOOL

SANAYA: WOW THAT IS SO COOL.

SUDDENLY AGIRL COMES FROM BEHIND GEET AND BLIND FOLDS HER.

GIRL:PEHCHAN KOUN?

GEET : SHE KNEW WHO EXACTLY SHE IS,BT STILL SHE PRETENTS TO THINK AND SAY MUSKAN

MUSKAN: KYA YAAR TUJHE HAMESH KAISE PATA CHAL JATA HAI.

NOW TURNING TO EVERY1 AND GIVING THEM SUSPISIOUS LUK

GEET: OHH!!! MUSKAN MEET Mr MAAN KHURANA AND THEY R THEIR FRNDS

MUSKAN: HELLO EVERY1!!!!!!! I M MUSKAN GEET'S BEST FRIEND

RAHUL: AAP BOHOT KHUBSURAT HO.

MUSKAN: CHECKING OUT RAHUL... AAP BHI BURE NAHI HAI.

RAHUL : TURNING TO MAAN,,,,MAAN HUM SOCH RAHE THE KI CHUTTI YA CHAL RAHI HAI TOU KYU NA HUM KAHI BAHAR KHUM AAYE.

MAAN: NOT A BAD IDEA...TURNING TO GEET AAP LOG BHI HUME KYU NAHI JOINN KARTE?

GEET: NAHI SCHOOL ME KAFI KAAM HAI

MUSKAN: ARRE SCHOOL KO TOU KAL SE CHUTTIYA CHAL RAHI HAI NA.CHAL NA CHALTE HAI BADA MAAZA AAYEGA.

GEET: STILL NOT CONVINCE,,,,ME MAA SE PUCHKE BATATI HU

MAAN: USKI CHINTA TUM MAT KARO AUNTY SE ME BAAT KARUNGA,THK HAI..

GEET: THIK HAI

SAMEERA WAS BURNING WITH GEET BEING MAAN'S SO CLOSE

MAAN: GUYS AABHI SABSE BADA QUESTN YE HAI KI JAAYE KAHA?

RAHUL: GOA

MOHIT: ALIBAG

SANAYA: OOTY

SASHA:DARGILING

SAMEERA:BAHAMAS

MUSKAN: KASHMIR

EVERY1 LUK AT HER WITH "WHAT R U THINKING LUK"

MAAN: TURNING TO GEET,,, TUM KYA LAGTA HAI KAHA JANA CHAHIYE GEET?

SAMEERA: USSE KYA PATA HOGA BECHARI KO TOU SCHOOL SE FUSAT HI NAHI MILTI HOGI ,,,KYU GEET?

MAAN: STILL LUKING AT GEET,,,KAHO NA?

GEET: AT THIS SEASON I LIKE TO VISIT SHIMLA AND MANALI.

ALL: WHAT A GR8 IDEA

MAAN: THEN ITS FINAL WE ALL VIL GO TO SHIMLA AND MANALI

MAAN GOES TO HIS DAD AND MOM

MAAN: DAD I WANT TO ASK U SUMTHNG

SAMEER: YES BETA

MAAN: AS MY ALL FRNDA ARE HERE,THEY ALL WANT TO GO O SUMWHER.WE DECIDED TO GO SHIMLA AND MANALI.I WANT UR PERMISSION.

SAMEER: HA BETA,Y NOT.. GO AND HAVE FUN.VEN U VL B LEAVING TELL AND I VL BOOK TICKETS 4 ALL.

MAAN: THANKS DAD..

TURNING TO RAINA ANND SAHIL

MAAN: AUNCLE I WANT TO ASK PERMISSION TO TAKE GEET ALSO WITH ME ON ATRIP

SAHIL: Y NOT, IF SHE IS OK

RAINA: BT I WANT U TAKE HER RESPONSIBILITY,,THEN ONLY I CAN GRANT PERMISSION, BCOZ SHE AHD NOT WENT ALONE ANYWHRE TILL

MAAN: I PROMISE I VIL TAKE CARE OF HER

RAONA: THEN OTS OKAY

MAAN: THANK YOU

MAAN RETURNING TO FRNDS AGAIN

MAAN:V VIL B LEAVING 2MORO AT 4 IN THE MORNIG SO THAT V VIL REACH EARLY AND CAN MORE TIME TO SPEND THERE.

