FF: U n me!! PART 4 pg 16 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update... waiting for next part... expecting something u know☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

U changed d story lil bit but i think copy paste mar de yaar story start karle jaha par chodi thi. . .lol. . See i m again reading d story.

i wantd 2 do d sam bt ek post new add kar k maaneet monemts i l copy d read parts n start new...
stry chnge nhi ki bas adition kari hai thodiii
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

awesome update...
n ha u add much more of geet maan once she know maans intentions... u didn't write much in old parts..

 
wel kyunki school days k bare main likhna is little boring heheh...bt i l add parts ki afta geet noeing d truth raectn unka 10 ka mks n ol dat
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!
Loveee the part!!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update yaar.
Maan in the story is typical attitudewala Maan as in the serial. He wants Geet to approach him first!!!
But as usual he is the one who tells her his love first. Hehehe...Maan thum bhi na!
Geet talks too much with her diary. Her diary has all her secret thoughts about Maan.
Lucky diary!!
Hey I laughed nonstop when i read that paisa aur tax wala dialogues. Bravo Geet...What a reply!
Loved the cute way of Maan asking Geet to become his Girl friend.
Awww...more romantic scenes to come!! Waiting eagerly for the next part. Chelsha.

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Posted: 12 years ago
What an attitude of Maan ...Nice update...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago

too romantic!! loved it

update soon!! 

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Posted: 12 years ago
luved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
both parts r superb
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm