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new fanfic part 26 on page 38 (Page 31)

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Posted: 17 October 2011 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
wow jealous arjun...hmmm i love the sound of that lol
 
 
 
 
cant wait 4 d nxt update
 
 
 
 
pls contsoon
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
BRAINYCHILD,

PLEASE TRY TO GIVE US AN UPDATE OF THIS FF ON OUR KRITZ B'DAY (25th OCTOBER). LETS ENJOY THE DAY BY READING AN UPDATE OF ALL FFs IN THIS FORUM.

thanks,
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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 12:18am | IP Logged
hmm...arjun's jealous...gr8 update...
bt what happened to khusi???
continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 November 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
hey,
 
when can we expect an update next
 
sorry if u r busy

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Posted: 13 November 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged

Wow its been over a month. I totally forgot cuz of my stupid assingments and exams. Sorry guys. I wasn't gonna update today either but i got a pm from mIsHeZ.x,  so this is dedicated to you! Remind me on the 24th, and i think i'll be able to update then.. till then enjoy reading. Comment and like. It encourages me to keep updating =D



Next morning we wake up and get out for breakfast. While eating we discuss our plans or the anniversary party. Soon, Arjun's bua comes with her family and Rey. 

(Arjun and Romit went to get stuff for the party and bua's sons are not important)


Rey: So how do you guys plan on celebrating the 25th.

Gauri: Well, it is a party so we're gonna have fun!

Rey: Sing and dance or the boring eat and leave...

Arohi: Hey Rey, what do you think of my family? We may be traditional, but we know how to have fun, what say guys?

Shefali: All they way Aro! We prepared so much. They'll be singing and dancing and so much Masti!! oh, i mean fun! But what about you?

Rey: What about me? I'll adjust. No worriez, you're here na to keep me company ;)    Gauri's eyes shoot open; she can't believe he's flirting with her cousin

Arohi whispers Badtameez, and smacks him on his head...

Shefali: Uffo, chill maar yaar! I don't mind ;)

Arohi: Ya, ya, Romit ya Arjun aayenge na, tab dekhoongi, "I don't mind"!

Rey: What do you mean?

Arohi: Romit is her older brother, and Arjun is her older cousin who treats her like his baby sister. 

Rey: Minced meat?

Arohi: That is an understatement, my bro.


Savita: Paratha khaana hai ya bread?

Gauri + Shefali: Bread.Gotta watch weight!

Arohi: naa yaar, i want parathe's! Hostel mein ghar ka khaana kahan naseeb, aur voh bhi garam garam parate, maasi ke haath ke!

Savita: Makhan mat laga, abhi laati hoon. 

Bua: Apne dost se bhi pooch le... (mumbles pata nahi kabhi khaaya bhi hoga kabhi! angreez se dosti kar li.. ghar pe bula liya, naak katvaye gi sab ki!)

Arohi ignores her and turns to Rey: Dude!

Rey: Huh? Sorry I was thinking about something...

Arohi: Or someone??  anyways, what do you want with this?

Rey: Parathe! is that even a question. Dad ki wajah se parathe kahan naseeb hain! 

Savita: Beta, apko hindi aati hai?

Rey: Thodi bohat... considering main India mein rehta hoon, apni maasi ke paas... Dad oily khaana nahi kha sakte... bohat bemar hain so voh yahan transfer ho gaye ilaaj ke liye. 

Savita: Aur tum bhi..

Rey: Nahi aunty, main India mein parta hoon. Yahan ek semester ke liye aaya hoon, unse milne.   Arohi whispers, ya bhaagne?

Savita: Acha, main abhi laati hoon parathe.

Gauri: Tum angrez nahi ho?

Rey: No dude. Reyanssh... Reyansh Singhaanya.. 

Shefali: so tum ek Singhaniya ho?

Rey: Ya but spelling different hai ;)

Arohi: Tu kabhi nahi sudrega?

Rey: (tongue click) no chance!


Arjun: At what?

Shefali: nothing... nothing at all bhai..

Savita: Arjun tu agaya? aa, tu bhi kha...

Arjun: No mom, I'm fine. I don't want to eat.

