This content was originally posted by: brvrHammie baby, check out me n my comments in the res.. placeπ
This content was originally posted by: brvrHammie baby, check out me n my comments in the res.. placeπ
Thanx to ur brilliant writing that push me to write what i write n thats me direct dilse! Glad u enjoy it, that's the motto to 'return the favour'.This content was originally posted by: Hamlet53
yesss saw it split myself ...honestly I know every time I see it I am forever going to be floored ! mercy woman! mercy!.maar dein gi kya ap? ππππ brvv jee
Nice updateπ Harshad finally got what he deserved. The court procedure was explained well. Naku will be rewarded in future for her courageous stand. Waiting for the next part, thanks for the PMπ
This content was originally posted by: brvr'A handful of soldiers always better than a mouthful of arguments'
now I had to CHECK where this quote from ..but never got down to it...but great to hear from you ma'am.. hey you made it to number 1 spot! πNaku tensely waitin for the day to unfold. Elaborate arrangements in place for the hearing n prompt action initiated to get to the root of the fraud. Harshad does what he is good at, threatening naku once more just b4 the proceedings, loser! ππΌMajor arrives in style n naku's palpitation soars. God! he has such an influence on her. Both behaving like lovestruck teenagers stealin glances. Even in the tense atmosphere, major sees the opportunity to check out her anatomy, he is finished! πamorous thoughts by the man in the uniform Really! but I do detect in this remark especially the checking out bit that ma'am's fancy has been tickled pink...haaa..you see me and Major smart #ss!Wondering what was that major showed to the MS on his mobile, was it the mms of naku with harshad? BTW, What is it with the description of naku, 'excessively wholesome feminine frame' Objection My Lord! this unwarranted description of key witness has no bearing with the case. Adjectives like rounded hipsπ€£, mottoo, etc.. offensive n indicative of a sexist attitude.π...highlight of your comment!π...haan tu , Major ke nazar se dekho Naku ko...that's how she appears ,oh come on he's heard it before , for now he needs to check her out well and proper ..besides ..workings of a one track mind..brvv..one track mind ...but have a heart .."she's the one"..the only one ..so he's allowed below the belt obs.πWith the hearing underway n all the parties giving their version, it was time for a tea break but for major it was time for some romantic break. Ouch! he even pinched her, munno not behaving at all. Thank Goodness! Lauren stuck to her job.
the grope for her flesh between his finger thumb,π was yet another expression of how his wants are getting the better of him!He is a man of action n he believes in makin the most of every moment. Chomping the apple along with bonding n cuddling his lady love. Achaa bachoo! its the fear of AS that's stopping him?π Nostalgic moments, LTL revisited when the two sat under the tree n he chiding her for not taking the first bite of the apple. once a while dil chata hai past mein janna ko...do you know, I have never to this to this day, watched any past episodes of LTL1...basically I cannot handle them ..have a "sick at heart "feeling ,is leya I spare my self the anxiety!! bas memory joggle I only do..if I need to!
The verdict's out n harshad's shown the walking papers. He's reached breaking point, but major's alertness saved the day. ... the racket has been dented... so the survelliance paid off !
Its over n out for harshad, he got a taste of the fauji fury n major's secret wish too fulfilled. The final dramatic turn of events was more of a bollywood climax with the dialogues, kutte, kamine, khoon peejaonga, missed 'maa kasam' with Dharmendar's nasal accent.π haaa πloved this ,and traumatized back side, but you know that ..you targetted my hind with his one didn't you...owwwhh maaa kasam haaa..na man AS ke kasam nehgi lega probably forgot!!
Naku begging mercy for harshad was very touching n she proved again what a pure soul she is, thinkin of his aged parents n assuring him. She deserves every accolade that comes her way, major is sure proud of his choice. 'to forgive is to set the prisoner free n discover that the prisioner was you' . The judaai scene as ever tugs at ur heart, feel for them, sigh!π
hummh pity I have to keep to her originality of character ,otherwise..she'll rip him... nice line...kya you too want them married brvv?..how badly?...shall I make up a toofani raat...woh dono stranded in the middle of nowhere aur diya blows out and viola!...the morning after...he finds the nearest...holy ground and marries her ???..karon aise? you like it? hammie do it for brvv? bol chup kyon hai?πSo we r back with the OUTs, hope we go beyond kh kh khan [frm the epiglotis] nd her ghar ka khana. Ofcourse its hammie's prerogative n 'beggars cant be choosers',π€ carry on dear. Me as ever will wait eagerly for the next.haaa πππ..hamazzzing yaar too good! wicked!Be well, do good work, and keep in touch! πlisten boootiful...thank you for your comment ..pata hai it's like a verdict..like ON..YE OFF OR the UD...so please keep them coming..intezaaar retha hai ap ka ...with much love .xxhammie
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Chapter 31: "double, double toil and trouble"...
