Originally posted by: suhana19Reserved.. ๐ค will be back soon..
Edited๐Hey dear Hamiee๐คThanx a alot for the wonderful and Brillant Update as always๐๐ผ๐Loved it as alwaysโค๏ธ...I know its a lot of hardwork that one have to go ...But its a worth and very much appericiated dear hamieeโญ๏ธ,,,Thanx so much ...๐คThe tittle as always Fab ...๐๐ผ... thanks for your praise and appreciation suA new world with a new beginning as our brave solider steps into it once again But this time more content then before ...He is happy to be back to work ...Where he has given his blood and sweat and whatever he has earned till today ...๐...I used this quote bcause of the play on words new and braveLoved the details about the military college ..up too mark ...very well written ...โญ๏ธenjoyed writing this portionSo rahman has tagged along ...GreatHain mein marjawaa ...Girls are already fancin him ...๐oye kudiyo zara door rahiyo ...he already taken by naku๐...So keep a safe distance from him ...nahi toh Naku is ready with the ...To play golf ๐คฃ...Knows to how to handle the situation ...๐wow suhana is you new gift of jesting when giving commentsLoved the convo between dutta and that officer . rajat...great ...he wants to know when he is gettin hitched ...Well i believe that"s just a formality he already hers ...Forever ...๐คand same with her wedding ?no one knows ,not even the twoHain mein phir se mar gayee ...he bought that chunni along ...โบ๏ธ...Chori chori chupke chupke๐Sarki joh sar se voh dheere dheere,paagal hua mein dheere dheere ..Teri chunariya dil le gayiโค๏ธaar suhane are singing this song? completey nutters courtesy of major duttaAwww naku missing him and thinking to call him ..But then drops the idea ...and talks with that lion ...so sweet๐... the lion is her comfort blanketYeh lo aa gaya Dukhi and batak ti aatama isko chain nahi ... Harshad iska toh band baaja na hai hum ne oh my word this FF his becoming a batting grond a game of cricket .where Harshad happens to be the ball ..the batsgirlies Daya and now you too suhana..and asking for more ..haaawhat say daya and all the Forum friends ...iam ready with my bat ...Show him is right place ...๐ก ...He better get his mind check ...Oops my bad he dnt have any ...Good naku gave him back ...Loved the Convo between nandani and naku ...just superb ๐๐ผ... that shows Naku's compassion that is needed in caringYipee baaji is has given a leave with a warning and with this we hope to see a new baaji ...omg he is already proving that ..been a responsiable ...โญ๏ธ...Loved him and roops ...love baji..miss him,the guy has turned a new leafHain mein marjawaa him talking to chunni again ...๐...awww but that was sweet ,,he misses her ...๐ณbut she is always close to him ... haan chunni ka bhi role haiHaila all eyes on our major ...But his eyes are only on naku ๐...Waise can"t wait to see him teaching ...๐,,,,,,,,,,,yes it should begin in chap.24Loved the convo between Dutta and naku ..Finally she called ...๐ณ...He is rushing ...Class hai and she is gettin annoyed ...๐ณ...awww and asked for the pic ...But he said no ...Yeah dil mein hai tasveer ...hamesha and forever ,,,True ...Uppar se man is possesive ๐ about his women ...๐,,,,,,,, haan he is possesive.waise bhi teekh kethta hai..naku to pagal haithank you once again for an amusing and fun to read comment suhana ..thanks for he flowers..keep reading and enjoying my FF..WITH MUCH LOVE xxxhammieThanx once again and will wait for the nxt part ...u take care and see ya ...Lots of love and hugssuhana๐ค
Originally posted by: daya0628Reserved
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Hammie mein aagai mein aagai...and with all my equipment...first self protection is important na so I have come all geared and ready to bat hahaha
oye sharmilee you sound realy militant! need to put my protective gear on
Chalo let me get straight to this ...am so eager to hit a sixer !
Chapter 23 : Oh Brave New World <-- watch out daya is coming bat in hand LOL
You know what a lovely start...he seemed so delighted to be going back into uniform and doing what he loved most. That feeling of getting it all back, very clear how much he's missed it...and the thought of getting back to the swing of things had him all happy...
once a fauji always a fauji ..even after they retire...wow loved the intro into the Military College...from the tight security :) to the respect from soldiers...the flow of the arrangements...shows the discipline in the place...well woven together hammie...great work...
thanks daya .loved writing this bit..it's been ages since I saw an army area..basically it was from memory..grew up in Cantoment areaROFL bat man Rahman...can I add him to my batting team when harshad comes around: P ...anyway ii do like that it's all so organized and prepared for them...
