FF: FANAA...tere pyaar main..

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FF:CAPTIVATED (BY ME AND ANJALI)

Edited by peehu24 - 12 years ago

                        CHAPTER 2 : ATTRACTION

Pia, Misha and Kabir reach mount college. Pia is avoiding Kabir. Seeing this Misha decides to do something.

Kabir: hey mish! Pia is not talking to me.

M: I knw K. I heard everything last nite. I wil do sumthing. Its time for action baby!!

Misha decides to take both of them to mountain climbing. On reaching,

P: are you mad mish. Papa ko pata chala toh he wil kill us. We will b grounded

M: chill pia..birdie ki tarah mat act karo..kabir lets go'u and pia go together kabir

P: misha plz I don't'.

K: m srry pia'.i wont do it again'.i promise'I don't want to lose a frnd'.

P: its ok kabir...frnds forever again.

Pia and kabir go together. During this adventure the rope of pia breaks and she is falling down'kabir and misha shout but are helpless. Suddenly an arm catches frightened Pia. Pia is in his arms fighting her fear. "tum aakhein khol sakti ho", he says. Pia opens her eyes. She sees a young man carrying her in his arms. She is continuously staring at him. He is also not able to take his eyes off her. Pia feels attraction to him as if he has hypnotised her. She feels that the whole world is meaningless and its just him and her. Pia is so absorbed in his eyes that she doesn't realize that she is still in his arms. He sets Pia down.

Pia: thank..thank u...u..u saved my life.hii m pia.

He just walks away saying," as if I care".

Kabir and misha reach to pia. They are happy that pia is alrite. They hug her. But pia is still absorbed in his thoughts'.At home pia tells misha and panchi about it. But they feel that Pia is in shock. Pia still in his thoughts slowly drifts to sleep'.

Edited by peehu24 - 12 years ago

                    CHAPTER 3: THE RAICHANDS

Abhay is back home. He is still thinking about pia.

Haseena: wat is it abhay? U seem lost?

A: mom...I saw her...maithili...her name is pia and she luks exactly like her

Haseena: abhay..control urself..she is not Maithili. Kal se colg start ho raha hai..focus on that..make new frnds. Hamare survival ke liye yeh jaruri hai'samjhe'and remember v r not humans..

A: but mom...

Chand: abhay! Haseena sahi bol rhi hai

Sidharth: abhay!tum mere saath chalo..now

Abhay and siddharth go to the terrace to get some time alone.

A: bro I don't  knw main kya karunga..I cant forget Maithili and today wen I saw pia its was like I was living in my old days..she brought back all the memories. Today I saved her life. She was falling from the cliff. Agar main nhi bachata toh she would hav died.

S: little brother...don't worry. I knw u will deal wid it. Just try to maintain distance. And remember no matter whatever u chose I wil always support u and be wid u. no matter wat.

A: thanks..pata nhi mera kya hota tumhare bina.

Abhay is still thinking about pia. He decides that he will always maintain distance from her. He decided never to meet her again.

 

But fate had sumthing else in store for both Pia and abhay.

I hope u like it...plz do comment...

Edited by peehu24 - 12 years ago

no its gud but right FF infont of it so tht ppl came 2 know its fans friction

U wnt 2 know the answer...its green signal...really loved it...go ahead...

hey dont get disheartened so soon😃... its reallu gr8 👏... u write really nice🤗 ... give people sm time i m sure they will cm to ur ff😉... keep writing continue soon❤️

wow for a change Sid is not evil. Thts really a welcome change

OH UR PLEASURE & SORRY Fan fiction & not friction LOL😆 Edited by cuteshrishti - 12 years ago