Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 3

Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

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Posted: 12 years ago

another beautiful part hammie..so now nakku has a chance to tame the rage and stubbornness in her lion and also to pike and ignite the fire in his heart by giving him 1on1 pshyio...ab dutta ka kya hoga..wo to humari nakku se bhaag bhi nahi sakta...loved it..continue soon

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 12 years ago

great part :)

loved reading it...duttas character is portrayed well ...and love the way u r developing the stry

well written :)

please continue soon ...

ps. srry for short comment dont have my lappy for 3weeks...sucks :( and commenting frm a phone is no fun lol ...so once i get my laptop back all co.mments will be longer ...until next update ciao :)

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update hamlet
like it

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 12 years ago

@ shilpita loved the pun yaar " bhaag nehi sakta haaa ha![ Mishal style larf] 😊 thanks for the comment x hammie

@ dg thanks for your comment mate..using the phone haila..really you have touched my dil❤️.. lappie less lass xx hammie

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@ivy_11

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautifully written and extremely well detailed, Hamlet👏

DSP, Baji, Naku, AS are all true to their character. ... AS + controlled hysteria😆

Now Naku will nurse Dutta back to health with TLC. We can expect an angry and exasperated Dutta, waiting to bite off people's--read Naku and Baji's 😉...head off.

Dutta😍..Miss him so much!

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Subii

@Subii

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb update hammie!

You seem to be quite familiar with the army graces.. very detailed update i must say..

Dutta's character is much similar to the actual show.. the same spark ,mental toughness, soft hearted, calm yet aggressive, quite etc etc although the profession is completely opposite to what he possessed in the show..

So finally nakku will have the pleasure to tame the lion.. wow! just cant wait to see how she gets under his skin.. and how he reacts to her love and care.

plz update soon!

thanks for the PM!

xxx

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Khoob phasaya dutta ko nd he deserves it😉.

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divya17-7

@divya17-7

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey Hamlet,

wow... amazing detailing dear... u have explained it so well, whether it is the army tussle scene or injury... u hav it in u too for writing... u r being modest by telling us u r not proficient in writing!!...

precap sounds very comic n romantic from N's side but loads of anger from D's side... he is already shouting for a male nurse!!... mm...

just loved it... keep pouring...

will eagerly look fwd to ur next update...

tc
divya

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 12 years ago

@ ivy thanks for your pm,and message on the postxx

@ brvr thanks for the pm+ message on postxx long live Mishal!

@ subii yes Fauj ka mania hai, you know valour ,shalour,discipline and uniform! we call it takhaa! in urdu!

@ divya glad you liked the detailing too,as I enjoy descriptive writing personallyxxx much luv hammie

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