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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved  da update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWSUM STORYLINE...I M JUST GONE THROUGH DIS...PLZZZ ADD ME ON UR PM LIST...WAITING FOR D NEXT ONE...SOONNN
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Nice concept.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update kaha hain??????????????maan sachmuch kya geet k sath betray kadne wala hain?or ye sirf geet ki galatfemi hogi??????????but ye bat sach hain ki maan jitne chalk hain geet utnahi buddhu.main parai ki bat nehi kad rahahu, pyar ki bat kadrahahu.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: paponecon

update kaha hain??????????????maan sachmuch kya geet k sath betray kadne wala hain?or ye sirf geet ki galatfemi hogi??????????but ye bat sach hain ki maan jitne chalk hain geet utnahi buddhu.main parai ki bat nehi kad rahahu, pyar ki bat kadrahahu.

 
 
 
well in lov no 1 is smart no one is week...its jst trust ..
geet trusted maan nw does he desrve her trust  lets c...
 
 
n will update monday ya tommm mujhe shoping jana hai bro ki marrige k liye!!
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amazing update...loved reading it.
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i m bACKK!! YIPEE Wil update soon i noe i m so bad lol makin u wait eheh par kya karoon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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DOSTON I M BACK!!

i have made u wait alot i m sorry kya karun sab kuch jaldi jaldi main hua! was bisi...shadi was fun! n i m starting anew ff also yipe!
btw i cnt wiat fr kal a epi😃😃😉 to much of bak bak nw here is ya updatee!
 
 
recap:

Dear diary
aaj main upar aasam necha ...
u noe kya kaha mera MAAN ne ki main ushke  jaan hun!!!...
.dairy! i hope dis nt a dream!
she was blushing at d table n jst blushin ...
PRENANA: geet y r u ok
GEET: yea mom i m 5n! i was neva betr...
she sounded so hapie n lost!
she wnt to her room played a romantic number on her

 i pod n slept thinking abt MAAN!
MERA maan..goshh it sounded so perfect!!!!

 

 

PART 4

 

 

Life was like a fairy tale

me and maan got elected as school head boy and head girl...
it was a feeling like he was d prince and i m his princess...
but somewhere i had doubts...it was weird y doubts?? i thought...
may b becuz during d class and lecutures he never looks at me...
bt thn in d recess he's a different maan ...i
ts like he is flaunting are relationship in front of d world ...
my thoughts were distracted whn he looked at me during the lecture and
 gave me dat killer smile...
and all my thinking came to a halt and mah expression was
hayeee!!!

 

maan and me were called by two teachers for some work...

and we felt the class in different direction...
while i was returning back to class i felt
two strng arms held me i was abt to shout b4 dat he covered mah mouth
 and i realized it was maan...
MAAn: shhh geet main hun...i turned my back and nw i was facing him...
all red...i was abt to leave whn he pulled me closer to him
mah breath constricted in my heart...this proximity was something i never experienced...
i slowly called out his name MAAN whch sounded more like a moan...
GEET: koi dekh lega..
MAAN: hmmm..
GEET: maan...
MAAN: mujhe dekhne do..
GEET: kyaa??
MAAN :
duniya ki sabse sundhar aakein
she could nt help..she blushed...
GEET: class k baad dekhna abh mujhe jane do plzzz....
he loosen his grip and set her free ...
all d while when they were romancing they failed 2 notice 2 eyes
which were staring them...
PARI was lik shockd...
MAAN dating woh..she was  so close close...woh bhe GEET...godd...
she couldnt belive after sometime...
pari got a chance to speak wid man she sat nxt 2 his seat..
PARI: wow u neva tld me u were dating geet!

his expresion changed...and he looked at geet she smiled back...
MAAN: wot??? did geet tld u...god...y...
pARI woo..
MAAN:
jst stup up...and the bell rang and school was over maan rushed to geet
pulled her and said..
MAAN:
y did u tell pari..
geet gave him a confuse looked n said wot did i said?
MAAN : jst shut up didnt u tld her u r mah gf..
GEET shockd :no i dnt maan ...
maan:geet dnt lie to me...jst go...jst go he demanded
she had tears in her eyes and he run frm dere...
maan was angry frustrated
pari...maan..
MAAN giv her look shut ya mouth

bt pari dnt care...maan SHE DNT TELL ME...her words stopd him...
PARI:woh actuly i was u both...wo b4 dis lec...
maan felt guilty...he ran his hand through his hair in frustration what have i done...
and he left

 

 

 

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COACHING CLASS!

