Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

My first OS - Lone and betrayed

mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 12:44am | IP Logged

hey guys this is my first Os..thanks goes to naddiya didi ..Smile

How does it feel to be betrayed ?? what will you do when the person whom you trust the most , known for years , just goes behind some one and betray you ?? yea , it happened to me . I could not recover from it until he came . Just like a savior in a field ''.

I , geet handa born in a rich family . Got everything in a hand reach . I haven't even heard the word "no" . I got everything I needed . But I want to live a life like everyone else . Yes , I want friends like any other people in school . Ofcourse I got , but they all are behind my money and fame .  I accepted them just to drive away my loneliness . Being the only daughter to my parents , I got everything but the care and love which every child long for in my age . 

I was in my college I year . It felt different to be with new people . I wanted a change and It happened . I met her . She is pari . Oh yes she really is . Bubbly and happy going girl . it was so nice to be with her . we became friends at the first shot . we started spending more time . eventually she spent most of her time at my home . we shared everything and anything . I felt like I had a sister in her form then .

It was a birthday party of my cousin "prakash" . I took her with me since I had to go alone . but it was the biggest mistake I had don't in my life . I introduced her to him . then started the party and I got the biggest shock of my life . my parents planned mine and prakash marriage . I accepted it as I dint want to go against their wishes . I felt happy too since I had known since childhood . he too was happy . the engagement happened on the same day . since then we started spending time with each other more . late night talks , party's and even picnics . we were always In limit . we enjoyed the life .

Finally the marriage gonna happen in a month . I was over the moon . my college was over . yes , we had been waiting for this day for three years . It was a usual day , I was in a mall with my mom to buy some essentials . I was moving towards the cosmetics sections and I saw him with pari . laughing and hugging . I felt some one had pricked my heart out . they seemed happy together . I don't know what to do . I prayed everything to be a dream . I just cant control my tears . I silently left the place unnoticed by them .  I consoled myself thinking it was just a friendly one and nothing else .

A week was over since the incident . I was so confused but I decided to stay calm and think over it . but fate seems to be cruel with me . I saw them again in a restaurant rest room kissing each other . I dropped the things I had in my hand . it was then they noticed me . he was so shocked . so was pari . he came forward to explain . I just showed my hand indicating to stop . I felt so humiliated and cheap . I left home immediately not wanting to face any more thing .

I decided no matter what , I should not marry him . yes he cheated me . more than that I was angry on pari . how could she do that to me ?? she knows well that am engaged to him ,,, still how can she ???if she loved him , why cant say that earlier ? I could have stopped this marriage '.. no she dosent deserve a chance..

I  told my parents about my decision . after a long argument they agreed . I could no longer stay there . so I left the country and came to india . I wanted to start my life afreash . I looked for job and I got in khuranna constructions . I started working there as a M.D. secretory and  junior designer . life was happy with the way it went . I got new friends like adi , pinky , sasha , tasha . they were kind enough to keep me away from M.D. wrath ..yes he was a real devil . but kind at heart . I started feeling the change but decided not to fell in the trap again . I don't want to face the same humiliation again . I concentrated more on work and started learning more things .

Things went smooth till the day he proposed me . yes , the karus , dhust dhanav was romantic enough to propose .i felt shocked and surprised . I don't know whether I can trust some one again . I saw the true love in his eyes which I cannot ignore .some thing from with in told me to share my past with him and I did it .

After hearing it he promised me to with me all through with my life and to never ever leave me . I believed him . we had a happy life and now am married to him with our parents consent . I leading my life so contended happily with my husband and my cute "mahi" whom I got just after a year of marriage. She is now three years with sharp eyes , just like his father '

I understood what the world meant . full of mystery's and puzzles . some good enough and some so dirty . we need to avoid and overcome the dirty ones and learn to live with the happinesss around ' 


Edited by mrk_1 - 06 October 2011 at 8:47am

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Chelsha Senior Member

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Its very short and simple and yet your writing skill made it touch my heart. Its excellent for the first attempt I should say. Keep writing dear.

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Sabmeratu. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Lovely OS
Glad she gave love another chance & accepted maans proposal
Pari could hav told the truth instead oh going behind her bak & flirting
Nice ending to it Xx...Smile

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jasraj123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 2:04am | IP Logged
durga nice os. it was short but ur writing was very goodClap. keep writing yaar and i love ur writingLOL

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Eccentric.Being IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
It was too Precise but concept was good

Edited by serenelove - 14 May 2011 at 3:37am

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sona-rai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 2:38am | IP Logged
awesome cute little janu OS loved it a lotBig smile

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sanu3108 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:09am | IP Logged
very very nice Thumbs Up

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jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
very nice OS.i really liked it.plz pm me whenever u write os

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