Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 64

Brilliant writing Hammie!! the emotional rollercoaster has drained me a bit.

What an awesome update Hamlet. 🤗 Truly a bright spot in my overworked and hectic weekend😆  Thanks dear😊

"Parting is such sweet sorrow" it applies well on Tasha. For a mature and pure love like theirs this parting will strengthen the bond bet Maj. Dutta and Naku.  The anticipation of their reunion will keep them going.

The Tasha time in the lawn was ahem ahem. Beautifully written..my heart raced along with Tasha's.😳

Dutta is trying his best to put up a brave front for Naku and at the same time has to battle with his own emotions and passion—the pain of their separation and his desire to hold her in his arms forever.  Dutta is ..if I may quote: an officer and a gentleman ,who always puts her well being first. Why is Naku behaving like a kid..wasn't she the one who wanted a career? Wake up baby, you cannot have everything in life at the same time always.😆

Usually, the only KMD I don't mind is Baaji..but then I am biased towards Duji. This time I welcomed Roops presence during the journey to the hostel. She has a calming and balancing effect on Tasha's nerves.

The Pau Bhaji scene was really cute with Naku feeding Dutta haque se and proudly staking her claim on him..it was like she was telling the college girls that beware and stay away.

I am curious to know how the young girls are going behave around Dutta during his next assignment?  But Maj. Dutta's heart and soul is already taken.

Dutta Shreeram Patil shopping for Naku was out of this world😍

Hey Dear Hammie 🤗
Superb update 👏...PArting is such a sweet sorrow...was the most apt title for this part
What a tuff time for Dutta...specially the battle going on between his mind and heart...one telling
him to maintain discpiline...follow his principles...the later craving to fulfill hia want...loved the line He was a man...and aman in love
Very well justification...no more questions left!!!

I was expecting close moments between them...both deserved to cherish this last moment and make it special..and its beautifully written...Pure !!
For a second even i thought that Dutta is hallucinating naku in the garden...but not only dutta but we the readers too are lucky enough that she was actually there...and we enjoyed that heavenly moment from your pen...for naku I must say at right place at right time 😆

Dutta asking naku to leave the dress here...was one moment which left me in an awww
In fact there are a lot of things which I loved about dutta in this update...but then when did I dont love him...he he 😃😳
but specially have to mention about him carriyng the luggage...and helping her settling the stuff in her room ...Gentleman!!!

The breakefast scene lightened up the mood a lot..all the moments were really cute..😊
and Dutta rightly called Roops Baji's substitute...ehe...kabab main haadi.😆..I tought tasha will go alone...But still i liked her presence too..
..specially she was understanding enough to gave them a moment together in the end alonewish baaji was their to accompany the trio...would have made this moment bit lighter by adding his nautanki...*okh dont glare at me* 😆...you know im a baaji fan..😳

All the time I was wondering why is dutta suddenly losing his temper at her that too at such moment when she is about to leave...but what a man..
 I know Naku you wanted me to shout at you ..you just wanted an excuse to cry.. . awww

The songs played always have a great impact on tasha..Loved the lines rang layega intezaar...im sure this parting will make their relation even more strong
the pau bhaaji part was another treat to read...specially dutta blushing  😳

the call of duty has a great significance in tasha's life...that too at individual level...which I love
the most about them...both have diffrent goals in lives..I loved the supportive attitude of dutta a lot
towards nakus work *applauds*

Wow ...he gave her a laptop...thats sweet now they will connect via it...that too on AS behalf...haha guess he had an experience at table after demanding sandwiches 😆
...hoping for some lovely convos between them on phone as well😳...ahm ahm *demanding reader* 😆
Im glad that dutta didnt stretched his parting moment a lot with naku for that was the point where he had to stay firm...and make her strong as well...
Brilliant...alwayz in character Dutta Sriram Patil 👏

I have to mention about the previous part as well...it was another very beautifully written part hammie...specially for a change dutta in jeans *drool*
and i loved it a lot the way naku explained how each style of his dressing expailns a lot about his personality...specially pathanis..thats the best one for him by far 😳

Looking forward to the next part...Thanks for this brilliant update and for pm too...Stay blessed alwayz 😊
and this ones specially for my punjabi kudi...Sawaad aa gaya aae kudiye teri update padh ke 😆
see you soon ...take care *hugs*

Nice episode👏 Very emotional, touchy. They will have to live without each other, till they unite once again.😊

Originally posted by: Warda.

