Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 37

Me 2nd... 

Reserved ...I owe you comments for two parts will do both here 😉


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Hammie mein aagai ...kaan pakoding...maafi saab :P
sorry i don't know how i forgot to come back to ur last update so me making up can not just leave it na...me will read comment on both ...so here we go...

Chapter 12: Love is a many -Splendored Thing

haye haye major Dutta sitting in drizzling rain...loved how he called her and then was like fully checking her out ...top to bottom, every curve lol...aww and he is not wanting to go in either...wants to just be in the moment...omg this was a damn hot scene...me all blushing reading it ...ahahah omg Naku is such a teaser LOL...very well written scene hammie...enjoyed it...poor major totally being denied access haha...in alll this i loved most that Dutta did not do anything she didn't want...

oh yay Dutta all ready for crutches ...i am more excited lol...i want him up and walking ...back to his fomer self soon.

ROFL @ Suds wanting to join army...omg i am so with Baaji...me also would have worked on keeping my drink in my mouth and keeping from choking LOL

Major working hard to get back in action...all determined to get this if its the last things he does...and very intelligent...Lauren is right to call him her star patient lol...ahhaa omg i really love Baaji...jumped on the chance to further befriend Rascal and Dutta all like get off...so possessive of it ...

Dutta wants to tell his aye he wants to marry Naku but then that last scene ...wow...i am speechless

Hammie big hug for you on the last part here...the bomb blast a very known issue now and you have brought it into this so beautifully...yet it was so heart wrenching...everything you wrote there was so true...the fact of facing such horrid situations or hearing even it really makes you feel for them and pray for all...my heart reaches out everytime in any such incidents.

Awww omg Dutta was so troubled he couldnt even get himself to tell AS about Naku and him...i don't blame him such incidents really catch you off gaurd...and really make such a difference in whats going on but I hope he tell AS soon.

Last scene hammie...am glad it was Tasha and they had this moment to be there with each other for comfort...its really needed in such experiences ...to be able to just get that support and love that is needed.

Wonderful update hammie...loved it to bits...to its core...you have magic in ur writing that keeps me wanting more :P ...and me now heading straight to next chapter ...

Chapter 13: Marriage of true minds

loved how you started this update...Dutta's behavior, Nakus reaction...had me kind of thinking what is major up to...there is like a pull and push in  their relationship ...

ahh omg Baaji and Roops have a LS and seems cute and funny ...i did not expect that at alll...omg both on Rascal too...lmao these too i tell u and Dutta is in utter disbelief with what he saw and is confused what to think and then the right person comes at the right time ;) hehe who else Naku ...Dutta still thinking about Baaji-Roops...hmmm...

ok so Duta needs to speak with Naku and I love how she in her  head prays to bappa to save her LOL...

omg i loved this, he wants to know about her fears, this is good straighten this out beforem they both needed to talk about this...she needs to know what his life is like...I loved her reply to this to...slowly letting each thought come out...really well written scene here hammie...the part about the polica car...and hving that feeling for 10 yrs straight...i can just feel that to...well explained...he said cut and dry...laid it all down for her to see to acknowledge and o understand...what life of being married to him would bring...brilliant ...

OMG what a proposal LOL ...just came out in the spur of the moment...AS shocked B-R happy... wow...really wow...

owww he put bangles on her *me going all dreamy eyed here* ...all so happy with this announcment or rather declaration...

loved how dutta remembered the incident and hurt families of Patil Wadi...and also wanted things to be done simple ...

hmm so Kala has come ! OMG is she really happy for her brother and ok with Naku...*blinks fast and thinks* hmmm...well i guess time will tell :P

oh Baaji and Roops cracking me up with their rubbish fights and talks of marriage lol ...aww i love Baaji Naku relationship ...how casual it is ...very light hearted convo there...and so much comfort...

haha Naku so drowned in thoughts of her saab...mee too joining ...lol
...so she brings the jug of water to her man who was waiting for so long for her...and takes his chance to trap her...and has her completely at loss for words...oh ho major is trying sooo hard to get what he wants...i am laughing with each collision ...forehead...nose lol...his rage is spiking...aww like a kid who didn't get to taste the ice cream...was about to leave and Naku puts her hands around him...haila...aww they kissed ...loved that line about no music needed...i totally agree...there was music there already :P

Precap :
so AS goes to ask N's hand in marriage for Dutta hope all ends well :)

Great updates and again am extremely sorry this is so late ...amazing writing...was a joy to read...love you lots...take care...cya :D



Edited by daya0628 - 12 years ago

love the update 1st part the talk of duty is full of emotion and the understanding tasha held is also a fab part of this relation and the propose infront of family and the way dutta said to aai about the marrige expense and donate the money to victims he had a golden heart and the baaji roops love and the way baaji and roops make nakku understand and the last part is so romantic😳
Edited by rrs1391 - 12 years ago

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fabulous
superb
amazing
awesome
fantastic
great
marvelous

love it hammie

so finally dutta tell her mum that he wanna marry nakku😛 but wow in front of whole family he propose nakku halia kya ashique hai😆

kala like the way you introduce her exactly female version of dutta 😆

so dutta get a glimpse of bajji and roops relationship 😉

last but not least our hungry lion finally get what he want 😆

thanks for pm hammie

Edited by eternity_of_luv - 12 years ago

Reserved 😉will be back later🤗 Edited by suhana19 - 12 years ago

wow only you can create magic between D and N, so much passion from D's side and it suits N to be shy and timid. awesome update!!!!!!! Kala is kala as usual

Edited by krishaa - 12 years ago

REs  me cmng back 😉   Edited by prncz - 12 years ago

Thanks for the lovely update Hammie👏. I am glad that Dutta has proposed to Naku in front of the family and AS has given her blessings. The Kangan makes it kind of an informal engagement. Atleast their relationship is out in the open... so we can expect more Tasha romance😍

Roops and Baaji a LS track..lets see how D handles this romance between his little sister and best friend.

Kala is Kala😆 and Bechara Suds..he is such a loser.

I hope Ganpath and Babi agree to this rishta without much ado  and forget the Hashad episode.

Looking forward to D-N engagement..something to make it official😊

a superb updt... simply superb... loving the Baaji- Roops LS... they are wanting Nakku to talk fr them to Dutta... luved the serious Tasha convo... luved the way Dutta proposed to Nakku in frnt of evryone... loved the end romantic part of Tasha...kala is kala only... hope Ganpat dont oppose the wedding... updt sooon...