Savita: But I made the paratha...

Rey: O well, more for me!

Arjun: What is it?

Savita: Your favorite aalo ke parathe.

Arjun: Well, in that case, I guess I can have some

Thinking: Mere hisey ka khaana, yeh khayega? Not on my watch

Arohi Thinking: What's gotten into Arjun. You can almost never change his mind...


Next Scene: Party     (Now party is at Singhaniya apartment so not many people-- thats how we usually have parties so that's why I'm basing the setting off of my experience...)


Everyone is talking and joking around with their own group. The bell rings. I go to get it. 


Arohi: MAMA!

Its Amrit and gang.

Amrit: Kaise hai tu? 

Arjun: Aagaye. Bas apka hi wait ho raha tha.

Amrit: Jeete raho puttar. Arohi ne zyaada tang to nahi kiya tha na.

Arjun: Nahi aunty. It was all good

Arohi: Mama! Not fair. 

Rey: Everythings fair in love and war sweetheart! Right Raj

Rey and Raj high-five and Arjun brings in everyone. 


We all gather around and I get up to make a speech.

Arohi: Maasa, Maasi. You two are the most amazing couple ever! Truly, you two are my role models. Mera life partner apka carbon copy bhi hoga na, tho main bilkul complain nahi karoongi, because maasa, you really know how to keep a woman happy! (and I sit down)

Rey: Carbon copy...

Arohi: Shut up dude! Kabhi bhi teri baqwaas shuru ho jaati hai!

Khushi: Lets give a round of applause to Arohi for her beautifully emotional speech! Now enough mushy mushy stuff, lets get to some fun. I heard Arohi and her friend Rey and big entertainers in University. Why don't you guys entertain us. 

Arohi: Nahi... Main kaise...

Everyone is cheering for me but Arjun doesn't like all this. Wouldn't it be cheating him in a way. I mean.. But then I look towards him and he's encouraging me? I mean he's not saying anything but its clear in his eyes

Rey: Go ahead Ro. Sing something for me.

Arohi: You? And I would do that for you because...

Rey: Tell me the truth. I thought long and hard and  I'm confused. I know you want to say something but you're too scared. So tell me in a song...

Savita: Iski baaton mein aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Kuch bhi gaale... Koi kuch nahi kahe ga--hinting at arjun. 


I get up and clear my throat.


Chorus:  Looks straight at Rey...with attitude
Jo Sabh Se Darega
Woh Pyar kya Karega
Jo Sabh Se Darega
Woh Pyar Kya Karega
Rey is kind of ashamed at this point
Girl: Closed eyes
Chori Chori Chup Chup
Milne Na Aana
Chori Chori Chup Chup
Milne Na Aana
Duniya Se Daar Ke Na Dil Ko Lagaana
Dam Hai To Aana Mujhko Tham Ne
Dam Hai To Aana Mujhko Tham Ne
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne

Chori Chori Chup Chup Looks down at the floor
Milne Na Aana
Duniya Se Daar Ke Na Dil Ko Lagaana
Dam Hai To Aana Mujhko Tham Ne
O, O Dam Hai To Aana Mujhko Tham Ne
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne...

Again Looks straight at  Rey while he can't meet his eyes with hers
Suna Hai Aaaj Ke AashiqBade kamzor Hote Hain      
Kabhi Bhi Toot Jaate Hain To Kachi Door Hote Hain
Khayaloon Mein Basaate Hain Nazar Ke Chor Hote Hain


Logoon Se Na Bach Bach Ankhiyaan Milana  Looks towards Arjun
Logoon Se Na Bach Bach Ankhiyaan Milana  Looks towards Rey
Duniya Se Daar Ke Na Dil Ko Lagaana   
Dam Hai To Aana Mujhko Tham Ne                        Looks down
Ho O O Dam Hai To Aana Mujhko Tham Ne
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne                     
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne...


