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love can never b easy part 2 pg 5 upt 18th may (Page 5)

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 8:01am | IP Logged
hey!!!!!Clap
 this was a really nice part, so pia have a *TERRIBLE* pastOuch... a man eating hr brotherShocked...who was that manConfused ... i hope the mysteries solve soonApprove...continue soon and thanks fr the pmHeart

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
        accidents
eating him or doing somthing with his teeth teering and sucking making noises wen paul did when he ate his dog food
...
for a moment pia was frozen the whole world had changed and everything seemed like dreamthen she heard somebody screaming then she heard sumone screaming and her throat hurt and she knew it was her 

and the tall man looked at her

he lifted his head and looked at her and she knew that his face alone was going to give her nightmares forever

not that he was ugly . but he had hair as red as blood and eyes that shone like gold like an animal there was a  light in them she had ever seen 

she ran then she knew it was wrong to leave angad but she was too scared to stay she wasnt brave ;she was a baby bu she couldnt help it she was still screaming as she turned around and darted through the flap in the tent 


almostdarted through her head and shoulders got outside and she saw the red plastic rising above her --- and then a hand clamped on the back of her sweat shirt a big strong hand that stopped her in midflight pia was helpless as a baby kitten against it 


but as she was dragged back into the tent she saw something her mother was coming around the corner of the of the climbing structure she heard pia screaming 

her mother's eyes bcome big and her mouth was open and she was moving fast  she was cuming 2 save pia 


mommeee!
pia screamed and she was back inside  the tent the man threw her to one side the way a kid at preschool would  throw a  crumbled paper  in  bin pia landed hard and felt pain her leg which wd normally made her cry now she hardly noticed it she was starring at angad who was lying on the gound near her





angad looked strange his body was like a rag dolls arm and legs flopped out his skin was white his eyes were staring straight up at the top of the tent 


there were two big holes in his throat with blood all around them

pia whimpered she was too frightend to scream  anymore  but just  then she saw  white daylight and a figure in front of it mommy mommmy was pulling the tent flap open mommy was inside looking around for pia 




that was when the worst thing happen  the worst and the strangest thing happen the thing police never believed when pia told police later







pia  saw her mother mouth open saw her mother looking at her  about to say something  and she heard  a voice  but it wasnt mommy voice


and it want an out loud voice it was inside her head 
wait ! there s nothing wrong here but u need to stand very still 


precap  past






Edited by mangona - 18 May 2011 at 1:39am

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
ohh nice partClapClap
cant wait to find out moreLOL
update soonWink
thanks for the pmBig smile

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mansim

ohh nice partClapClap
cant wait to find out moreLOL
update soonWink
thanks for the pmBig smile
ur welcum its not complete yet
mansim Senior Member
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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mangona

Originally posted by mansim

ohh nice partClapClap
cant wait to find out moreLOL
update soonWink
thanks for the pmBig smile
ur welcum its not complete yet
hey i was commenting on the first partLOLLOL
guess i was lateLOL
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
interesting..i'd like to know who this voice is..i think it's the person who will make her vampy slayer. LOL
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by IndigoBlues

interesting..i'd like to know who this voice is..i think it's the person who will make her vampy slayer. LOL
the  person whose voice is this wil b reveled much later
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged
hmmm nice update dude... interestin.. Piya was wonderful.. poor thing.. had such a horrid past.. update soon.. and thanks for the pm.!! 

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