ALL: OKAY

MAAN: GEET I VIL PICK U AND MUSKAN FROM UR HOUSE

RAHUL: NO I VIL PICK UP MUSKAN, IS IT OK VIT U MUSKAN?

MUSKAN: BLUSHING,,, OK

MAAN: OK THEN ME AND GEET,,, MOHIT AND SANAYA,,,RAHUL AND MUSKAN,,, SASHA AND SAMEERA

SAMEERA: BUT MAAN I CANT DRIVE FOR THIS LONG

SASHA: DONT WORRY SAMEERA I VILL DRIVE IF U GET TIRED

SAMEERA GLARING AT SASHA

MAAN: SO PROBLEM SOLVED.

MAAN: OKAY THEN EVERY1 BE READY ON TIME.

RECAP-: HUM JO CHALNE LAGE ,,CHALNE LAGE HAI YE RAASTE...

GEET: MAAN.." AAAHHH"

MAAN:GEET HILO MAT WARNA AUR PAIN HOGA

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CHAPTER THREE


IT WAS 3.3O WHEN MAAN WOKE UP.HE GOT READY BY 4AM AND WENT TO GEET HOUSE TO PICK UP HER. MAAN WAS WAITING IN FRONT OF GEET'S HOUSE WITH HIS CAR.AND THE DOOR OPEN AND HERE GEET COMES WEARING A DARK BLUE JEANS AND A PLAIN WHITA SHIRT.MAAN WAS CONTINOUSLY GAZING AT HER. GEET FELT UNCOMFORTABLE.MAAN UNDERSTOOD AND DIVERTED HIS GAZE.

MAAN: U R LOOKING PREETY.

GEET:BLUSHING AND LOOKING AT MAAN .SO R U LOOKING HANDSOME IN WHITE SHIRT AND BLUE JEANS LIKE ME.

MAAN: WHAT A COINCIDENCE, HAI NA?

GEET: HMM. CHALE.

MAAN SUDDENLY STOPS GEET AND BRINGS HER CLOSE TO HIM BY HER WAIST.

GEET GASP AT HIS SUDDDEN PULL

GEET:MAAN YEH KYA KAR RAHE HO?

MAAN:LOOKING DEEP INTO HER EYES AND COMES CLOSE TO HER AND GIVE HER A KISS ON HER CHEEK

GEET:BLUSHING SHE LOOKS DOWN

GEET IN MIND MUJHE BURA LAGNA CHAHIYE THA LEKIN MUJHE NAHI LAG RAHA HAI,AISA KYU BABAJI?

MAAN LEAVES HER OPEN DOOR FOR GEET,SHE SITS DOWN AND WENT TO DRIVER SEAT AND STARTS CAR AND WENT TO MAIN ROAD TO JOIN OTHERS WHO WERE WAITING FOR THEM EXCEPT SASHA AND SAMEERA.

MAAN:SASHA AUR SAMEERA KAHA HAI?

MOHIT:AS ALWALYS LATE

SANAYA:HERE THEY COME

MAAN; KAHA THE TUM DONO

SAMEERA:TUMHE PATA HAI NA MAAN KI ME JALDI NAHI UTH NAHI SAKTI.

MAAN: THIK HAI. ABHI CHALO JALDI.

EVERY1 LEFT WITH THERE FUTURE PARTNERS EXCEPT SASHA AND SAMEERA LOLZZ..

GEET: SHE WAS LOOKING OUT OF WINDOW AND THINKING ABOUT THE PAST EVENTS WITH MAAN AND A SMILE CREPT ON HER FACE,WHICH DIDNT WENT UNSEEN BY MAAN

MAAN: GEET KYA SOCH RAHI HO?

GEET:KUCH NAHI BAS YEH KHUSURAT SCENE KO DEKH RAHI HU.

MAAN:KHOOBSURAT TOU HAI LEKIN TUMSE KAM.

GEET: TURNING FULLY RED.