Chorus: Playing around with Maasa
Jo Sabh Se Darega
Woh Pyar kya Karega
Jo Sabh Se Darega
Woh Pyar Kya Karega


Girl:
Bunana Hain Jo Chahaat Ko Looks at Arjun
Zamane Se Chupate Hain
Jo Ulfat Ke Deewane Hain Looks at Rey
Woh Dununiya Ko Bataate Hain
Mohabbat Ki Kasam Lete Hain
Uspe Jaan Lutaate Hain


Vaada Jo Karna To Kar Ke Nibhana Looks at Rey
Vaada Jo Karna To Kar Ke Nibhana Looks at Arjun
Duniya Se Daar Ke Na Dil Ko Lagaana
Dam Hai To Aana Mujhko Tham Ne
O, O, O Dam Hai To Aana Mujhko Tham Ne
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne Looks down
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne


Chori Chori Chup Chup
Milne Na Aana
Duniya Se Daar Ke Na Dil Ko Lagaana
Dam Hai To Aana Mujhko Tham Ne
O, O, O Dam Hai To Aana Mujhko Tham Ne
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne
Pyar Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne
Mujhe Pyar Karna Sabh Ke Saamne

Everyone claps!

Arohi: Lo, ab teri bari.. Jawab hai tere paas?

Rey looks ashamed and walks away... Everyone is quiet.

Arjun's Bua: Kya challenge de ga. Hindi kahan aati hogi usse ke challenge de ga! (bua didn't hear at the table)

Rey gets back. You didn't think I wasn't gonna answer to that did you? Come one dude, not everyone is gifted with a voice like yours. And Bua ji, don't worry, Bollywood ko bollywood mein jawab doonga!


He puts the music on.

O Baby, Don't break My heart. Rey and I acted the song out, leaving everyone speechless!


 By the end, I saw Arjun getting up and going into the kitchen. 

Shayad kuch zyaada ho gaya... I sneak in behind him.


Arohi: Hi.

Arjun; Hi.

Arohi: Just wanted a cup of water.

Arjun; I guess I'll get out of your way then.

Arohi: Wait.

Arjun; Yeah?

Arohi: Um... Are you upset?

Arjun: About?

Arohi: I know you don't approve of singing and dancing and I wasn't going to but I thought it would be okay. I don't know why I felt like you were telling me to... I know I shouldn't have but.

Arjun; Shhh!!  Relax Arohi! I honestly just came to get a cup of water. It is getting really crowded out there. I know I don't like it but I don't want you to change for me. Do what you like to do. 

Just do me a favor and don't mess.

Arohi: What do you mean?

Arjun: I know I shouldn't ask but I have to...

Are you and Rey...

Arohi: What! Rey! I don't understand

Arjun: Look Arohi, apparently you are very special to my mom and she sees some sort of future for us but if you like him, then I'll explain it to mom.

Arohi: Arjun... Ajj keh diya.. Dobara mat kehna! Rey is my BEST friend and that is it! I know this relationship, if thats what you can call it, is complicated but I'm trying. And trust me, if I have any second thoughts you're the first to know!

We give each other a reassuring smile and walk out of the kitchen surprised to see what we found. Arjun's dadi is clutching her heart while Everyone is in their own world not paying attention.

Arohi; DADI! Arjun, call the ambulance.

Arjun: We don't have much time. Go get the wheelchair; we'll take her to the ER (it's right there next to the building)


Someone brings the chair and Arjun and I run her to the ER while Rey stays back calming everyone down. 





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Edited by brainychild92 - 13 November 2011 at 2:13pm

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Posted: 13 November 2011 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arjuhisis

hey,
 
when can we expect an update next
 
sorry if u r busy

just got a pm so i updated.. u should've send me a pm to remind me for kittu's bday. o well, i'll try n update for thanksgiving (US)


Edited by brainychild92 - 13 November 2011 at 2:02pm

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Posted: 13 November 2011 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
OMG THANKU!!!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
il cum bak wit full commnt after iv done prep 4 tmrw ...x
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Posted: 13 November 2011 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
Awww Rey seems so cute! hehehehe
I like Arjun's jealousy of Rey and Arohi's relationship!
 
Awww whats happened to Dadi... hope she is ok! Dont want anything to happen to her!
 
Update soon
Thanks

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