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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gals_11

awesome update yaar.. lol..abhiya parts were lovely.. hope piya is safe from maithali..but again without ny twist d story can't move forward.. eagerly waiting for d next part.. carry on.. thanx for d pm..lol.

thanks...Smile...no worries abhay hai na...Wink

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it was really fab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!luved itStar n add me to the pm list...plzzz
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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by madhuri16

it was really fab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!luved itStar n add me to the pm list...plzzz

thanks...will add u Smile
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Posted: 24 July 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ifrah.

Awesome update dear..:)

thanks..Smile

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hey peehu , i m posting this message on behalf of meera "ilove99" , plz follow it if it will help u Big smile


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@ minahi...thanks for info...

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                                CHAPTER 18: THE ATTACK

 

A new day has risen. Pia has new hopes from a new day. She now knows everything about abhay. Whether good or bad these things will be a part of her life…their life. pia is sitting on her bed and yawning.

M: pia….kya hua hai…u sleeping like hell. Abhay ke sapne dekhna bandh karo and get up. We will be late for college.

P (still yawning): itni subah kyu chilla rahi ho.

M: sleeping beauty its 10. Get up or we will be late.

P: oh no! pehle kyu nahi kaha. Abhay mera wait kar raha hoga.

M: phir abhay!

Pia picks her towel and runs towards bathroom. Pia gets ready for college.

P: chalo m ready

M: finally….mujhe laga sajne sawarne main tum poora din le logi. Abhay knws how u look.

P: shut up! Ab late nahi ho raha hai.

Pia and misha leave for college. On the way,

M: kya hua pia? U seem lost?

P: kuch nahi..

M: tumhe sach me abhaylicious syndrome ho gaya hai

P: watch and drive mish

M: fine mat bolo.

They finally reach college. Abhay has already reached college. Aliya and Arjun are also standing with abhay. Pia and misha goes near them.

A: pia kya hua? U didn't sleep all nite?

M: finally u wrong at one place Mr sadu….she was sleeping like sleeping beauty. Bahot mehnat ki hai maine aaj ise uthane main

P: shut up mish!

A: hey misha…meet them…this is aliya my sis and my best frnd arjun.

M: tumhari behen kab paida hui

Aliya: 130 saal pehle

Misha starts laughing and others watch her giving her warning look.

M: hi aliya and arjun

Aliya: hey misha

Arjun: hi misha

M: abhay u never told u had a sis.

A: oh I told pia

P: ya rite…smacking him in his stomach

A: ouch pia! It hurts

Pia rolled her eyes

M: aliya v really gonna be good frnds….looks like u r also bratty prankster like me

A: u have no idea abt that.

Arjun: jo jhelte hai wahi jante hai

Aliya: haha…very funny

M: tum dono kaunse class main ho?

A: we all in same class.

Aliya: looks like its time for fun

[at office]

Panchi had started falling for sid somewhere. she knew that sid is a big flirt but she couldn't help resist his goodness and kindness. Panchi sitting in office is remembering the day sid saved her from Danish

Fashback:

S: panchi we have a meeting in restaurant

Panchi: we?

S: u and me baby

Panchi: oh plz sid…get a life

S: I already got a new one….and its too late for other

Panchi: wat?

S: chalo clients will be waiting for us

[at restaurant]

Panchi: tumhare clients kyu nahi aaye

S: kyu? Mere saath u getting bored? Tum meri image kharab kar rahi ho

P: whatever

S: I will be back in few minutes…don't miss me sweet heart

Panchi makes a face

Panchi is sitting alone. Danish who has been stalking panchi for a while go a chance to meet her alone

D: hi panchi…

Panchi: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Just leave

D: chala jaunga par tumhare saath. Tumhe mujhse koi alag nahi kar sakta

Danish catches her hand so tightly that panchi is unable to set herself free. Suddenly,

S: toh raddish is here

D: who u? u just stay out of this

S: oh u mean kabab main handsome

Panchi: oww! It hurting. Leave me.

Danish starts pulling panchi. But sid gives a punch on danish's face. Danish gets hurt.

S: don't u dare touch my girl

Panchi is looking at sid and started crying

Panchi: thanks sid

S: its ok..lets leave. The client are not coming

[present]

S: panchi! Stop thinking about me

Panchi: oh ya! Y will I think about u?

S: because u love me

Panchi: in ur dreams

Panchi leaves the office. Sid is staring at panchi and smiling.

[in college]

Aliya: oh god! Lectures kitne boring the. Isse better toh arjun ki baatein lagti hai

Arjun: sweety pie! Tumne mujse kuch kaha

M: chalo torture khatm toh hua

A: pia wats wrong with u?