no Dutta will never let him go..ask Dutta iam sure woh tere team zaroor join kera ga!Hmm some gals all gaga over major Saab...don't blame em...its hard not to have a fast heart rate with such hotness in front of you haha ...just wait till him being engaged comes out...so senior officer asks about ring and being married...D clarifies they are 'just engaged' ...he has by heart accepted her as his wife has he not ? so what is it 'JUST engaged :P
kya baat hi hert rate .hottness pe bahut zorrar hai.haaa.oye just engaged meaning not married yet...some times I wonder too what he's on..so elusvie this sher dil
I liked the convo btwn the senior officer and dutta...about family...and life changing ...nothing certain in their line of work...always indefinite and most loved and agree with this line here : "life in itself is another name for change, for it is random, erratic and changeable" well said...his entire dialogue {applaud} well done...wise man ...sure does think thoroughly about his every move...
thanks khabi khabi for a change...i may come out with some profound๐Much like Rajat..we all are wondering when Major plans to get official hitched :D jaldi batao :P
yaar even dutta and naku dont know ...may be Bappa knows?Oh ho ...he brought the chunni...that was expected...his sweet fragrance filled baby is with him haha ...
comfort blanky baache ka awwwh.Aww Naku is so cute...talking to her lion ...pulling his whiskers ...hmmm slapping gently on its face...and wondering whether to call or not...but made the decision to let him call when he has time and test the waters of distance: P lion king naku's comfort blanky
Ohhh she will confront Harshad...hmm...perhaps my bat will be useless if Naku can handle this pest on her own ...oooh la la ...naku spitting fire at Harshad...am loving it :D
well I think this one was coming..i told Naku DO IT ..other wise balla le ke wack kere gi on Harshads block
Again dialoguing done btwn Naku and Nandi ...very well done...the way she comforts the crying young girl...you have nailed it.. the way u mention 'i cannot say i know how you feel but..." that is perfect beginning ...cuz saying i know how u must feel only makes is sound fake ...and then this line 'think of life like a game of cards ,how you play the hand that you are dealt..that's what makes a winner!' I believe there is a quote quite similar to this..but I love this line :D
loved writing his part..enhancement of Naku's role ..the lsaying?is it life is like a box of chocolates??
Oh this harshad ! eerrr I have brought my bat hammie...u said u wanted to see me hit a sixer na...first take a look at my beautiful bat
Ab if naku does nothing..I will step in :P
the bat is hamazzzing Daya...haaa ๐๐..you and suhana are on a roll with new found love for batshaaa๐ฒ๐๐ haha harshad gave her the wonderful opportunity of yelling ...
Bach gaya saala...from me of course and my batting...lekhin not from Naku ;)
for the moment daffa kr us ko ...dont forget Naku ka colleague bhi haiOhhoo ROFL...wohoo Naku gave it to him good ...and me also cheering with the others in the room hahaha
ye harasssment ..go get girl ..but hai he besharramm Harshi
๐ฒ๐ฒ 'tera gussa se bhi pyar jahlaktha hai'๐ก omg my my ...he does not want me to leave him does he... go on DAYA swing the bat haaa
Baaji brought to magistrate...and again ...dialoguing here to was wonderful...his guilt to the magistrates understanding of Baaji's guilt yet still concerned for the situation is not to repeat and clearly states the repercussions if he dare do it again...aww baaji thnking about the stigma now associated with his name...but hopefully that will be gone soon...
yes this was hard to do as have not really been to court room proceedings , but did want to make a ho ha about drunk driving ..henceAww loved the way Baaji makes Roops go to uni and attend the remaining lectures..very responsible...and it's one way he hopes to redeem his tarnished image...aww and he is home sweet home :)
Loved the car convo btwn Roops and Baaji ...lots of respect both share for Dutta and both are willing to ensure all is well...
thanks...again to big up Dutta..also how he wors no dilly dallying
Aww omg chunni all entangled and him questioning 'baby what have you been up to' ROFL ...his relationship with this chunni is going strong haha
yeah had to give him something tfor time pass๐
Haaye haayee...Major Saab coming out of his vehicle ...what a description ๐
mar gaye tu..cheez he aise nayeeb
haha the girls are all realizing who he is...haaye haaye there is a sharmilee in this group :P ...of course all chking him out ...no reason not to ;)
yesss she's dedicated to you๐
8males and 7females...oooh this should be fun...
the girlies would may be drive him up the wall thres 4 in his family and now naku 5th poor DUtta FEMALES KA MARAOoowww tasha phone convo :) finally they talk ...haha his no picture policy...damn possessive man HAHA... hmm so no tasveer for her ...call ended...
WAISEbhi do you seriously think us ke tasveer! lagye ga?i dont think soo:D precap = love it...am quite excited ...waiting for next UD soon :P
thanks daya for your timely comments such a great girl you are...never disappoint hammie..with much love hammie
Great update hammie...loved it to its core...thanks for such a treat...