 

geet avoided maan completely she dnt even looked at him once...she was hurt
she was accused for something she dnt did..
and wot if pari cam 2 noe...dey were dating ofcuz ppl around will come 2 noe
the class got over
geet jst started moving out...bt she felt a sudden pulll...widout seeing she said
GEET: leave me maan i dnt wana tok..
MAAN: plz listn to me
GEET:
did u listen to me ...NO na then y shuld i leave me plz..
MAAN: i dnt knw u dnt tell pari abt us..
GEET:
oh thnk god u believed bt d fact is MR.MAAN SINGH KHURANA

we r dating and wot happens if i tell sum1 also can u plz explain...
she mocked in anger
MAAN started in her eyes and said: i dnt lik public affection of lov...n u noe dat geet thn y...i noe m a jerk fool idot
GEET: dog.. duffer.. stupid... junglee... dhust danav...also
 

MAAN : haan woh bhe..i m sory..realy
 wil u giv ur maan a secnd chance
GEET: dnt mak dat puppy face u noe na ...i cnt help bt 4give u...
maan out of joy hugged her...
her cheeks were crimson red ...
he broke the hug..
MAAN: u r really nice..
GEET moved closer to him...very close dere cheeks were touching...
maan was shockd by her sudden moment...
and she slowly whispered in his ears...
GEET: and u r GAY..hahah wid that she started laughing...he tighten his grip around her and said GAY..

GEET: tho kya we r datin nw fr 1 month 7 days..and u have nt taken me fr a date...
MAAN: so dat makes me gay..
GEET: yea in mah language..nw if u wnt me 2 forgive u...
tak me 2 ice cream parlor nw! she ordered!
he couldnt help bt smiles and said As u wish mah princess!!

while on their way to ice cream parlor...
GEET: maan i wanted to ask u sumthing...
MAAN : looks at her and said shoot!
GEET woh u noe like...u noe..
MAAN: bolona
GEET: u noe ki ...wot abt me ..u noe made u askd me to be ya GF...
MAAN: hmmm wot made u say yes...
GEET: i askd 1st
MAAN : nw answer also 1st
she made a baby face and said...hmm its nt dat i LOVE u maan...

hmm bt dere is sumthing abt u...
u r hawt and al stuff is tho dere ...bt dere is a different attraction towards u...
i was never sure i'l say yes to someone so easily bt wid u it was all magical.
and i cannot deny dat!

MAAN: i dono wot made me asked u out...may b sam reason!

and dey continue chatting and finnaly reached HOCKEY POCKEY!

GEET: maan mujhe chocolate ice cream  wid topiing  chaheye

and tum hmm leme guess hmmm

MAAN: haan bolo bolo...
GEET: hmmm... VANILLA
MAAN: how do u noe i jst eat VANILLA???
GEET: is so simple u so boring tumhe plain plain stuff pasand honga...
i sure ur fav color is also white she said confidently
MAAN was shocked geet tum mind read karti ho kya???

she laughed: nhi maan jab koi aap k dil k kareeb ho tho unki pasand na pasand u cum to noe and she winked at him.

the waiter brought their orders

GEET: maan taste my ice cream na...
MAAN: nhi i dnt wnt i m hapie wid vanillaa...
she instead and placed the ice cream in front of his mouth and finally it was an ice cream fite...d  ice cream was on maan face and clothes
MAAN: GEET i wnt leave u fr dis and he started taking revenge buy applying ice cream on her ...dey were runing in d parlour like stupid and suddenly dey heard a voice
MAAN and then d other GEET and both look back and shockd
MAAN: DADI
GEET: NANI both said in union and look at each other


aap dono bacho ki tarah kya kar rahe hain woh bhe ek dusre par ice cream askd dadi
haan geet jawab do said nani

geet thought babaji aaj ka din he kharab hai phele pari abh nani main tho gaye.
wohh...nani ..he's my friend maan ..maan singh khuarna

NANI: satveri yeh tero potha hai??
dadi: haan ..mujhe tho pata he nhi tha ki humare grand children bhe friends hain!
maan apne kabhi bola nhi

MAAN: wo...wooo dadi kabhi chance he nhi mila ..yeh merii...meri frnd hai
DADI: yeh kya haal banaya hai tum dono ne chalo ghar chalo..

NANAI: haan geet tumhare mom ne dekh liya tho pata hai na kitna gussa hoge!
both geet and maan looked at each other wid a sad face and left in their repected cars!

while on d way hme
DADI: apne tho hume apke sare frnds k bare main batya hai tho geet k bare main kyun nhi
MAAN: dadi wo...bas mujhe imp nhi laga


while in geet's car
NANI: u lik him na
geet: babji yeh kyun ho raha hai mere saathh she thought and said nooo...no nani he's jst a frnd
NANI: beta i m ur nani...ohki wase he's gud looking and she winked at me...
i neva thought nani cn b so cool as mom said she was always strict wid her on d issue on male frnds
GEET jst hugged her said i love u nani!

NANAI: patted her head and said i love u too beta n let me b d 1st one who shuld knw ur feelings!
geet looked at her and nodded a yes!

 


PRECAP:
GEET: tumne dadi kho mujhe frnd bol kar kyun intorduce kiya??
MAAN thought fr a while...tumhne bhe tho mujhe frnd bola nani k samne


ohki frnds nxt precap is sad wid a shock and a kiss in d end!!!

nw hws it hope u like it!!!

leave long comments!!😳

wel i noe many of u were expecting
romance in the ice cream porlour
 bt soly woh main nhi kar sakti lol
story par effect karta hai😳😳
bt nxt up[date i m giving u a KISS!
so b hapieee
Edited by beautiful_life - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved da update
do continue