Hey Dear Hammie 🤗
...hoping for some lovely convos between them on phone as well😳...ahm ahm *demanding reader* 😆

awesome hammie so dutta accepts he is a gadha and they interaction in the garden was awesome too.dutta is sweet that he hides his sorrow to give strength to nakku and nakku crying like a baby and pav bhaji seen was too good i love pav bhaji.

Originally posted by: suhana19

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Hey Dear Hamiee🤗
Thanx a million for the wonderful update ... 🤗 Brillant as always 👏 It was all the way Naku and dutta from beginning to end ..loved it all ..." sigh could feel each and every word 😳 
The tittle indeed is making me emotional "Parting is such a sweet Sorrow"
thanks suhana,pleased you found it moving ..yes the title is from the play Romeo and Juliet,Shakespeare's tragedy..the tragic tale of two lovers!
Yess indeed this must a longest nite for dutta 😳 if He could he would wish the time would stand still and Naku would be in his forever ...Awww as much he trying to discipline himself ..the more he want her ..every breath he takes for her 😳 It wasn't easy for him to leave her like that but he just trying to overcome the feeling ..Awww poor dutta ..."yess Naku called him janwar" but a lion with a heart and love for his lioness ... 😳 

Dutta realizes the need for constraint in one's life ,for be it not ,life would be a chaotic mass
He just wanted to go and hold his women in his arms but then he is gentlemen that wouldn't cross that line ... well his life is governed by demarcations,limits ,that's what he has learned from his life in the Army

Dutta ne Naku ko bas apne dil Awaaz di and here she is in front of him ...as much he desire to hold her he just trying to control his feelings but on other Naku can't stay Away from her Saab ..He wanna live for the moment and not think what tomorrow holds for them ...awww ...😳..And naku irrating him with senseless ??...But pyar karti hai ...so waana hear from him 😉...Loved this whole moment btwn the ..Love and trust they share😍Omg he called lauren old hag😆...Dutta is imprisioned in naku"s heart ❤️
Hain mein marjawaa ,,,😍The loving moments they shared ...Dutta is not stopping today ...Major is so drowned in naku"s Love 😉 this bit was hard to write..I wondered why did none of them think of getting married..what stopped them..was it cultura/religious values?

New day has began But today Dutta doesn"t wanna see naku ...coz he can"t see her crying ...Haila today dutta dressed for naku ...wanna leave her dress and the frames to feel her presence ...😭...lambi judaai ...Awww AS wished she married them off instead ...This indeed going to be Hard ...But there love will get more stronger ...😳

lets see how things shape up..
As always loved the breakfast table scenes btwn whole family ...Omg every one teasing poor dutta 😆...and naku tryin to rescue ..."sigh" Loved the Bappa"s blessings wala part and the sweet and emotional partings of Naku and AS ...😳

the eating together is bringing them together as a family unit,hence the converation alonside the food is of tremendous value ; and yes prayer and pooja is a vital link to union in Dutta's family
Dutta is going also feeling the pain as the time is coming closer of there separation and he also frustrated ...But naku just dnt wanna leave here saab ...Sher is getting angry at her ...😳...Coz she keeps crying ..But how will she not 😭...
Roops is tellin me off to make naku sad 😳...Loved the song u picked ...Though it was emotional 😭but the pain was visible ...and in the end when says sweetly Bhook lagi hai😳 he justs melts na ...Loved the pav bhaji wala part ..naku feeding dutta and then the water drinking part ...Just too good ⭐️..loved it ...loved writing these bits,simple and raw moments,day to day,tht's why I chose a best loved meal..a way side hot freshly made meal!  

The last part gosh i have no words 😭 i mean He the world"s best Husband has gotten ...Lucky naku 👍🏼...Roops and dutta setup the room for naku and gave her all the necessary stuff ...My heart just went to them when Naku hold him and says take her away😭...This indeed was emotional rollercoaster "sigh"...But very superb 👍🏼👏 and Brillantly written ...Awesome precap ...Will wait for the nxt part and see how Naku and dutta cope with there respective jobs and separation ...😳     I think all this last bit was stemmed from Dutta's boarding school scenario ,if ou recall he studied n Missouri boarding school from a young age and his parents may have dropped him off similairly...listen thanks again for yet another lovely and encouraging feed back,alongside the silvery..message..and last of all the lovely pier hug video of Dutta and Naku ,i watched it for ages ..the good thing is that it carries on..xxxhammie.