Love you lots...take care...phir milenge chalte chalte
heya hun u k..
as far as i remember u finished the last update with dutta commenting on nakus clothes...i fote we'd get abit more tasha in this update...in the strt...nywy nvm...acha sun leya hai thujhe bas woh lovers /premi chayian..pun abhi woh kaam pe hain ,besides he had his fun with her on his last day at PN..PLUS he hadto leave for the miltary school
btw loved hw he wos smiling 2 himself...mded me feel dat he was somewhat content/satisfied...
gr8 description of authoritive nd decipline!!
ive actualy seen a military college in asia [pakiland 2 b precise] and it looks completely different then anyother college..its like a complete diff part of d city...luks rely nice.. and u 1ce again described is perfectly!! you mean kakul,yes so i have ...it was hard as here you dont see a hevy presence of miltary as oin pakistan..chaal tried ..and loved writing it
eek who is dis pervy lady man!! i hope she wont b a KMH b/n tasha!! :@ pervy?yaar sharmilee ,quiet shy girl hai. officer hai woh lardki
oh so dis girl has a fiance nd shes ogling other man..hope dutta dsnt tink naku will do sme...
this line totaly blew me off..love it .. '"To me Dutta reflected and continued, "in my experience , in life the biggest change is to adapt oneself to a given situation however big or small , where ever it may be, and to modify your thinking and modus operandi, that which reflects a change of attitudes and adjustment"'
aww felt sorry 4 baji...he is rely feeling guilty...bless him
haha or8 so des girls wer duttas pupils lool..wel dont blame them 4 fallin 4 him ;-) 7 girls yeah they did know him from adam
aww tasha finaly tlk... yeah dutta trying to cool shool..woh bechari well not quite sedhi sadi
dutta sure is possesive lol but we love him.. <3
please continue soon...x thanks babes
ps.sory 4 not bein able 2 comment oon previous updates..but ukno i sed em nd totaly loved em!! <3
i know tere messages me got love you loads aur touch mein rehna..pyar se hammieOriginally posted by: prnczawesome updte hammie ๐ค
good to hear from hear from you raguuuloved the way u described dutta's drive to the instituion ...the entry , the statues, the road signs ,security n alli could visualise alll ๐๐ thankyou raj...loved writing this sectionthe girls all fidda on the wel muscled, broad shouldered man in civilian clothes ,, n now in uniform ,,hmm lets see hw major dutta sets thm right if they try to cross the line i can see it cmng ... haaa cross the line i love this line raju well saidloved how nakku took cre of harshad epi of lying , but the humiliation has no eff on him looks like ,but nakku is no less she will face him one on one, in cmng days , hai na,,๐ณ i certainly hope so ..sherni full on kafi kuch seekh gaye hai dutta seaww bajji has been freed with a warning , I wanted to see that only i am relieved n he is so concious of gaining dutta's trust ,,he will ,,he is next best to our dsp ๐ณ love Baji too have to have him do his bitsthnx for the lovely update hammie loved reading it ,waiting for mreEditied ,, Hammie i forgto to say Dutta hidign nakku 's chunni and sleepig wth it as naku with her tiger was a clasic tght and scne ๐ wow what language raju ...me shy wiye... be sharam hota ja reha hai pyar meinand dutta's reply for pic.i understand that ,,, i too belive in keeping the pic in mind and heart is more imp ๐๐ผ thank you for agreeing raj..thanks for your lovely comment ..read the next one when it comes out ...xxxhammie
Originally posted by: AzMishyVery good update Hammie :D
hiyaaa azmmm.greattt to see you ..so all is well ya ye bhi phone e badalat hai?Loved it how Nakku waited or the right time n gave back that idiot Harshad... but man he is seeing love in that too :0He is in for a physco treatment v soon :& yaar pyar mein pgal pun ..no i dnt know how legal this is ..people tend to treat lovers rather kindly ..you heard the saying madly in loveHahahaha nakku's chunni... major hs found a v good place to hide it :pN it has wrapped it around him n he ask what its up to ... haye haye :p ROFL he's beginning to sound kinky..paglot khenin kaI like their phone convo n his explanation about the pictures... he is so right , u r in his heart n y want pcs ;) thanks ..seemed like a sensible way to treat the issueN major all dressed up n all te new girls la la land over him *hmmm* can't blame them... reading about him itself v r *ahemm * :p yet uniform suits him ufffPre cap sounds intresting...Waiting egearly for he next update :DThanks for the PM n for the update listen good to see your lovely jubbley comment..xxxhammieLots of love n hug
Nice updte๐ Both have resumed their duties. Harshad is going to be a pain, Naku will handle him well. It will be interesting to see Major Datta in his classroom, handling his students.Thanks for the PM, waiting for the next part๐
hiya meenakshi..thanks for your encouraging comments..yes me dreading writing he class room bits ..feels blank the mind at he moment...with uch love xxhammieOriginally posted by: Hamlet53
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