Noreen, i think its a japanese game show. I watched it ardently for quiet sometime, it was fun thou'. Hope u didnt mind me jumping in here😉Originally posted by: noreenTakeshi's castle came on a while back on the uk sky channel 111. i think it is on youtube if you are interested to take a peek it is a chinese based gameshow and is fun🤣,
Ah! im here atlast.. BRVVV you made it nearly to the winning post..chaal koi nehi mera dil mein you'll be number in one of the chambers ..pure dil mein nehi😆
The celeberated couple have turned narcissistic, 😃the lady describing her mettle then her beauty nd the man admiring himself in the mirror nd mighty pleased.., atleast with major it came as no surprise but naku too? haaa ..come onnn he's rubbing off on her ,I mean his attitude ...oh come on ,she was checking herself out with his eyes,ise kethe hain vicarious pleeasure if I may add with bold subtlety 😆
Eversince khan has been to PW she's taken herself as family of major n takin liberties to feed to serve to question, n above all stalking the man to no end. oye leave her alone ,itni seless or innocent hai..dekhna nehi apne guru ka leya jaan bhi dena ko tayeer hai ...i mean jaan hathele per la ga uske samana ghumte hai .some clout she has hai hai...
Major sweating at the news of military hospital, anxious until he heard harshad's name. His patience with the creep paying off nd this time he has strong reason to act. Parekh's not agreeing with major on khan's assessment report haha! c'mon Brigadier, dont tell me u too lattoo for the demure, beautiful face or ur ok with half baked people to be a part of the elite anti terror squad? anyway, hammie has company. haaa you crack me uppp! stoppp I am on the floor ..hai ! hai !mera butt is a goner...kya brvv ..reading your comment should have certified injurious to health!!
New kids in the block, dimpled pappu n macho munno, superb labelling loved it 😆😆 this is side splitting stuff🤣. Roops n Baji one team that can put to shame any accomplished stand up comedians. The flirting of the two is filmy but unique, can they ever behave sobre err normal? here I thought this could apply to duts and baj alsoo The wholesome threesome naku dutta baji agree to let the law take its own course with harshad.
Naku is our 21st century jhansi ki rani, undoubtedly👍🏼. who could risk their life by talking the harshad saga with major nd still be breathing? true true 😆 bahut dum hai chookri mein..pyar na ommmph diya hai ,fearless she is!
Must say it was adorable to see how naku buttered her saab b4 throwing the dhamaka, she missed his reaction by leaving out 'munno'. She also has a routine when she has to speak to her saab weeping, whining, eventually winning...hehe! yesss she always does the roondhu ,mus ,mus, surrh ,surrh kerta hai dutta should give her a chamaat ,then she'll have good enough reason to have a good cry ..ok ok nehinn..he 's not a woman basher ,,only kills them up front!
So the battle lines are drawn n we r waitin for the face off with the idiot. The precap is droolworthy nd its worth the wait😍. nearly ready...not fini yet but wiil do it after i finsh annotations So long n thanx for the entertainment, entertainment, entertainment😉 oye Pakistan mein ban ho giya hai ,incidentaly hammie ke current fall in love birdie is Diya B hai 😉😉😉[joking] Hammie babe!!!
"The most important of life's battles is the one we fight daily in the silent chambers of the soul" David O. McKay..read Daya's siggy line ...found it reflective... brvv thank you for your 😆😆 lovely comment...xxhammie
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Edited... hummmh ..sharmilee you again..?
Hammie ...mein aagai...finally ready to comment ...hmmm chal let me get started...
