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Ahams loss pt 7 on page 8 (Page 3)

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Sukji! How do you do it? You are a font of ideas. Love you story and the OS you had posted recently. You are great as usual.

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ok sukben, sorry for the late comment. Though i read it in the mornng, got busy. it was a good read!Clap
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@Sukben...The taming of Ahem Modi ...superb update.Thumbs Up
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Part 4 

Aham n parag walk through the  hospital grounds, dikra tell me what happened, papa I admit I went to see anita, when she called me I thought  I still owe this girl because of me kinjal life is in  ruin.  Well I went to meet her at the hotel  as I was going up the lift I saw Gopi my life just stood still then I saw mom,  papa I  never look down  as I am afraid of heights but when I saw gopi n the lift started to go up  I froze , as soon as I could I got out of the lift, Anita started to shout at me that I would choose this gawar over her, I realized she had called me out for revenge she said she called mom.  Papa I did not want to hurt Gopi for me I was meeting a  old friend.  Aham dikra I understand but let me ask you one thing if that had been you standing there n gopi going in that lift with someone else  how would you take that, papa I would be devastated, papa  when I saw gopi  she just stared at me  that is when I realized I did not love anita she was someone of the past but I am in love with Gopi n nobody else.

Aham  Gopi has a special place in my heart, you don't know this  but have you noticed I  have been giving gifts etc to kokila which I never did before Gopi came because I always forgot  but Gopi has been reminding me a day before hand, even though your mother is angry at me but my love for her hasn't changed. Papa what am I going to do to convince Gopi n mom, dikra its early days lets get kokila home. 

Gopi went home with parag n Aham, Hetal stayed with kokila,  back at mm Gopi goes into the bedroom  n takes all her clothes out of the wardrobe, Aham comes in Gopi what are you doing?   He holds Gopis hand to stop her she looks at him a look he has never seen before let go of my hand who are you to touch me? Aham lets go n steps back n looks at her, for the first time he  has seen Gopi angry.   Parag  comes in Gopi dikra  whats going on? Papa I will be in the guest room near to maji she needs me.  Ji dikra but beta she will call out to you?  Why are you leaving this room?  Gopi looks at him papa nothing of mine is in this room all I have had is hate so why should I stay here.  Parag looks at aham n shakes his head.   Aham says papa gopi can stay here I will leave.  Gopi looks at him its your room n I don't want to be here as it leaves a bad taste in my mouth, she leaves with all her things.  Walking towards the  guest room gopi sees the photo of her n aham on there wedding day she puts down everything walks towards it, looks at it picks it up n smash on the floor, aham n parag  come running in front of them Gopi picks up the photo n rips it up, aham gets a flashback of when he had done the same  it was if a knife  was plunged into his heart.  Parag  goes over Gopi why have you done that? Papa it was already done  its better I come to terms with this,  as soon as maji is better I will be leave.  Nahi dikra you cant leave  no papa I had come back to say goodbye to everyone yesterday  n get my mother n fathers photo, maji is the only reason I am staying  as soon as she is well I will  be leaving, n I will not  be ever coming back.

Aham  stands there in tears how will he get gopi to forgive him, he cannot let her go,  Gopi goes n puts everything in the guest room  the photo she puts up is of her parents n kokila n parag.  Parag looks at aham ,dikra  she has suffered a lot you can understand her anger, Aham nods  n goes back to his room n looks into the half empty wardrobe. 

Kokila leaves the hospital after a few days she  was weak, Aham felt helpless as the two women in his life no longer wanted to know him.  He call for Gopi he gets marni she would always say that Gopi bhabi is busy.    Aham decides he has to do something, then flashback, Gopi told Stanley that she has a habit of waking up early so she could pray he smiles.  In the morning aham wakes up very early n goes downstairs gopi was  cleaning the mandir for the puja aham decides to help her, she looks at him but doesn't say anything.  Gopi finished cleaning then the whole family comes down n notices aham there.  Gopi starts to sing  aham stands beside her n holds the thali gopi moves her hand across.   Once finished  aham takes the thali n goes round to the family, when kokila comes she looks at him n turns her face gopi comes over maji this is  gods blessing  why are you angry at takur ji its not his fault. Kokila looks at Gopi n smiles n takes the blessing Gopi  leaves to go to the kitchen.   Kokila looks at parag Gopi is right just because you are angry at a person you should not take your anger out on god parag smiles.  Aham goes n puts thali back. 

At the dining table Gopi put breakfast out,  everyone starts to eat kokila  says to gopi come n eat Gopi says ji n sits down as usual the food was good, everyone complimented, Aham looks at Gopi the food is excellent  I feel like having more, Gopi looks over to kokila, Maji I am full plse may I be excused kokila looks over to her plate still full Gopi  you haven't even touched your food yet, ji maji all of a sudden I am not hungry,  kokila looks at her ji Gopi.  Aham also stops eating  hetal n chirag looked concern, Marni  go take gopis food to her room.  Ji nani bhabi.  Mota bhabi  where is Rashi? I haven't seen her, kokila leave it I will tell you when you are fully recovered.

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged
Stanley?! That was a good concept!

Well done Sukk! - this comment is for part 3.

I just realized part 4 is out!


Edited by -Sonia-xx - 14 May 2011 at 5:31am
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Wow ,...really nice...far far better than on screen drama:)
waiting for next episode:)

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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Wonderful Suk Ben. I loved every second of it

I like to see Ahem squirm a little. It's satisfying to read

Please to be updating soon

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Naya update kab niklega? Waiting eagerly Suk!

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