Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 116

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsem update as usual nakku is gettin ready for duttanakku came to his room and dutta said uske bure haal karne aayi hai haye wo to honge hinakku want hair and our dutta  said ugne main time lagega love this sceneoye baaji can leave dutta for film offer as emotional and dutta consoled herdutta want sandwiches

as asked how nakku going and dutta going to take her with him and as ask how dutta finally baaji manage her and poor dutta embarrased  roops want nakku to wear jeans but our dutta stopped her as ask for taking shawl and roops said dadi banana hai dutta think she has rooh of dadi now time for going dutta think she kill him from her lookand decide not to take her with him and roops baji gave her helmet and our dutta enquiring about helmet dutta finally manage to make her wear helmetlove bike ride and tasha conversation now  tasha again parted

tamanna ,you are getting amazing with your comments,so amusingly approriate,very enjoyable ,other readers have also commented on your exclusive style of expression ,and hammie most certainly derives a lot of belly wobbling laughs ...I guess tu meri entertainment ka bhi khayal rekhti hai...😃 so keep them coming lady...aane de ...thanks very much ,with love hammie..

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Originally posted by: Warda.

mine 😊

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hellooo kurriye...hammie smilng  at your comment...hummhh .

Hammie🤗 ...great to see second update in a row...and  the thread moving :)

Loved the update a lot though tasha parting for some time again but thats the call of their duty...it has to happen...

loved their interaction in duttas room...aww naku still moaning about stubble...so am I ..hehe...still the bluish layer...means have to wait for one more week ...

the chunni back in action...and dutta interprting nakus thoughts there was *blushing*

hain ?tu kyon blush ker rehi hai? hota ,hota, jab these to meet...naa , not Dutta and Naku but Dutta and chunni...it dances to his tunes...

the breakfast table scene was another delight to see all the family together...baaji chearing the envirnment with his nautanki...

and here comes the man most in demand...i always love it when ever dutta makes an entry is welcomed by so many awaiting eyes...lucky son of a gun...rightly said :) well every one knows he likes to make an entry...he knows he's most wanted!

oh how innocently naku said saab poha khao ge s if she doesnt know what does he want there..hehehis much awaited treat His Sandwiches were there what else he wanted for...loved the teasing part a lot by rest of the gang... Naku the dumbo ,jan ke kerti hai,she too seeks his attention , reaction ,that's why loves to land in his way in whatever form,tease or not!

Bike ride was really enjoyeable and must be a different experience for these two as well...aww they must be missing their eye locks

and thank God baaji and roops were their to solve that helmet issue or otherwise i had all doubts that this man of principles will leave her there

btw imagining naku with chunni covered on her head and wearing helmet was cute and funny...i loved it when dutta said coming like a bride...lol

yes there was a reader Nakusha ,who expressed a bike ride expression between the two ,so that's why I attempted it, unfortunately ad to follow safety rules hence even er helmeted,but glad you liked her head covered with laalchunni ,i could picture her...in my mind she looked bahut stunning ,like how dulhan cover her head... 

Jungle main mangle was one pleasent surprise...was not at all expecting this to happen...but as much time tasha get to spent together is a treat for the readers...so bless you for this :)

loved his concern regarding her discomfort in jungle...hai *wink*

making a bonfire their and eating apples brought back the good old memories of vinatge LTL...

seems like it was yet another baajis nautanki for not arrainging the mechanic..*lyks*

it was great fun to read their small jungle adventure blended with their love :)

yes ,where ever possible have to tap the real source of my FF's inspiration...LTL1..   

Tasha shopping together was the cutest moment of all...and i love his caring side a lot...and how he is concerned regarding his responsibilty towards her and she

too accepting as her Haq*bless them* ...glad you took note of a day to day realistic scene of shopping ,also covers his concern for her welfare... oye kurriye liked how you used the word Haq..yes jab pyar ho tu haq tu bun jata hai between two people ,that which goes without saying..and where better seen than between our tasha..

Sigh ...their parting moments are always painful...but always end on a note which makes their relation even more strong... yes parting for lovers will always be sweet sorrow...

and the precap...oh how much i was missing this name... Hammie you know that *winks*

good..you know how I feel about her ..writers choice...

