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Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 (Page 30)

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 6:19am | IP Logged
me edited my spot hammie...bear my comments

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
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@ Hammie ''Priya has Landed to meet Major Shaab .

good gawd !!!!!!  heaven help majja Dutts.. ohhh priyaaa ,he'll be singing!
I will like  it better if he dances ...jive Maybe  ...nd I  will do the talking .
Anyways its difficult to make me stop once I start 

Salam Namaste'.. How r u 'I see Major is doing fine ..infact very good , in while he confined to Rascal   '..This is the amazing thing of his personality '.Never say never .  oh yes mard ka baacha hai with Sher ki qualities..grrr.
Yes ! He is a cub .. .Loin king wala cub

But Now ..Now With entry of Ganpat 'I see red .  oye ganapat ne goli khaney hai kya?

Chaleya ... nd then  Dutta will be shot by Naku wala sherni style ...  (with ur eyes , baby ) "U hit my Papa ,  mean boy . 

U know ..its SIL and FIL usually have uniquely funny relationship ''Its becoz both love the same Girl '''..For the FIL  she will always be Daddy's lil girl and the Guy a intruder ''.
no matter how good the guy , he always looked at with raised eyebrows ''.
 
No match for Dutta ki theerchi nazar jo kar de panjer!...
Hai ...Hai maar ja wa gud hay ke 
 

But here '''.the situation is diff '..acc to be FIL '.. The guy is too good to be true ''..so FIL  settling for a non accepted option .

OMG! Love is working its wonders '..Dutta is so scared of losing her '' he so much in love with her '..that  he thinking incase he dies in combat '.what will happen to her , if they r married .  

U fool , Major 'when u loves someone u l.ove everything that comes with person 'or nothing at all ''.that's what naku has done ''.she loves for u r n d what u r '.. DuhD'oh ! This boy .

Naku cries in his amrs ( awe )''.U know however independent a person ''..There will always will someone they turn to when times comes '''its then one understand what the other means to u .

Wow At last the confess '.. I Thought '.Its would be like " Did not  u understand , woman"

aaah lekin mau se phir bhi nehi bola gadha! action...action! ...
He is sticking to his given Name " Gadha" ...
 Arre tu sher hai , par pyar mein Gadha kyu ban janta hai 

Dutta ''why do not u tell AS '.tell her . ( slams my headD'oh ) '''Listen to ur friend, Smart boy '. "shai bol raha hai .su le tu"..

Nd Harsh , boy '.u r no match for Major Shaab '.so run till u have time ''.  pata nehi shall i bring a twist!

Nahi ..he is no match . 

To make Major D jealous , his own imaginative mind is enough 

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Btw ..Hammie ...R u a Derawali ... yesss Punjab! 

Arre waah ..Punjabi ...

thanks for making me rock with laughter  .ROFL  with the feed back priyaaa 
Thank u , Thank u ...Kya karu bena bole , I cannot do 
Keep on writing 

 

 



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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Hamiee...   *hug* 
Me un res my spot pg 28 *wink*
Sorry for taking so long *kan pkad kar* 
Got held up with last min.com jobs hehehe
Hope I don't bored u ..:D

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 9:09am | IP Logged

Thanks very much, Majja  Dutts luvves long feed backs, opps feed up of gajar ka halwas !

@ SHIL: Thanks for your promised feed back...we'll umm.. I may consider your idea ... waise don't you warm to the romancing the stud is already carrying out? ,personally I thought he is preeettty innovative in the use of Rascal... lap shap... closey shlosey  innocent lardki ke saath! Bhai tu shaadi hi kar le gadhay jab itne chaskay ker ne hain! ...but no assing around he is ! xxxhammie

@krishaa :   massie jeee   glad you liked the up date  ,   more to come  jani ! xxhammie

@ azm :   oh yesss a long chaska feed back from you!  ..loved reading it ..! haila reminded you of Mishal    bestest compliment  oye hoi!    Main maar giya  !  by the way  who were you chatting up on the phone ??  nooo there were no typos it was brill the feed back.. huggy kissey Xxx hammie

@ushankitv:  me too , personally liked his convo with his mother .. well he is a mamma's boy and he does want a tad mothering from Nakku ,methinks she's caught on to that! , pleased you like the tasha scenes ,who does'nt me included xxhammie

@ prncz:  oye rajaaah! Loved you long comment please make them even longer ,should'ent be such a chore  to write about the eternal gadha...he hawww! Glad you responded well to the dose of romance .oh he's always ready to hit it off with Nakku! Nakey aur pooche pooche!   luv hammie

@  warda:  thank you mate for a fantastic loon feed back..,have to admit Isoo ... yes Nakku is a lass who knows what she wants for sure... and she's blessed that her dad listened to her... but itni smart bhi nehi hai ...as the Sher took her for a ride ...well for his part of mentoring her aand loving her ...thats Major Dutta for you!.. yes Baji innocent ,funny but truthful...I wish THE GADHA WOULD LISTEN TO THE COURT JESTER!  SO HAPPY YOU LIKED THE BONding SCENES BETWEEN Dutta and Nakku ..the last scene was a reaction to the scene, well my knee jerk reaction to a recent episode of LCL where dicckie put a gajra in the nutter's hair ... I did'nt like to include the gajra in my writing... so I USED THE SONG but deleted the gujra verse ..yuk found it too revolting ..so did it my way! Xx hammie

