In The Middle - Kriyansh FF - Discontinued (P.20) - Page 14

BTW guys... it's been exactly a month since i started this FF... Edited by Sheherzade - 12 years ago

wow fantastic...that was really good

Luv itt... D car scene between kriyaansh is awesommee..i cn actually imagine d scenes..😳..btw i really luv d vishal track he iz addin lyk..thrillin effect 2 the story.. Thou i dnt lyk him... 😈 ... Do update it soon dude... !!   😃

LOL sorry! Okay in my defense, your posts include my mistakes and I couldn't find any mistakes, hence my posts are shorter!! :D

i LOVED THAT CAR SCENE and yaar that was a really good ending PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY VARNE MEIN INTEZAR KARTE KARTE THAKJAONGE! HAHHA loved it a lot and congrats on your one month anniversary 🥳

pm me too...its lovely...awesome...!!!

its ok sabra ka phal meetha hota hain...I knw whn u'll post u'll post something bombastic

awesome update...vishal is gud but kria is 4 rey only...!!!this is my opinion but u rock man

Loved the update!
I love how somewhere Kria knows that Rey and the other dazzlers will never do something bad to a person, they can be mean but they can't hurt somebody like that...
I really hope she won't believe Vishal.
And I loved the little interaction between Rey and Vicky, they are just so amazing! 😳
Waiting for the next part Pree 😃

WOW! as usual...

i love it...i just love reading ur ff...is so good...

i just loved the convo that jriyaansh had about dehadun...so sweet sharing their memories...

and i also liked how swayon is so caring towards kriya...really sweet of him:)

Also i m actually liking vishal being there...i m just dying to know
what happened between him and the dazzlers? btw who is paying vishal?

also i liked the bit where u write about hw vicky knw everything that rey does...that shows true friendship...

i loved everyhting except 2 things:
1... it was not a long update
2...u updated after such a long time...