Thanks Pal for giving us such a treat...and updates coming regularly on fridays makes me smile:) eagerly waiting for the coming friday...Stay Blessed Always...Happy to see you back in action each week...See you !!!  listen baaby thanks for your love and tremendous  encouragement to continue with his FF, need your support...   heyyy a pic..haaa haa ,hammie attention seeking..woh tu meri bemaari hai you know that...thanks for your warm and lovely comment...ever yours .hammie

 

Originally posted by: daya0628

Hi Hammie!
I'm here to read & comment on your Chapter 36...so let me get right to it ...

undoubtedly ,you have to be my most avid reader, on the ball to comment with delay, thujhe pata hai,it means a lot to me ...you must be thinking how come hammie is being so civil...yeah your'e right aisa tera saath bahut kum hota hai , when  me ?hain?being polite to you?.oye  bimboo dahmak theekh hai tera? 

so this chapter was all about the two lovers...Dutta and Naku...from the very beginning she began dressing not just to her own liking but for the man that matters to her most...and of course like a wife she bring him his morning tea...and what better face to see than hers for our Major first thing in the morning. Their little moment was nice, with them talking about his current look ...and of course his ahem relationship with that chunni of hers...yup she'll need help after the marriage...this man is already not wanting to keep such distance from her..after marriage haaa... yes it was all about them,pata hai pappy.may be this should have been the valentine day's episode?..but for them two given any opportunity together har din unke liya valentine's day hai..haina...haan chunni has to come back in his life..to keep him in line..

oh do I even have to say the highlight of the breakfast scene...very important cast of this FF...or LTL :P made its entry with lots of them singing ...SANDWICHES! ...kya entry tha lol ...of course he was awaiting that only...
yep home coing ho and no sandwiches coverage ,ye tu ho nehi sakta..but where there is Baji ,there is nostalgia
hmm loved how when AS asks about arrangements for Naku's return he so casually said with me of course...haahaa omg her helmet...u know i too am not fond of helmets...used to avoid wearing them...so like she said attention was on her...but what bothered our dear sher more was her distance...so close yet so far...so of course does what most typically is done by the HERO on a bike...swerve...jerk ...blah blah to get the girl closer ...and each one was just not good enough for him ...hmm until she hugged him with her little hands ...pressed against his back...haayee...
so you felt like Naku😆,dream on baaby...and that to behind the lion...and gana and all the tricks of the biker trade to get a hick close to them ..haaa ha was thinking .what on earth am I writing...thura cheesy tha...come on...it was..
omg least expected was the bike breakdown and jungle wala scene...i enjoyed it...u know what though haa when baaji returned his call saying no mechanics ...i wanted to yell liar haha...can so see him pull a stunt like that too...let his bhao enjoy :P ...hmm quite enjoyed their moments together here...how well the complete each other. Actions were speaking louder in this scene...from just the fire setting up, his concern for her hand...then sitting at a distance and then when talking about his love for her and moving closer to her for comfort...that was more what I liked ...and then came their convos about being together...and of course as always Naku gives her bit...
yes even the best of bikes can break down if not given a proper service ..😉 HERE  getting vehicles service is the talk of town since..dec .onwards... .besides..felt like reliving the JMM scenes ,bas dil ke sun le main ne...
hmmm so now they are near her destination ...cute little shopping bit ...such a couple they are ...truly...but best part of the scene was the end...goodbyes are always tough...and loved how this time as opposed to teasing about her crying he embraced her and told her how she could make his heart heavy seeing such a sight when leaving...its true he is always the one to leave...but it kills the both of them the same...and his take on the stronger one was brilliant touch...hmmm so again they go their own ways but hopefully each day gets them closer to the next time they will meet! ...
yes the good bye ws a pretty predictable scene ,any one could see it coming..tried to make it a tiny bit different in what she says...he walks away ,she's left behind..
Hammie! wonderful UD ...loved it all ...woke up to a phone call...and thought lets check out forum on phone...and read it all in one go :P thank you for such an pleasurable read...take care...lots of love ...see you !

thanks papayaa,Sharmilee, phisti, dodo ,bimboo ,and the rest ,thanks for your lovely comments...my enjoyable read...yours hammie...oye see you in pms ...