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new fanfic part 26 on page 38 (Page 23)

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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 7:20am | IP Logged
gr8! but she addresses him 'tum' at times n other times..she calls him 'aap'...why is that??
hmm...and why are their talks always quite formal??



Edited by vrshn - 19 July 2011 at 11:01am

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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 8:50am | IP Logged
gr888888888 update! awwee their like going out! hehe! and hey talk every weekend. that is so cute. and arjun came to pick her up. thats nice! hope they gte married soon. update soon (:

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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 9:49am | IP Logged
nice update
can we have a chapter on arjun POV :)
update soon

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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
ey ya i liked d lat teasing line...
aru can be relaxed since ajun s nt in a hurry..
n yeah deir realtionship wl deffo wrk

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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
awsome update hope dey get 2geva soon
cont soon x

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Posted: 21 July 2011 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
some people wanted an arjun's pov part too... well i guess that's do able.. here u guys!    its the same as last part except the blue is arjun's pov.
 btw i won't be updating till next week.. (on vacation again..lol)

YAWN! I open one eye and see that it's 6:00am. Though it's Friday, I don't have to wake up today; neither do i have work, nor do I have class! Well, I'm off to bed again. 


A voice calls out: ARJUN! Utt gaya tu? 

Arjun: Nahi Ma. 

Savita: get up and come out.

Arjun: Uhh, Ma!! Sit here

I sit on the bed and have her sit on it too.

Arjun: What happened.

Savita: Arohi is coming for the party.

Arjun: So...

Savita: Did you guys talk?

Arjun: Mom! Later, right now I'm sleepy!

Savita: Okay, okay. I didn't wake you up to talk about this. Her parents are coming straight here.

Arjun: And...

Savita: Why don't you pick her up.

I wake up!

Arjun: What! Mom! How can you promise something without telling me first.. I am half asleep!

Savita: I didn't promise. I want you to surprise her. It'll give you a good chance to talk. 

Arjun: Ma! I'm not in the state to drive. I got an off in so long and now I have to drive.

Savita: Arjun, are you refusing me?

Arjun: Ma! That's called blackmailing! Fine, I'll get ready to go. 

Savita: Oh! Uski saheli bhi aayegi shayad. Nakhre mat karna! 

Arjun: Ji Ammi! Jaise apki marzi! (sounding irritated).


(On the Road)

Why does mom always talk about that day. Arohi, Arohi, Arohi! Aur koi topic nahi hai kya? I guess she feels it's my age and she feels its time but then why Arohi. She's only 18 after all! I am talking to her because of mom but it's going to take time for us to come to a decision but no, she tries to stick us together every chance she gets! I guess I should calm down. I mean it's not really Arohi's fault.

I reach the halls and walk in. There are doors you must pass before you go to the hall with rooms. It was locked and can only be opened with an ID card. I saw Arohi walking and I waved at her to get her attention; she ignored me! What the hell! I walk closer and wave harder and called out her name. 


Arjun: Arohi!!

Finally! She opened the door and came to me.

Arohi: Arjun. App yahan? What ...

Arjun: Mom thought it'd be best I got you since she thinks its stupid for your family to drive from Buffalo to Edinboro, back to Buffalo to get to Scarborough, but it's perfectly fine for me to drive past Buffalo to get to Edinboro just to go back again! 

Arohi: Sorry you had to go through the trouble for me (a little offended)


Was I offensive? Wait, I never meant to sound that way. I shake my head. She never spoke to me in that manner before so it was a little amusing. Uske naak mein gussa looks kinda cute. Ugh, why am I thinking like that!


Arjun: No, no. I didn't mean to sound that way. I'm just a bit tired, that's all. Lets go now.

Arohi: Tum araam karlo, phir jayeinge. Tab tak, main ghari mein samaan rakh leti hoon.

Arjun: Jaise tumhari marzi. Thanks for understanding.


I was so thankful she decided this as mom didn't let me sleep properly. I went to her room and as I was unwinding, I started to think. What's up with her? I mean has she given it any thought. Sometimes she calls me app, other times tum. What exactly am I? Wait, what am I thinking? Maybe its the lack of sleep. I went to bed. After a while I got up and got ready to leave. We better leave before it gets late. I don't like to drive at night. 


Arjun: You ready?

Arohi: Yep.

Arjun: Mom said you were bringing a friend...

Arohi; A friend will come but not with us. Actually uske paas ek night class hai so voh greyhound lekar...

Arjun: I see. No problem. Lets go or we'll get late. 


It was a quiet ride when we left till I spoke up.


Arjun: So...

Arohi:hmm...

Arjun: How was school? Exams and all?

Arohi: Not bad. I mean tough but I got through it. Hows med school going?

Arjun: That's good. I start rotation soon. What about you? Kept in touch with family? Hows Little Raj doing? You didn't even get to see him get back from camp. Raj and Billu were really excited yet sad when they got back; sad because they didn't want it to end.  

Arohi: Yeah, Raj told me all about it when I went home. I saw pictures on Billu's Facebook too. 

Arjun: And how are maasi and uncle?

Arohi: They're good...   (Silent)  Arjun, is there something you want to ask?

Arjun: Have you talked to them?

Arohi: Them?

Arjun: Your parents... about what happened since September...

Arohi: (Silent)... No. I don't want to tell mom and dad anything till anything is final. I mean, I'm confused with the status as it is; I don't want to mess with their heads.

Arjun: (smiles) I am glad. The thing is nobody at home knows a thing either. 

Arohi: Maasi ko bhi nahi?

Arjun: Yeah, she doesn't know either. I think she's going to wait till there is an announcement, and if not, then she'll just assume nothing worked out.

Arohi: Haha, just let me know if she brings someone else to the picture then. 

Arjun: Haha, don't worry. Be rest assured, I'm not in a hurry!


And we quietly went on for Scarborough. 

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Posted: 21 July 2011 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
thanks brainy child for having listened to us and given arjun's POV - now we understand that arjun has STILL not started having any feelings for aru - oh, no - i thought with the taj mahal trip and others, he would have started liking her -
anyway, thanks for the update - enjoy ur vacation and give us an update as soon as u come back


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Posted: 21 July 2011 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrshn

gr8! but she addresses him 'tum' at times n other times..she calls him 'aap'...why is that??
hmm...and why are their talks always quite formal??


the talks are formal because though they know each other from so long, they've never been friends and remember her mom brought up her wedding with arjun before and that just made it awkward.. especially now since she feels that she betrayed her parents by almost falling for an american guy instead of indian and her mom's choice can save her...
now she's confused.. is their relationship informal such as friend (TUM) or something more respective or formal (APP)

its confusing but thats my concept/ story.. that an 18 year old has to think about this for a 24 year old guy...    a test about KITNI MOHABBAT HAI (and does age really have an affect..) lol

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