Painful Rapture: chapter 3: "a hit, a very palpable hit" I sure hope it is for that harshad about ruddy time too! ..tu bahut faffing about kerti hai ab tu dekh how long i take to comment on yours ! grrrhhh:P
So I told you na that this UD is a fav... from the very beginning to the end the flow, the way you have looped it all together, how true to character each person remained and of course Baaji's presenc, on the whole the entire UD was simply well written with such great flow...me was soo glued to it...so glued that normally I write my comments as I go but this one I just read read and read lol...
yeah thought so you would like it LTL i can taste tha I loved Naku's monologue here where she basically describes herself but she knows her own positive points that Dutta likes in her ...which was good :) and then she made the right decision, as I hoped, to not give a heed to the blackmail and expose Harshad for his wrong doings...regardless of how long she's known him, the so called friendship shared...hmm...but Naku will give evidence no matter what may come of it and for that am quite proud of her...standing on side of justice :)yep true say...lioness hai lardki and intelligent she knows what turns on Dutta and what he likes about her ...understading hai dunno ki ..that is their loveOH there is the first bathroom scene...u know sach mein it didn't even register as I was so into where the UD was going haha ...I am going through it again ...and now I see...naked torso and his black shiny curly hairs...and damn hot biceps triceps...and me now only reading that part ...omg and his stubble he shaved and although looked 'unapproachable' to him I think everyone ready to approach him haha ...and his shower ...haaye...what a scene me all dazed *blushes*
etu brutus! hain ..you two ...tu to sharmilee hai ..you were not meant to read these parts ...you bad girl ,you needed parental guidance on the nahane wale scenes .. go and rinse your eyes with salt water ...and purge your imagination hummmhh,So he is going to take on this issue at Dera hospital...i am quite excited about that :) I hope he gives Harshad what the guy rightfully deserves for his disgusting mind...I liked how when Parekh mention problem there his mind automatically wanted to say Naku but he maintained the formality...another point...I loved that in this conversation..they both did not assume the truth...rather was meant to be investigated in military style...hmm Khan's assessment he said no ...because of her fainting...but glad parekh has put it on hold for now..I think she will be great in military :P thank you at least you think so like hammie ..but Dutta kiya kera ga only he knows...ediutt
Oh this Khan sometimes behaves completely like a grade school kids...teacher ke peeche peeche trying to get answers...lol...yeh bhi na...he was quite cold in mannerism with her though... yesss he dosen't want scandal also ,really not on for students to have love with their teachers ..unprofessional
HAaaye Baaaji ...dhincak haha ...omg nice to see him in action ;) him and roops are so cute...BAAJI RAO my my what a six pack haha 😆 yeah I was missing him had to think of of some utter nonsence.. but had to think and then i said to my self why am I thinking?? jus write ..baji bindass hai
I loved his convo with Naku. It really showed their relationship ...and his reactions to every part of the convo ...was so much Baaji and it so showed what she meant to him as well...and then his conversation with Dutta...was fun...how casual they are..and how much comfort btwn them...great friends they are...Baaji all fired up ...I should give him my bat ...aww and he's not allowed a piece of the action...sadly..but rightly ...
I too loved writing tis portion..got emotional ..bahut yaad aye LTL1 days ki ...felt sick in the heart.aur kya kahoon Daya you know what a sucker hammie iss...Then the entire convo btwn D and N had to be the best part...u even created small drama with just her getting out the information she had. And him in gym punching away while she speaking with his 'hmmm' lol liked that touch...his style...everything there...loved the whole of it...the entire convo from beginning to end and what he tells her and how he supports...gotta love this major ... GOOD you love him and his humm's , thought of his one ..wasn't sure if his humm would go down well... but yes there was a reason and you picked on it...Hmm so here was the next shower scene...i knew this one existed but I think your lines took dominance over the shower...his anger filled lines and then on the Harley woot LTL1 style mein lines ...HHHARSHAD MEIN TERI UNTHERI NIKAL DOON GAAA! ARRRH!! 😍and his anger ready to squish that harshad to pulp...hmm...me all grinning...can't wait for next UD...eagerly waiting to see how u pan it all out ... mujhe samjhe nehi atti din be din teri violent streak increase hota ja rehi hai ..is it my company?? listen you better calm down ...its either you ar me ...and as far as Iam concerned it had better be me!!got that ! ?
Good and Naku has approached Ms.Tendulkar with the information...now for the hearing...will wait to see what happens...will have to because I don't have choice-uu :P wait ker like every one else tu special nehi hai ke thuje sneak preview de doon.. me give you buzzz off!
