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tamannA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

👏awsem update amazing love it nakku decide to tell about haeshad to dutta good decision and and leauren tell everuthing to brig and now dutta is handling everything wow harshad ki to bajegi bend and dutta roared at khan wow and baaji roops oops kya dialogues maare hai ltl 1 ki yaad aa gayi baaji ke dialogue sun kar and baaji nakku conversation mast thi so baaji wants to beat harshad ab agar baaji maarega to dutta kya karega and nakku stops baaji for telling about pictures to dutta ek baat batao hammie baadaam khane se koi edra hota hai maine pahali baar suna hai and finally nakku call dutta but first call is in cry session and second call is conversation so nakku finally tells whole truth to dutta and dutta hmmm but i like his understanding and the advise and support he give to nakku i love that and now my faviorate scene in ltl and favourite dialoge in ff is
HHHARSHAD MEIN TERI UNTHERI NIKAL DOON GAAA! ARRRH!!mast update ltl yaad dila diya and finally nakku ne evidence de diye and precap is of dutta ab harshad ki band bajane waali hai and mera computer bhi theek ho gaya fully now i can comment whole heartedly 😃
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-bharti-

@-bharti-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

Ah! im here atlast..

The celeberated couple have turned narcissistic, 😃the lady describing her mettle then her beauty nd the man admiring himself in the mirror nd mighty pleased.., atleast with major it came as no surprise but naku too? Allow us to do the honours guys😉 what with two shower scenes in one UD, [rubbing eyes] or this must be our christmas gift from our Santa in london.

Eversince khan has been to PW she's taken herself as family of major n takin liberties to feed to serve to question, n above all stalking the man to no end. She is testing major's patience n im wonderin if dutta is bein slightly lenient at the transgression, as the earlier warnin has not worked. I hav to admit thou im wasting my energy with this girl, she doesnt surprise me anymore. As long as major knows his boundaries, guess we r fine.

Major sweating at the news of military hospital, anxious until he heard harshad's name. His patience with the creep paying off nd this time he has strong reason to act. Parekh's not agreeing with major on khan's assessment report haha! c'mon Brigadier, dont tell me u too lattoo for the demure, beautiful face or ur ok with half baked people to be a part of the elite anti terror squad? anyway, hammie has company.

New kids in the block, dimpled pappu n macho munno, this is side splitting stuff🤣. Roops n Baji one team that can put to shame any accomplished stand up comedians. The flirting of the two is filmy but unique, can they ever behave sobre err normal? The wholesome threesome naku dutta baji agree to let the law take its own course with harshad.

Naku is our 21st century jhansi ki rani, undoubtedly👍🏼. who could risk their life by talking the harshad saga with major nd still be breathing? Surprised n relieved how major took to the news n he also stopped short of taking the law into his hands, praying for restraint as it was not worth dirtying his hands for a lousy creature n tarnishing the image of the forces. But Im sure it was not easy for the man, pretty dramatic how he released his frustration, for a while i was thinkg when Brigadier asked him to take up the case it was like 007 style operation, then when he was punching at the gym, it was like ok, here goes our one man army Rambo bhaiya but on top of the mountain he sounded like Lord Narsimha who took out the intestines of his enemy,,,,but in the end it was tai tai phish! 🤔 coulnt help singing then, "why this, why this kolaveri da" 😆

Must say it was adorable to see how naku buttered her saab b4 throwing the dhamaka, she missed his reaction by leaving out 'munno'. She also has a routine when she has to speak to her saab weeping, whining, eventually winning...hehe!

So the battle lines are drawn n we r waitin for the face off with the idiot. The precap is droolworthy nd its worth the wait😍. So long n thanx for the entertainment, entertainment, entertainment😉 [joking] Hammie babe!!!"The most important of life's battles is the one we fight daily in the silent chambers of the soul" David O. McKay

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#903

RESERVED...

Edited...

Hammie ...mein aagai...finally ready to comment ...hmmm chal let me get started...

Painful Rapture: chapter 3: "a hit, a very palpable hit" I sure hope it is for that harshad! :P

So I told you na that this UD is a fav... from the very beginning to the end the flow, the way you have looped it all together, how true to character each person remained and of course Baaji's presenc, on the whole the entire UD was simply well written with such great flow...me was soo glued to it...so glued that normally I write my comments as I go but this one I just read read and read lol...

I loved Naku's monologue here where she basically describes herself but she knows her own positive points that Dutta likes in her ...which was good :) and then she made the right decision, as I hoped, to not give a heed to the blackmail and expose Harshad for his wrong doings...regardless of how long she's known him, the so called friendship shared...hmm...but Naku will give evidence no matter what may come of it and for that am quite proud of her...standing on side of justice :)

OH there is the first bathroom scene...u know sach mein it didn't even register as I was so into where the UD was going haha ...I am going through it again ...and now I see...naked torso and his black shiny curly hairs...and damn hot biceps triceps...and me now only reading that part ...omg and his stubble he shaved and although looked 'unapproachable' to him I think everyone ready to approach him haha ...and his shower ...haaye...what a scene me all dazed *blushes*

So he is going to take on this issue at Dera hospital...i am quite excited about that :) I hope he gives Harshad what the guy rightfully deserves for his disgusting mind...I liked how when Parekh mention problem there his mind automatically wanted to say Naku but he maintained the formality...another point...I loved that in this conversation..they both did not assume the truth...rather was meant to be investigated in military style...hmm Khan's assessment he said no ...because of her fainting...but glad parekh has put it on hold for now..I think she will be great in military :P

Oh this Khan sometimes behaves completely like a grade school kids...teacher ke peeche peeche trying to get answers...lol...yeh bhi na...he was quite cold in mannerism with her though...