Love and Hugs suhana🤗

Originally posted by: daya0628

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Mein aagai :D heehee took long time i know...i guess i am late latif now :S

mera influence..remember uni first..never you mind sharmilee
Ok without further ado here I go ...

Chapter 21 ' "Parting is such sweet sorrow" <- love the title ...sweet sorrow hmm very apt title for this part ... Romeo and Juliet

Haha major is trying to control so much ...discipline! ahaa but he really hates this night doesn't he...cuz once it's over his love will have to leave, love all the questioning he is doing to himself about wanting her...of course now that he won't even see her , he is going to feel the need to hold her close even more...and this time this feeling would get the better of him...of course as if she could hear his every cry ...call for her ...she stood waiting for him and he made his way to same place...lol he is trying to see if she is really there LOL ...well she is and boy was she getting his feelings high...he so badly wants to hold her...so obvious but he is trying so hard to control...and of course Naku hugging and holding  him will not help ..haha and he does hug then lift and she kissing his chin and him saying kiss the lips not chin...me reading this dreamy scene heehee ...I loved their whole convo and moment here...so emotion packed...he is being stronger versus she breaking down easily...like the typical image of men not showing emotions and girls always breaking down LOL...would like to see that changed one day...he is sooo in love and every little thing shows it so well ...waise Daya you have given a rather interesting gist of the scene sounds better han te original...so you read this in the doctors' waiting room haaaha ..tere pasaney choot rehe hoonge ..such is Major's prowls and as for the loiness ,she is getting very naughty day by day . but she does tturn on te water warks and opens her gab to argue as well, whif she has too so itni bhoole nehi hi humari tumhari naku..but dutta ko tu kabu kiya ha us ne well and proper.

Aww Dutta wanted his bed tea from her but at the same time did not want to see her tears so felt it was  better not to have the tea...and he picked the outfit she liked best...aww how sweet of him...and he went to her...asked her to leave somethings behind ...to feel her presence ...omg the little things he does... tried to create emotional show here

Loved the little bit here where they both came to stand overlooking the first floor, together and AS felt it would've been better to marry them off...but sometimes such tests only prove ur love to be stronger so in a way am glad they are not married yet ... thank you Daya ,even I was beginning to doubt my reason...

Loved the light fun dining table scene...all teasing him ...and then the little AS-Naku parting convo...was beautiful 

 thanks dinner table binding togethr ,rather a scene many a times show in LTL1,so usually include one hen i can..Baji gap though

oh and must mention the part where he yelled at her not in frustration but for Naku ...so she can cry her eyes out...he knew ...loved that bit.. yes trying to cover up his own halat by yelling at her ,basically letting off steam  just needed excuse ,the pair of them

aww naku crying her eyes out and major saab is getting annoyed that this is what he will remember when he comes back her crying like a baby...although we all noe his heart is crying the same way! And the song (great choice) explaining their emotions well and then stopping to eat and feeding ...soo LTL1 hmmm even their feeding each other spoke so much about their love from just how sweetly it was done...omg i loved that the water he refused to drink 'heavens knows where that's come from' haha but as soon as she drinks and passes it over he finds her lip marks and drinks from it...aww they are so cute together lol...aww he is so glad she fed him...it was only good cuz she fed him eh haha the guy is so in love...they get to her destination ...and you can just feel the ping in both of their hearts as it sinks in ...they will be going their ways in a matter of minutes...feed me baaby ,some of his habits will never change,he has to be the ultimate boy an we all loved Daya you know who I mean? 

The last bit was amazing..loved it...again so much emotion and feelings...Naku completely breaking at this point as she knew this was it...he would leave now and she could not take it...she wanted him to take her back and broke down...but they will see it through...loved his line "I leave my heart with u and take urs with me..."  and he walks away...and Naku left there with her faith in tact :)   yeah,consciously I suspect the readers did expect a weepy clingy ,huggy scene so I went along and did it

Wonderful update...sorry for being late to comment...loved it as always ...

listen my loyal reader.thank you so much for a great comments Daya/sharmilee ,much appreciate it ,since Iam aware how busy you are with uni ..xxxhammie

Phir milenge chalte chalte :)