GEET:SUDDENLY SHOUTING

GEET:MAAN GAADI ROKIYE

MAAN: KYU KYA HYA

GEET:AAP GAADI ROKIYE TOU

MAAN STOPING CAR.GEET RUNS AS SOON AS MAAN STOPS CAR

GEET:MAAN IDHAR AAYI NA

MAAN COMING

GEET:DEKHIYE KITNA KHOOSURAT NAZARA HAI

MAAN ; HA YEH TOU SACH ME BOHOT KHUBSURAT HAI,,,,WHILE LOOKING AT GEET

GEET SPREAD HER ARMS TO WECOME THE COOL BREEZE

MAAN ALSO SPREADING HIS ARMS AND INTERLOCKING HIS FINGERS WITH HERS.

GEET BLUSHING SLOWLY REMOVES HER HAND FROM HIS GRIP AND RUNS TO CAR..MAAN SMILING TO HIMSELF.

EVERY1 REACHES TO SHIMLA AT AROUND 10PM AT NIGHT,,,BUT MUSKAN AND RAHUL WERE THE 1ST TO REACH.THEY WERE IN THE CAR AND WHEN MAAN AND GEET GOES NEAR THERE CAR,,,WHAT THEY SEE LEFT THEM SPELLBOUNDED...THEY BOTH WERE KISSING EACHOTHER HUNGRYLY...MAAN AND GEET TURNS AWAY AND THEY KNOCKS THE DOOR.

RAHUL: ARRE TUM LOG AAGAYE?

MAAN: HA, JAB TUM LOG VO...

RAHUL : HA HA ME SAMAJH GAYA.

GEET: MUSKAN YE KYA THA?

MUSKAN: RAHUL MUJHE PASAND KARTA HAI AUR MUJHE BHI VO PASAND HAI. SO WE ARE TOGETHER NOW.

MOHIT AND SANAYA ALSO COMES THEY ARE ALSO SHOCK WITH THIS NEWS.

THEY SEARCH FOR THE HOTEL BUT ALL WERE BOOKED.FINALLY THEY FIND 1 HOTEL BUT IT WAS HAVING A RULE THAT 1 ROOM SHARED BY TWO PEOPLE.

EVERY1 LOOK AT EACHOTHERS FACES

MOHIT:ME AND SANAYA WILL BE STAYING 2GETHER.

SANAYA TURNING FULLY RED WITH EMBARRESMENT

RAHUL:ME AND MUSKAN WILL ALSO STAY 2GETHER

SAMEERA:FINE THEN ME AND MAAN WILL STAY AND SASHA ANS GEET WIL STAY 2GETHER

MAAN: NO,,ME AND GEET WILL STAY 2GETHER AS I HAV PROMISED HER PARENTS THAT I WILL B WITH HER ALL THE TIME,SO U AND SASHA STAY 2GETHER.OK SAMEERA?

SAMEERA:GRITTING HER TEETH ,,,

OK

MAAN:WHISPERING IN GEET'S EAR ,,TUMHE KOI PROBLEM TOU NAHI HAI NA?

GEET:SHAKING HER HEAD IN NO.

EVERY1 GOES TO THEIR ROOMS..ROOMS WEREW HAVING KINGS SIZE BED AND LAVISH FURNITURE.

WHILE GOING APSTAIRS GEET ANKLE GETS TWISTS AND SHE WAS ABOUT TO FAAL WHEN MAAN COMES HOLDS HER AND MADE HER SIT ON STEPS,MAAN WAS LOOKING AT HER ANKLE AND THAT SHE GOT SPRAN HE SLIGHLY TURNS HER ANKLE BUT GEET CRIES IN PAIN

MAAN: GEET HILO MAT WARNA ZYADA PAIN HOGA

SAYING THIS HE TURNS HER ANKLE SUDDENLY

GEET; MAAN AAAH

AFTER WHICH HER PAIN WAS GONE.

MAAN : CHALE

GEET: TURNING AND TWISTING HER LEG,MAAN AAPNE KYA KIYA MERA PAIR TOU ACHA HI HOGAYA.

MAAN:MAAN BABA KA KAMAL HAI YE SAB

GEET: MAAN BABA KI JAYE. ABHI CHALE

AFTER REACHING ROOM

MAAN: TUM FRESH HO JAO FIR HUM BAHAR KHANA KHANE CHALENGE

GEET:NAHI ME BOHOT THAK GAYI HU,HUM YAHI KHANA ORDER KARENGE.

