Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 19

@ Hammie

Sorry Girl for commenting late . Someone just rubbed me on the wrg side ..so needed time to cool

On to the update…Naughty but Smart Dutta …I like it , he was not upset to see her in the sexy avatar. If there was another guy apart from him ….. there would fireworks but even with the fire there was smoke . What a smart boy to use the situation to his advantage. Hahha loved it

Nd the next day ..Too restless to see lady love ..too see if she did as he told her to ………She loves him too much and he is being a baby . A baby with mood swing and tramtrum ..But yet very very cute

Oh ! He is feeling low becoz he thinks she her career is more imp than him ….someone pls this Baby that a girl can handle both career and home  quite well . Nd wait he went all shy why when AS mentioned shahdi with NAKU …Dil mein Ladoo aur zaban pe  na

Now with entry the Father of the bride ..Kya Hoga Major Ka

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

@ scorpio oye who rubbed you not me I hope meri janamaan...major dutta teri without nehi rahe sakta... have a heart... nakku kay without chaley ga ,  pun teray without  no no!  great to hear from you my sweeto

xxxhammie

Omg Hammie

The new title of ur Ff sgould strt like

  Mishal Raheja as Major Dutta Patil

Weak hear readers keep oxygen pump at ur side and mask on uyr face '

Will need now and then :P

Well you wont belive but everytime I got to Naku entering in the room ,

I got interupted :P

Got hate that interuption , well hammie ,

I am dying over the attitude of my major saab :P

Isnt he the mopst adorable man :P

God he got issues , first no tea than No Naku :P

Hhehhehheh

Love his irrritation and woo he strted doing the exercise alone :P

Hehehheh

I was laughing my ass off and his guts :P

And wooo Naku enters dude , how much he shows indifference he didn't forget tosee what she weras ,how her hair is tied and all :P

Major saab has totally gone nuts :P

And wooo hooo Hammieee !

Dude dutta and his hair :P

U got quite a wild imagination with that :P

I was reading it with minimal expression on my face uz everyone was in the room and my sisters were like , why u look panic , im like come and read u will know and im like

Its just nothing :P

God Dutta has become so naughty he goes with the gel :P

Oh he loves Naku hands on his legs :P

I am loving the way their relationship is growing first they have distance but now they joke around eachother and Naku is no less though no match for  patil's besharmi :P

And Hammmie one thing is anyone n the family is from Army ,

I love how he speaks , though he talk in such a rigid and a lil intriguing way ,

But iut shows his love and annoyance to

What women :P

I just love to read that word and imagine it from his mouth :P

Ok Love how he tells through his gesture that how guilty he feels :P

I so love him then <3

And woo Major saab who was angry that nO tea is here is fine now with having notea :P

Btw love what Naku replied to dutta question abt career , he is amd , he is like

This should be me and this is what this lady is answeingg me!
major saab ap kay beechay bohat badal gaya hai :P

Though I think Dutta is more mad abt k Naku may be massaging someothet legs too :P

And though he is angry and he eats what she brings :D

But that's where my heart stops Hammie

Kya sirf khobsurat cum smart cum chirping cum naughty girl nahi chal sakti

Why ye khana L

Mujh ko tu kuch nai ata :that is one reason I asored Dutta .

Ek nicvale main us ka baith phar jata tha :P

OK coming to the shopping trip

Wo wow wo !
hammie show ka naam hona chaiye !
Dutta and naku kay dil ki awaz everysong was like playing for them

And what an awesome song selectoion !
I was like wowww

Amazing selection !
great and anakueyes pleading :D

And wooo  those guys were lucky that dutta didn't have leges ion action

Cuz even without that he just knowck them off :P

I was like wooo I want a man like that :P

Har banday ko bitwao ge :D

And ok AS is talking abt Naku and D is out of order !
pagal kahin ka :P

He shjould have said it , she is mine mommy plz make her mine and what h say .

Wo mera khayal waise he rakhti hai

Dutta is gadha and that's a universal fact !

Omg ye gadha abhi kya kaha and now aagian romancing with naku !
Major saab needs control over him :P

Love their closeness :D

My teeths all out :D

I was like wooo !
somethingh is coming ,  I was enjotying the anticipation adnthe

Something comes

But not what I expected

Baajiii L

God

Hate him !
and then what comes precap

Hammie I am woried abt precap ab ganpat ko kya baat karne hai L

Wooo

Love the update hammie
!m,aza a gayaaa :D

Cant wait for more :D

Cuz ye dil maange aur :D