HAaaye Baaaji ...dhincak haha ...omg nice to see him in action ;) him and roops are so cute...BAAJI RAO my my what a six pack haha

I loved his convo with Naku. It really showed their relationship ...and his reactions to every part of the convo ...was so much Baaji and it so showed what she meant to him as well...and then his conversation with Dutta...was fun...how casual they are..and how much comfort btwn them...great friends they are...Baaji all fired up ...I should give him my bat ...aww and he's not allowed a piece of the action...sadly..but rightly ...

Then the entire convo btwn D and N had to be the best part...u even created small drama with just her getting out the information she had. And him in gym punching away while she speaking with his 'hmmm' lol liked that touch...his style...everything there...loved the whole of it...the entire convo from beginning to end and what he tells her and how he supports...gotta love this major ...

Hmm so here was the next shower scene...i knew this one existed but I think your lines took dominance over the shower...his anger filled lines and then on the Harley woot LTL1 style mein lines ...HHHARSHAD MEIN TERI UNTHERI NIKAL DOON GAAA! ARRRH!! 😍and his anger ready to squish that harshad to pulp...hmm...me all grinning...can't wait for next UD...eagerly waiting to see how u pan it all out ...

Good and Naku has approached Ms.Tendulkar with the information...now for the hearing...will wait to see what happens...will have to because I don't have choice-uu :P

Hmmm so hammie teri sharmilee has quite enjoyed and loved this UD...one of my favs ...i love them all but this one extra loved ...great job...great writer you are...loved it to the core...beginning to end ...thank you for such a wonderful read...love you lots...take care...phir milenge chalte chalte

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suhana19

@suhana19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#904

Reserved😉will be back soon🤗

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@ivy_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#905

Thanks for the pm and update, Hammie🤗.

The slime ball Harshad😡 needs to be beaten up by Dutta and Baaji.

I am glad that Naku had the sense to confide in Dutta. Hope she comes out clean soon and that Harshad is nailed forever.

Having Dutta under the shower once is enough to send the Diwanees pulse rate soaring high😳. Iss episode mein to do-do baar nahaya. OMG I am dead and gone to heaven😆. As usual, very well written with detailed and easy to visualize description😊

What's wrong with Khan😕. Why does she think that she is the most important thing in Major Dutta's life. Height of presumptuousness As though DSP cannot meet with Brig Parekh to discuss other matters.

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prncz

@prncz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#906

Wow hammie ,,awesem update 👏.loved the way nakku decide to exposse harshad and alert saab abt he backmail ,,,hmm gud thninkgn but loved the way u gave an insight to ankkus tghts ,,so she kwns dutta like her feminine but at the same time brave enf to fight her own battles and be strong ,,⭐️

hmm loved the way baji is gettign naughty with roops and roops equaly naughty with baji they make a lvely sweet pair ,,,

so bajji did manage to talk to nkaku so sweet she too was thingk of sharign with him awww ,, and finally let is off her chest but so swt of baji to support her and get ready to thrash harshad awww love him so tooo,,,and then his talk with major was amusing tooo

and the bstest part nak convo with MAjor hmmm,,he talkign and pucnhing the bxing bag was awesoem aaahh yaad dila diya old LTL days and then his assuring NAku ,circunstcnil evidence need not be waht is seems was sooo gud i felt like hugging him 😳😳😳 and then eh goign on his bike in rage ---wow hotness personified ,,his anger and screamm reminded me of anna episode awww thnsk hammie for this wonderful update and making us walk the meommry lanes ...

now recap ..major enterign the hospital proceddign officall with 2 army men wow wht a scene ,,,,friday kab ayega 😍

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#907

me updated at the reserved place thankfully successfully finally!😃

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Azy

@-Azy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#908

Thanks a lot for the lovely update! full of drool worthy scenes *blushing*

I wonder any one who read the WU is on earth ;) all must be in hevan! Rofl

Not one but 2 shower senes one hot n one cold n again him in full mlitary atier ready to swoon us n black west n gym scene ,smoking hot n finally on the bike! ouufff mardalengi kya :p

Atlast nakku got guts to tell him n the hmmm session... I could feel the blood boiling insIde :/

But finally his reply to her made me all hayeee...

Kya yarr... Tum ithna genrous...:/ some thing sure is up on ur top compartment :p

Well Harshad's ulti ginthi shuru huwa... me waiting do dinchak with baaji hahaha

Poor chap... he too want to join the dishum dushum :(

What with this khan han, n she is upto x<... lol again n ear full from major saab hahaha

Very well writen, enjoyed it to totally...

N tis time didn't bunk ha :p

Intersting n swoon thud pre cap *ahem*

Now counting days for next friday :/ hhaha

Thanks for the pm n update

Love

Azy :)

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mnx12

@mnx12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#909

Very nice update👏 Naku told First Baji then Datta what was the truth, brave girl.👍🏼 Datta's assurance gave her more courage, finally Harshad will get what he deserves. Eagerly waiting for the next part. Thanks for the PM😊

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678165

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Posted: 12 years ago

#910

hi sorry wasn't able to comment on the past update (very busy)it was good and not scary at all. Takeshi's castle came on a while back on the uk sky channel 111. i think it is on youtube if you are interested to take a peek it is a chinese based gameshow and is fun🤣, something that made me laugh.(tell me how you got on)

thanks for this update it was interesting to hear all the happenings going on

good description of N and D in the first section D meeting Khan was quite harsh but that was to be suspected as women do have that pestering side but D put her in her place😲

the baji roops flirting bought a llighter side to the update😳

Baji and N share a sweet relationship he is ready to defend her no matter what and D was desperate to find out what's wrong and sort it out for N he was so understanding as i thought it would bring trouble but i was pleasantly surprised he was calm but what an outburst on the bike (That's more like D)

KEEP IT UP THANKS⭐️

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