@ rrs1391: thanks for reading and your comment xxhammie

@ mnx: dead right mate for him and her Duty comes first ..that's what he liked about her ,apart from her stunning looks! Glad you enjoyed...xxxhammie

@ nakusha: thank's very much for your comments about my creativity... aur Nakku as usual tujhe jaldi he hote hai... yaar saber ka Sher meetha hota hai! Haaa ha!  Xx hammie

@eternityluv: oh thank you for your lovely comment ,,,yep sahu tu ha hamara Gadha ,but smart ass ..look at all the fun he's having with her exploiting,and exploring  every avenue of Nakku's emotions!  Nooo don,t worry he'll  never  goli se urdhaa her ... he wants to keep her captive yaar! Itna  gadha  nehi  haiii ye Sher... paltu bena ka rekhey gaaa!  xxxhammie

 

@ scorpio:  priyaaa .tera comment ka jawab I gave straight away ..it was rocking and  hilarious sooo I haaad answer straight away...even now when aI go through it never stops me from rolf! Xx hammie

@ suhana:  thanks for your lovely feedback, despite the fact that you very busy! But yesss the truth is I was eagerly awaiting your response... oye tu abhi se hai roohne dhoone shru hogey hai nakku going to Dera...aaj hi  thorhee ja rahi hai... have a brain woman!  wo pagal dil ka mera sher use itni jaldi  nehi choorey gaa... he wants a bit more fun... hainaa? , chaal ab wipe your tears aur drama band kar! Xx hammie

@brvr:  thank for your fab compliment  for my writing ,much  encouraged ... entertained   well makes me feel like a film starrr!  But many steps behind the real star of the story Mishal Raheja... the inspiration ! Xxxhammie

@ daya:  listen thank you for always being the first to feed back!  Always look forward to coming back to your "reserved" .for its always lovely and lengthy and verrry rewarding emotionally... well you know  dil ka mamalla hai... dil tu baacha hai LION CUB KI THERAN! .. NO SERIOUSLY I am especially aware that for this feedback on chap.9 ..you had to update WOL ..WELL  I am glad you did as I, like many others   were waiting for you to get a move on!!  Anyway glad you enjoyed the tasha bits especially the last bit.. haan acha scene tha... mujhe  pata tha he won't say anything with that sexy gob of his!  Bas it's his key feature the eyes that will be centre point ... but then , goes without saying that as you have mentioned " all from the heart"! xx hammie

 

Lots of love and many thanks for your time and feed backs! Hamlet.4.6.11

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@  warda:  thank you mate for a fantastic loon feed back..,have to admit Isoo ... yes Nakku is a lass who knows what she wants for sure... and she's blessed that her dad listened to her... but itni smart bhi nehi hai ...as the Sher took her for a ride ...well for his part of mentoring her aand loving her ...thats Major Dutta for you!.. yes Baji innocent ,funny but truthful...I wish THE GADHA WOULD LISTEN TO THE COURT JESTER!  SO HAPPY YOU LIKED THE BONding SCENES BETWEEN Dutta and Nakku ..the last scene was a reaction to the scene, well my knee jerk reaction to a recent episode of LCL where dicckie put a gajra in the nutter's hair ... I did'nt like to include the gajra in my writing... so I USED THE SONG but deleted the gujra verse ..yuk found it too revolting ..so did it my way! Xx hammie

aww...hammie you taking revenge of that gajra scene from LCLLOL
just loved your reaction...do write one for that NRD's dream sequence as well ...which i guess happened a few episodes back...Dead
waiting for your reaction on that scene too Smile


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"he is actually protectign nakku frm the life he leads ,,and the sepration and loss it brings ..cho chweet hope they get to  talk abt this and nakku give him a mindfull LOL"
 
writers commt plzWink

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@ raj...
"he is actually protectign nakku frm the life he leads ,,and the sepration and loss it brings ..cho chweet hope they get to  talk abt this and nakku give him a mindfull LOL"
 
writers commt plzWink
 
weeel yes because he knows from his Aye's example..his own experience of missing a father figure in the later stages of life!
how ever.. verrry stupid of him also for does this suffice then that people in high risk jobs don't start a family? so unrealstic take major shahib!
the other reason is the hell bent believe that Dutta does not belong to "one" person/s but to the whole "nation"...  I guess that is a frame of mind he prefers to keep... saves him also from seeing his loved ones in emotional trauma ,in fact puts him on a higher level..that of martyrdom... to die for "king and country" now prncz what could be higher than that!
but yesss.. maybe they should talk...and she would say to him the thing,s I have mentioned... how ever,  the asss will probably stick to his own grounds and carry onnn the way he is...
ye phir he likes prowling the jungle on his own without having to worry about a Sherni and their little cubs!!!
thanksss for your interesting comments my prince! hamlet bows before you m'y lord!
 




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hey hemlet don't try to kill my dutta don't ever whenever you end this story make happy ending when i read the name of story i thought you are in the list of those writers who kill hero or heroine in end make one alone for life so don't ever try that end but when i read it its lovely and think you carry on like this 

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