oye daya... papayaaa..double trouble...kya mumbo jumbo ker rehe hai tu ...ghup! ek dum ghup!
sadly yes it me again! Stop making a face...I will be gone before you know it..since you mentioned me faffing about ...and taking up ur time me decided to keep it to the point but even then will come out long i know π
ohhh bola na chup ker ..cut the chase yes!get to the point!
So all are ready for the hearing, harshad's evil doings...his message to Naku who is being the lioness that she is ...not stepping back ...but ready to fight head strong...bring it on! I knew you would like the super woman bit! tera type ke hai..larakoo
And now the sher has arrived as well...kya entry tha :P
looks to me tu ready hai us per pounce kerne ke lya...haat haat ..hor ! hor!
Major cussing Harshad: 'Squirm you wriggly worm" π€£
hammie happy you rolling about sharmilee..sight for sore eyes..π
Oh my gosh ...this Major is violent...kick all out and plant a hard one seeing her feminine frame :P he is like full and full feasting on her...and i doubt its really quenching the thirst...in fact I would say its increasing it :P
oye bahut open hote ja rehe hai apne remarks mein ..what are you on?tera kuch kerna pare ka , sort you out in pms...
Well well well ...looks like Harshad is going down down down
crime and punishment!!
Lauren has said correctly...a bunch of ninnies these two are ...
Like how you had him almost so lovestruck that he is forgetting he is representing army LOL ready to take a spin with her...but of course she is on top if these things...informing him they cannot but the intelligent one was sure to give an alternative :P yes he does seem to go a bit ga ga over her..in stolen situations ..see he missed all this teenage ,dating, girls ...bonding in life ..so he is catching up..a bit late in life though ,he's nearly 30 ,but bless him..
π€£ mention of AS in middle of their moment HAHA wow wat a pop for that bubble
aur kya keha gadha tu hai na after all... but some times ,methinks he puts it on..we all know what he weally weally! wants don't we?
Awww Major trying hard not to sin ... my poor baby...got to the wrapper and couldn't unwrap haaa sucker ! they are so adorable together...
he would like the sweetie ..but it's not...possible ..he's on a diet!π
and omg the tree...him sitting against tree, she in saree beside ...he brought apples...both ate haaye ltl1 memories...*sigh* ...miss them so much ...thank you for a wonderful scene..loved it...
thank you daya ..for leaving me alone ...πso I could penn it down...no really saach mein..for keeping your messaging in checkπ...I can feel your anger building..bet you any money ...ab tu tu mujhe se kab baat nehi kera gi...hummh... naa weally like having a natter with you papayaa!
Harshad ...hmm i have nothing more to say then the fact that he's caught red handed and now will be dealt with π
doomed man..beechara...
Naku praised...and put forward for possible promotion and award as well ...
hmm well deserved ...well ,her career looks promising..main thing integrity hai us mein..
aha our sher's got this yo...he will take care of this Harshad who thinks he can flee ...in his dreams maybe...if he isn't haunted by all that has happened... loved the action ...and I know u love action ...u must've enjoyed writing this ...knee thrust haaye me all eyes watching such an wonderful fight...I don't know why harshad is even trying lol look at our lion attack :) beat him to pulp please ...beat him black and white and all colors π Major is taking his anger out now and I'm loving it! πyess daya ,and raju knows this as well ke personally I enjoy seeing action,but writing about it was a bit of a chore, you know moves...may be I should have watched a recent boxing match of Amir Khan..to find inspiration..their are people in my family who enjoy blood sport!
oh what a sudden change the fear of death beings forth...harshad asked for forgiveness...hmmph...I guess that is every human's fear...
aagai the tears π ...time of separation and they come like a river ...well well I guess this line suits them this time "hum hai rahi pyaar ke...phir milenge chalte chalte'or duty comes first..so first things first!
great update ...love it to the core..to bits...as always ...
thank you for a wonderful read ...
chal now my turn to say ...phir milenge chalte chaltelisten Daya thanks for reading my FF ,despite the fact that you are busy in other vital things..you take care.xxhammie
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