Aliya: bhai she is missing u and ur forest

M: wat forest?

Aliya: inka jungle main mangal

M: pia! Aliya knws and not me

P: shut up! M leaving

A: wait…I will drop u

Arjun: pia ke majnu…wait…who will drop us

M: u want me to do so

Aliya: no prob….but bhai u coming with us

P: u all go wherever u want to. M going all alone

A: wats happening to her

Aliya: give her some time[told so low that only abhay could hear]

M: fine then…abhay going toh mera koi kaam nahi…mujhe vaise bhi kabir se milna hai…bye all

Pia has already left and misha also leaves now

Aliya suddenly has a vision. She is shocked to see this…

A: wats the matter?

Aliya: pia is in danger

Pia is driving her car and going home. She is also confused about whats happening to her. Why is she behaving so. Suddenly she sees a man standing in the middle of the road. Pia applies brakes and gets out of the car.

Man: hello…..i have been waiting for u

P: who u?

Man: neel

Pia: who neel?

N: u will come to knw rite now

Neel pulls pia away with him.

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                                CHAPTER 19: TIME HAS COME

Pia is in neels arms. She is unconscious.

N: dekho main tumhare liye kise laya hu

A lady dressed in red and black gown is standing.

Lady: hamein khushi hai ki tumne humara yeh kaam itne ache se kiya

N: apke liye kuch bhi Maithili

Pia gains conscious. She sees neel with a lady.

P: kahan hu main? Main yaha kaise aayi

Metz: tum hamare paas ho pia

Pia is shocked to see her. She was Maithili. Wahi Maithili jiske bare main abhay ne bataya tha. She realized that time has come. Its only abhay who can save her. But what will be the cost?

P: Maithili tum?

Metz: toh tum hamare bare main jaanti ho…abhayendra ne bataya hoga…dekha neel woh humse kitna pyaar karta hai

N: par main tumse pyaar karta hu. Aur tum mere saamne uski…main yaha saare rules tod raha hu…ek vampire aur werewolf ek saath hai..

Metz: humne kab kaha ki hum usse pyaar karte hai. Hum sirf tumse pyaar karte hai

P: plz mujhe jaane do. Abhay tumhe nahi chodega. Agar tum jeena chahti ho toh chod do

Metz: kaisa waqt hai yeh….ek insaan…kamjor insaan…humien….dhamka raha hai…tumhe iski keemat chukani padegi

[at raichands]

A: kuch pata chala. Pia ka phone nahi lag raha hai

Abhay gets a call. Its misha

M: abhay.. pia ghar nahi lauti hai. Bahot time ho gaya hai. We all worried. Is she with u?

A: nahi…main bhi uska phine kab se try kar raha…nahi lag raha hai. I am going to search her.

M: thik hai. Main yaha ghar par sab ko sambhalti hu. Sab tension main hai.

Misha cuts the phone

A: aliya plz kuch dekho aur batao

H: abhay….she is trying. Do not worry. Pia ko kuch nahi hoga

S: abhay….plz relax

Aliya: bhai I can see her car. Its in middle of the jungle. I think wahi se hamein kuch pata chalega

A: lets go

Abhay, aliya, sid and arjun leave while chand and haseena waits at home.

A: there it is. Pia ki car

S: pia nahi hai

Suddenly abhay finds a note left for him….

Abhayendra hum jaante hai kit tum pia ko dhoond rahe ho. Agar use milna chahte ho toh tumhe pata hai humain kya chahiye. Uss angoothi ko lekar seedha humse jungle ke beech main bane poorane khandar main aake milo

A: pia Maithili ke paas hai. Main nahi chodunga. I will kill her

S: abhay hum bhi tumhare saath chal rahe hai

A: nahi sid…main akela jaunga. Tum tab tak jaakar mom aur dad ko batao.

Aliya: m coming with u….u will need me

A: thik hai…magar ring

Arjun: uski chinta mat karo…hum sab aa rhe hai ring lekar. Tum aur aliya jao.

[at poorana khandhar]

Metz: abhayendra aa raha hai…ab hamara maksad jarur poora hoga. Itne saalo ki mehnat ka fal ab milega

P: aisa kabhi nahi hoga Maithili

Metz: bahot bolti ho tum. Bas kuch waqt aur hamain tumhari yeh bakwaas sunni padegi

N: ab bahot jald hum ek honge Maithili

Neel and Maithili kiss each other and pia gives them a disgusted look.


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Edited by peehu24 - 28 July 2011 at 5:57am

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