Hmmm so hammie teri sharmilee has quite enjoyed and loved this UD...one of my favsoye lardki all my UD's should be your fav's got it ...ALLL iof them ...every one on themm!band ker okayyy..jus saw the next bit you wrote chaal me deraged now......i love them all but this one extra loved ...great job...great writer you are...loved it to the core...beginning to end ...thank you for such a wonderful read...love you lots...take care...phir milenge chalte chalte me a wonderful writer now that is what I adore earing ,again and again and again...mujhe kio shyness ka problem hai you get what you read Daya ...but you know that don't you sharmilee... thanks for your lovely commentxxhammie see you in ms ...nooo leeveave me alone today ..otherwise you'll be the loser...no UD... XHAMMIE
Originally posted by: ivy_11Thanks for the pm and update, Hammie🤗. hellooo my sweeto ivy..
The slime ball Harshad😡 needs to be beaten up by Dutta and Baaji.
hain violent streakk...oye calm down..think of the peace within you
I am glad that Naku had the sense to confide in Dutta. Hope she comes out clean soon and that Harshad is nailed forever.
wait and see in the next episode ...if only life was so easy peasy...
Having Dutta under the shower once is enough to send the Diwanees pulse rate soaring high😳. Iss episode mein to do-do baar nahaya. OMG I am dead and gone to heaven😆. As usual, very well written with detailed and easy to visualize description😊 I have to say this is the highlight of your comment it rocked ,shook and finished me offf... rockinggg wicked !
What's wrong with Khan😕. Why does she think that she is the most important thing in Major Dutta's life. Height of presumptuousness As though DSP cannot meet with Brig Parekh to discuss other matters.
one of these days ...he is bound to roar at her ..but ye na hoi ke she falls in love with his roaring side ...bare muskhil hai..ye lardki tu ...mar giya hai like all of us on our Mishal/majorrthanks for your mind blowing comments ivy ..next UD i the making...xxxhammie
Originally posted by: Hamlet53now recap ..major enterign the hospital proceddign officall with 2 army men wow wht a scene ,,,,friday kab ayega 😍 trying to finito it ..woh teri Daya kam nehi kerne deti keep her with you all day today pleaze rajooo.. thuje meri damaak ke kasam...dehi ho giya hai...shhh use na betian ..bat le ke mera peeeche baga gi .. honestly ..khader jaon mein ...hide me rajooo...xxxhammie ...thank you ...ssh i can hear her creep on the forummm...
Originally posted by: AzMishyThanks a lot for the lovely update! full of drool worthy scenes *blushing*
good god! kiya reaction...super hit formula ..dutta having a all over wash..kiya yaar .censor board cut detain hain nehi tu ...yes dot dot dot 😆😆I wonder any one who read the WU is on earth ;) all must be in hevan! Rofl so I take it you took the complete scene ,figuratively... imagination mein koi problem nehi teri ..tu ase kar dream on!!Not one but 2 shower senes one hot n one cold n again him in full mlitary atier ready to swoon us n black west n gym scene ,smoking hot n finally on the bike! ouufff mardalengi kya :pmardela ...you know in uk especially at this festive season ... they show madhuri's dance especially where she is sitting and rubs the floor and wobbles her shoulder singing mar dala ..then the add stops and the words come on on screen DONT DRINK AND DRIVE!!😆Atlast nakku got guts to tell him n the hmmm session... I could feel the blood boiling insIde :/But finally his reply to her made me all hayeee...Kya yarr... Tum ithna genrous...:/ some thing sure is up on ur top compartment :pyeah elusive hai ..sab kuch thure he bataai ga ...Well Harshad's ulti ginthi shuru huwa... me waiting do dinchak with baaji hahahaPoor chap... he too want to join the dishum dushum :(yeahhh nice one ..baji nautanki baaz hai ekdum..What with this khan han, n she is upto x<... lol again n ear full from major saab hahahaye use pyarr hai ! use tu pyar hai ...Very well writen, enjoyed it to totally...N tis time didn't bunk ha :p thank you my azy...means so much to me tera commentIntersting n swoon thud pre cap *ahem*Now counting days for next friday :/ hhahaThanks for the pm n updateLovethank you azhy for your make me hapy comments ...kissey to te baache winter vacs coming have fun..take him to see harry potter unless you have done that already ...with much love xxhammieAzy :)
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