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NIVREN ROMANTIC SCENE PART:11 (WONDER BABY...)

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged

Hi All…

 Here is the 11th scene of my NIVREN SAGA. I would like to continue where I left my NIVREN SAGA in my 10th scene….

CC asks Viren to come inside. Then she hugs both Nivi and Viren and blesses them. CC leaves the room. Viren looks at Nivi. He is very emotional. He is trying to control his tears but one drop of tear rolls out of his left eye. Nivi wipes Viren tears and says affectionately," Viren ….ab ye aansoo kyo….ab toh sab theek ho raha hai naa." Viren smiles and says," Nivi ye khushi ke aansoo hai…Maa ko hum aur tum milkar bhi nahi badal paaye…lekin abhi toh hamara baccha aaya bhi nahi iss duniya main aur usne ye kaam kar diya…usne Maa ko badal diya…" Nivi tries to make the environment light by saying," Viren akhir baby kiska hai…." Viren smiles and says," haa Nivi…ye hamara 'WONDER BABY' hai…"

Then Viren takes out a "Dhaaga". Nivi asks," ye kya hai, Viren?"  Viren," Nivi, tumko yaad hai Tai Ji Divya bhabhi ko  Nazar se bachane ke liye Mandir se Nazar ka dhaaga banwa kar layi thi, toh main bhi aaj mandir gaya tha…aur waisa he ek dhaaga pandit ji se tumhare liye banawa kar laya hoo….woh actually mujhe pata nahi tha naa ke Maa tumhare liye ye sab karti ya nahi…par ab mujhe yakeen hai woh tumhara aur humare WONDER BABY ka dhyaan acche se rakehngi…' Then Viren ties that Dhaaga on Nivi's arm.

Viren is looking at the whole room.  Nivi asks what he is thinking right now. Viren says," Hmmm…Nivi main soch raha hoo iss room ke deewaron ko kis color se paint karwaoo…Blue ya Pink…Ab pata nahi Beta hoga ya beti…tum kuch suggest karo naa Nivi.." Nivi says," Viren …ye toh mujhe bhi nahi pata…aur uske liye humko wait karna padega abhi….par kahi agar twin hue toh …aur woh bhi ek beta aur ek beti tab hum kya karenge…" Viren quickly replies," Koi tension nahi Nivi….tab hum aadhe room Ko blue color se paint karwayenge…aur aadhe room ko pink color se …" Then Both start laughing like a kid.

Sood family is taking their dinner at dining area of mansion. VD asks Nivi to take one more chapaati, Nivi says she is full but VD asks DD to give Nivi one more chapaati. DD says reluctantly," Maa rahane dijiye naa…jab woh kah rahi hai ke usko bhookh nahi hai…toh aap kyo uske peeche padi hai…woh ab maa banana wali hai…koi baachi toh hai nahi…jo use apani bhookh ka andaaza naa ho…" Everyone is surprised by this. Nivi is hurt.  CC says to Nivi," Nivi, beta …ye lo tum sweets khao…. Khane ke baad meetha bhi toh khana chahiye.." Viren is relieved now and he has smile on his face.

Niven come to their room. Viren is again looking at walls of room. Nivi asks," Ab kya hua Viren…ab kya naya idea aaya hai tumko…"  Viren says," Main soch raha hoo ke agar beta hua toh woh mere jaisa deekhana chahiye aur agar Beti hue toh woh tumhari tarah deekhani chahiye…aur uske liye jaroori hai ke iss room main meri aur tumhari bachapan ke photo ho.. toh main aisa karta hoo kee….ek tumhari aur ek meri bachapan ke photo enlarge karwa kar,iss samane wali deewar par laga doonga…taki jab subah tum utho toh tumhari nazar sabse pahale unn photos par jaye…"  Nivi doesn't say anything, she is just looking at viren.  Viren asks with his eyes…."what" …Nivi also replies with his eyes …" Nothing….just admiring you".

Then Nivren goes to their bed. Nivi is trying to sleep. Viren is looking at her. Viren comes near to nivi and feels her tummy and kisses her tummy. Then he softly says, "Good Night, merae WONDER BABY…"  Nivi asks viren, " Aur meri good night kiss ka kya hua…tum mujhe abhi se bhool gaye viren…" Viren says,"Jiske wajah se mujhe  zindagi ke sabse badi  khushi mil rahi hai…main usse kaise bhool sakta hoo…" He kisses her on her forehead and says," Good night ….meri jaan" Then he kisses her on her eyes and says, "Good night….meri jaan" Then he kisses her on her cheeks and says, "Good night …meri jaan" Then he kisses her on her lips and says nothing.  

        

 
 
 
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:11am | IP Logged

yati

what a wonderful scene dearSmileTongue
 
u r just great when it comes to writing nivren scenesClap
 
it is just refreshingSmile to the core

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:11am | IP Logged

Mindbowing scene Yati.  Clap Hope we get dialogue b/w nivren like this in CCBM. Day Dreaming

Nivi asks viren, " Aur meri good night kiss ka kya hua…tum mujhe abhi se bhool gaye viren…" Viren


Edited by Alphabet26 - 14 May 2011 at 3:22am

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Yati.. dil khush kar diya...loved the scene...Wonder Baby... so cute...

When the story proceed please have NivRen get twins Wink...cause we want Wonder babies Wink


Edited by Raj_Luv_NiViren - 14 May 2011 at 3:29am

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Wow that was brilliant yati please continue soon

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:34am | IP Logged
Oh Yati U made my Day by writing this scene, This is sooo cute Dear,  Am sooo much loving it,  So romantic, Nivren baby, and Viren kissing her oh sooo sweet,  Yati Why dont we get such cute scenes, And am sooo happy CC has changed and her feelings are sooo true for Nivi,  Good Work Yati Jaan, PLease continue writing

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Beautiful scene. Loved it yati
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Awesome scenes Yati... Thanks dol.
Love NivRen more and more.

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