MAAN: THIK HAI,,JAISI AAPKI AGYA MADAM.

GEET SMILES AND WENT TO GET FRESH.

MAAN: KHANA KYA ORDER KARU?MUHJHE TOU USKI PASAND BHI NAHI MALUM.

MAAN GOES NEAR BATH ROOM AND ASK GEET

MAAN:GEET KHANE ME KYA LOGI?

GEET:KUCH BHI CHALEGA

MAAN:THIK HAI

MAAN COLS AND WAS GIVING ORDER FOR FOOD WHEN GEET COMES OUT OF WASHROOM WITH WET HAIRS.MAAN FINISHES HIS COL AND TURN AND WAS SPRLLBOOUNDED TO SEE GEET IN HER DARK BLUE NIGHT GOWN WITH WET HER.

SHE WAS STANDING NEAR WINDOW.

MAAN APPROACHES HER AND SLOWLY KEEPS HIS HAND ON HER WAIST, GEET GASPS AT HIS TOUCH BUT SHE DIDNT PROTEST TO COME OUT OG HIS GRIP,MAAN TIGHTEN HIS GRIP ON HER AND SLOWLY STARTS SUCKING DROPLET OF WATER OF HER WET HER ON HER NECK,MAKING ALL HER HAIR FALL ON 1 SIDE HE STARTS GIVING HER WET KISSES ON NECK.A MOAN LEFT FROM HER MOUTH WHICH MAKES MAAN GO CRAZY.

GEET KEEPS HER HEAD BACK TO GIVE HIM PROPER ACSESS

MAAN CARRY HER IN HIS ARMS AND PUT HER ON BED AND COMES ON TOP OF HER.

HE AGAIN STARTS KISSING HER BUT THIS TIME WILDLY.GEET MOANS INCRESES WITH.SHE TAKES HIS HAIR IN HER FIST AS SHE IS UNABLE TO HOLD THAT MUCH PASSION.MAAN SLOWLY COMES TO HER LIPS AND STARTS SUCKING IT NIBBLING IT.HE BITES HER LOWER LIP SND BLOOD STARTS OOZING OUT,,MAAN SUCKS THAT BLOOD.HE SLOWLY MOVES DOWN TO HER NAVEL AND STARTS GIVING HER WER KISSES THERE.GEET PUSHES HIM MORE INSIDE HER.

SUDDENLY BELL RINGS AND MAAN COMES BACK TO HIS SENSES BUT GEETS EYES ARE STILL CLOSE,SHE OUT OF BREATH.

MAAN STRAIGHTEN HIS DRESS AND WENT OPEN DOOR,WAITER HAD CAME WITH THEIR FOOD.HE TAKES TROLLEY FROM HIM AND THEN CLOSE THE DOOR.

MAAN GOING NEAR GEET WHOSE EYES ARE STILL CLOSE.MAAN WHISPERING IN HER EARS

MAAN: GEET UTHO

GEET SLOWLY OPENING HER EYES . MAAN SEES TEARS IN IT .

MAAN: GEET PLZ RO MAT , ME TUMSE PYAR KARTA HU.BOHOT KARTA HU.JABSE TUMHE DEKHA HAI TABSE MUJHE TUMSE PYAR HO GAYA HAI.

GEET BRINGING MAANS FACE CLOSER TO HER.SHE PLACES HER LIPS ON HIS.HE WAS TAKEN ABACK 1ST BUT THEN HE UNDRSTND THAT SHE WAS EXPRESSING HER LOVE TO HIM.HE ALSO GIVE IN FOR THE KISS,SOON IT BECAME PASSIONATE.. THEY WERE IN THEIR OWN WORLD FAR FROM EVERY1.

THIS WAS MY THIRD PART...

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PRECAP; GEET: MAAN CHODIYE NA ,YE KYA KAR RAHE HAI AAP, KOI DEKH LEGA

MAAN: KISSING HER NECK ,,KOI NAHI DEKHEGA

GEET: MAAN AAAHHHEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 



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